Book 3 FF:Till the End of Time (book4 link: pg 148)

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Disha

@FantasyFan_8

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Posted: 13 years ago

#251

what an update Tanzie. i m simply out of words reading so much passion. ☺️

poor pan and pancakes 😉 😆

i wonder what will happen between mohini, aryan, amber now and will jeh and alina reach there on time and save peehu? 😕

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Sheena

@Abhiya-gunner

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Posted: 13 years ago

#252

Tanzie amazing update☺️

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anjali

@adnilover

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Posted: 13 years ago

#253

wowww Tanzie!!!!!!!!!!!!👏 I have run out of words of praise. Each and everytime, your update just blows me away⭐️. All I have to ask is when are you publishing your first book? I loved Abhiya's honeymoon😳. Delayed but worth the wait😳. Piya sure knows how to manipulate her man into submission. The jealousy way works wonders but this new way is sooo much better😃. Abhay didnt even have a clue. I love this romantic AR!!!😳 They deserve happiness after going through so pain. I want their paradise to continue forever. 😊

Precap sounds super!😊 I want the brothers back together against Ragini. And Aryan will really need support with all that is happening with Peehu. He will be so heartbroken. I dont want him to be hurt. Will Alina take Peehu's place in his heart to heal him??

Do update soon Tanzie. Will be waiting🤗

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Mandy

@BeyondHorizon

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Posted: 13 years ago

#254

Tanzie I had kept a tab on ur replies wanting to res the 1st spot but missed it by a matter of 2 mins 😭

Coming to the update what can I say? ☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️

I read it while I was in office just before going for lunch n I couldn stop it in between so asked my friends to carry on 😆 n I ate alone later 😉

According to me the best part of the update was Peehu Alina confrontation. Superb 👏 The way they could connect to each other's pain was so beautiful 😳 Hats off to u for that 👏 Its hard for Alina to help save the woman who is the bane of her life - a woman who will always stand in her path to the man she loves n the one who is bearing his child Still she is selfless enough to keep her hatred aside n nurse an ailing Peehu 😭 Another person in her place would have left her to die or maybe not bothered to help her if not harm her Peehu on the other hand only wants the safety of her children n Aryan's happpiness 😭 I admit she was being selfless here but she brought it on herself 😡 I agree many forces were at work to keep them apart n a lover may desert her man but how could a wife desert her husband? Thats no excuse on Peehu's part 😡 She should have trusted in Aryan's love for her. She may have left him bcoz she loved her family more than him or bcoz her clan threatened to harm him. But as a wife she had to stand by him as his pillar of support not walk out on him like a coward 🤢 If not for Aryan then atleast when she knew abt her pregnancy she should have come back to him rather than jeopardise hers n her children's lives I do feel bad for her but there's no denying that she wrought it upon herself 😭

Now that Jeh knows Alina is alive n well bcoz of Abhay hope he realises his he's headed the wrong way in life 😊

Coming to Abhiya ☺️ ermmm(clearing throat ☺️) I am surprised my lappy is in one piece 🤣 Mind u it was my office lappy n had it got burnt they would have deducted my salary 😆 Pia had once stolen Abhay's shirt like bheegi billi but can now flaunt it off like a sherni 🤣 Abhay cooking for her was like a quintessential sweet hubby 😳 n man I pity the burnt pancakes n kitchen for having to bear the brunt of Abhiya's passionate assault 🤣 ☺️ The blood exchange part was hot n sensual too ☺️ Well this bit I am afraid I cant go into details 😆 I can say I have lost count of the blushing smileys I have used here ☺️ 😆 Gosh but I'll say one thing for sure. Hats off to u Tanzie 👏 Only u can write such a passionate update n pull it off as an act of love not lust 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

Precap sounds exciting 😃 Haaye mere Ram Lakshman ki jodi ko kisi ki nazar na lage 😳 Brilliant work as always Tanzie n please heed the request of many of ur readers n publish a book dear 😃 Will look forward to it. 🤗

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Rashmi

@Rashu1505

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Posted: 13 years ago

#255

*faint *tanzie me in icu gosh☺️ ☺️ ☺️ poor pancakes 🤣 atyachar hua unpe kya galti thi unki 🤣 abhiya wild cats 🤣 tanzie if we reach hospital any day na u will be responsible seriously how can u write such hot updates and after that u can sleep becoz after reading this we are not able to sleep
lol see big comment btw song ha bheege hoth tere Rk ka fav song 🤣

