New joint ff-: Broken paradise note on pg 81 - Page 24

Originally posted by: shria

suprb update girls...!!😛
☺️☺️☺️ suhagrat☺️☺️☺️
piya now is pregnent😲so fast😆 but loved it😉
that jr raichand line said by abhay was too cute😳
continu soon😆

Originally posted by: piggi_Babes

awsom stooory... i lovd it kip it uppp... da romance shown in dis waz amazingg😳... i lovd it👏 thnx 4 da PM...

Originally posted by: -juhi-lily-

awesome parts romi

so pia is prego wow!!

Originally posted by: Saayaniz

Its just awesomeee Romi & Rosh👏 !!! tum dono ne Abhay ko...😆...lol lol lol ! honeymoon se pahle hi Piya prego ??? honeymoon me kya karega bechara ?🤣??? lolzzz besharam Raichand😆but I loved this besharam Raichand😉

Originally posted by: .tanu.

Awesome update⭐️Abhiya's sr was very romantic☺️I liked how they were teased by Tara and Varun. So Pia is pregnant😃Right now Abhay can't stay away from Pia for a moment but I'm already worried about what will go wrong. Cont asap n thx for pm😊

Originally posted by: abhiya_kapi

Wow Romi and Roshni. Maazzaa aa gaya yaar itna bada update padh ke. Romi you have really become my inspiration now for new ff. 😛

I've got some emotional words from your chapter, which I think I'll use in my new ff, sometimes later.😳

Specially this one.

"<font color="#000000">both of their tongue danced in the tune of raw passion and love. As soon as both their lips met and tongues met, both started getting tied up in a more and more passionate kiss.</font>"

Awesome very passionate scene you wrote Romi. I was blushing here when Abhay and Piya started romancing. ☺️

Roshni your dialogues for Abhay and Piya were phenomenal for me. Good job Roshni. 👍🏼

Originally posted by: cutesukirti1987

😉 awesome update!
Abhiya hav started a new chapter of life nd piya s pregnant too 😃
lovved d sisterly bonding b/w piya n tara and brotherly bonding b/w abhay n varun!
But i tink this all happiness s just a silence before d storm.Am i right?
Coz this s what d title n prologue suggests.
Continue soon!

Originally posted by: mandy1024

First n foremost sorry for the late reply guys That was an awesome update. I really loved it.

Romi yaar their suhaag raat was hawt ☺️ but aesthetic n beautiful at the same time, juts like how the union of 2 soulmates should be. Dont know wat else to say. Everything was written very well especially the part where Varun teases them n hands them the gift was so beautiful 😳 I am loving Varun n Tara 😊 though I never saw much of Monaya as SaJan in MJHT I love them as Varun Tara. They r so cute n adorable 😊

Coming to the next part, Roshni u have written it very beautifully. Just like what happens in every other household. Sometimes these rouitnes also seem to be a very important part of life. The part where a newly wed Abhiya who couldn stand to be apart even for a day was depicted very nice. It was realistic as well 😳 The love n passion never lets them be apart atleast not in the initial few days of their marriage. WOW Pia is already pregnant but after having read the prologue I fear something might go wrong

Continue soon girls n fab job 👏