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flora212

@flora212

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Posted: 13 years ago

#256

i am so unlucky i am not in first page this time. ..but no worrys next time better luck!!!!

ok now stopping my bakwass...coming to such wonderful update!!! i like it...no infact i love it...ah kya update diya he tanzie...

i loved the convo btw peehu and alina...i am loving the triangle of peehu, alina, aryan!!! par phir bi i want aryan and alina...anyways lets see what happens... now our dear abhiya!!!! gosh that was burning red hot passonate update...actually i always read ffs from my mobile...so i was insecure about my mobile if it gets burnt but thank god it didnt...

so was it abhiya's honeymoon??? well whatever it was u did it great!!!

now the last part mohini...she came to riachand house!! now i am sure it will be interesting to read next part and last and least jeh saw alina...i hope now he understand the evil side of mohini!!!

i want to kiss ur hand fr such a beutiful update....update soon!!!

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Ayesha khan

@abhiya4evr

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#257

it was a superb n awsome blossom update 👏 ☺️

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Ayesha khan

@abhiya4evr

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Posted: 13 years ago

#258

haila tanzi whats that 😲 u cant do this to us just because of a stupid ,moron etc etc etc plz cont. ur ffs its a reqst

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Indu

@Paint.It.BlacK.

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#259

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wat shud i say tanzie...?!!! your updates always leave me in a trance like state...where i can feel but can't express it in words...!! ur magnificient work just steals away my power of expressing things...!!!! now i feel hard to comment in ur updates..as i cant use the same old words everytime,wen you always manage to deliver us such marvellous piece of writing...!!!! 😳

it was dexterously beautiful..splendidly awesome...this is how i wud like to explain this update...⭐️ when it comes to writing you are a gem tanzie!!...truly...!!!! that's all i can say...😊

now coming to the update...

the way you described the pride,love,care,posessiveness, devotion,dedication,sacrifice... of a woman/wife through peehu n alina was just wonderfull...!!!! 👏n then alina melting n assuring her to save them was truly remarkable...!!!! 👏 it held such deep meaning...wonderfull! ⭐️

and now about abhiya...

hmm...here it was another brilliant piece of writing...!!! 👏do i need to say anything else?!!! the way you explained their passion,longing,love,pain was outstanding!!!! it no more looked as mere words on screen but was soo...lively,spontaneous...vibrant !!!! the way you depicted their emotions ...was again a memorable piece of work!!!! ⭐️

here i would like to mention two lines--- (from my memory,so cud b bit wrong) 'the love the passion he held for her was nowhere near Normal' n another one -where pia says that she is her wife n therefore shud have an equal share n his happiness n pain.both' i loved this two parts the most,as it echoed the love,faith,longing,craving,devotion they held for eachother...!! 👏

now last but not the least... Mohini!!! wow!!! she comes n makes an entry just like her!!! i wonder wat will b her next move...hope peehu gets well soon n they could stop mohini frm doing further damage...!

and jay saw alina...! so does that hint towards a truce btwn abhay n jay...?!! just wondering...

overall favulous update...!!!!

and am very very sorry for commenting late dear ,please please forgive me...i know you wnt say anything even if u'r angry,but plzz pardon me..actually i read the update the very moment i received the pm but i was busy that tym n later i just forgot! i sincerely apologise for that.. so plzz dont mind...

p.s. and now am excited for the next update as i guess there are lots of action scenes comingup,so plzz if possible update soon...thanks for the pm n tkcre...🤗

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Rumki

@rumki34

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Posted: 13 years ago

#260

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What an update Tanzie☺️. It is sweet, hot, passionate😳 yet beautiful. Abhay made breakfast 4 Pia...this is the most beautiful and loving scene 4 a wife. Hmmm Pia is indeed intelligent to bring the wild side out of Abhay😆😳. And poor pancakes and pan🤣...they got brunt😲🤣 and Abhiya hadn't even noticed🤣. I think poor kitchen will burn after sometime🤣

Alina Peehu part was very touching. Alina helped peehu though she is Aryan's wife carrying his child...both the women are selfless. Peehu is very sick...what will happen to her? Hope she wont die😕

Finally Jeh saw Alina😃. Hope now he wont do any harm further but damage is already done

Finally Mohini came to take the babies😲 and you stopped right there🥺...now cant wait 4 next part. do update soon
😆

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