New joint ff-: Broken paradise note on pg 81

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Mrs.mohit sehgal

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Posted: 13 years ago

#241

Originally posted by: Pari-Gupta
awesome update
loved it
so Piya is pregnant wow
cont soon
thanks for the pm

Thanks a lot pari 😃 Glad u loved it , yep piya pregnant 😉 We will conti soon , welcome

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Mrs.mohit sehgal

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Posted: 13 years ago

#242

Originally posted by: spn-abhay
awesum update👏
totally romantic
wow pia pregnanat
continue sooon
thanx 4 pm

Thanks a lot dear , glad u like it , yep piya pregnant

We will conti soon , welcome 😃

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Mrs.mohit sehgal

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Posted: 13 years ago

#243

Originally posted by: sofia2
sorry fr late rply. i was too busy.btw great update.

Thanks a lot dear and no worries for late reply 😃

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Mrs.mohit sehgal

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Posted: 13 years ago

#244

Originally posted by: vampireking
👏hatts off to your work !!!👏👏 👏!👏👏👏 work !!!👏👏 👏!👏👏👏 👏 👏

i mean the way yu express the abhiya feeling its breathtakingly amazing !!!!
and the varun tara bond !!!is really superb !!!i mean the way you expreess their nauk jhok it just awesome !!

thanku so much for writing such a nice ff and giving us the breathless sughrat !!!!😳coz of your update my room temperature get really hottt
you both rocked together !!
awesome 👏👏 👏👏
amazing 👏👏 👏👏
superb 👏👏 👏👏
fantastic 👏👏 👏👏 👏👏
the next i will tell you when i will remeber it !!!!
offcourse dil mange more next time more big update you know naa how much greedy i am when it comes to good sorry fantastic ff haha😆😆my patience level will be ZERO !!HAHA
i hope you will update soon !!!!!!ghadi aage challlo !!!!!yaar aur kitna tarpaygi jaldi update karna haha😆

i have many question in my mind coz of this ff !!!!plzz do unfold the mistory otherwise the fuse of my mind will burst hhaaha😆😆
update soon otherwise i will going to make you fall i the ocean of ...😭😭
btw you both are sick😆 am i really talking to those lazyness ki dukhan😆 i mean tumne itna badda update kar kaise diya😲 !!!!i will going to faint right now help me help me haha😆!!!!

Thanku so so so so so soo much dear , for your lovely comment means a lot to me and Romi 🤗 🤗 🤗 Gal u liked it sooo much , all because of Romi and Varun tara are very good friends and they always ha a fun time toghther , u will get more Varun Tara nok jhoks , your oo temperature getting hot all becuse of Romi 😎 Glad u liked our combination and thanks for all the compliments dear , I know dil maage more but dil toh baccha hai ji 😆 We will try to give a longer upd par Hamara lazy level zyada hai 😆 Gaadi mein petrol bhar chuka hai , jaldi aage badegi , mystery itni jaldi unfold nai hogi thoda toh tadpana bata hai , itna bada upd hamne thoda thoda likh kar Kiya 😆 Doctor bulao ? 😆 We will conti soon dear , thanks again dear 😃

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Mrs.mohit sehgal

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Posted: 13 years ago

#245

Originally posted by: ayesha4abhiya
romin rosh sorry yars..because i can,t comment from my sis id aish.naksh n now i comment from my id...so forgive me because meri sis wala res res hi rahega..mai is say comment kar deti hu...

Lovely update..loved it..
Abhiya SR was hot n romantic..😳 😳 😳...
abhiya cut movements r awesome..
rosh kay tara and varun r nice...
loved it..piya is pregnant lol...itni jaldi leap aur us kay baad pg😳..
abhay is a great husband...
w8 4 read the reason beside prologue...
abhiya rock yar...w8 4 when piya tells abhay that she is pg😳..
plzz continue soon as possible..

It's ok u commented tat means a lot to us ,

Glad u loved it dear 😃

All because of Romi 😳

Yeah abhiya r cute indeed 😉

Afterall woh mere Tara and Varun aka monaya hai 😆

I know thoda jaldi hogaya but it was imp 😊

U will know after sumtime

Well let's see if piya tells or not ,

We will conti soon ASAP 😊

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Romita

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Posted: 13 years ago

#246

Chapter 3
part a
(written by me)
After collecting her reports from reception and listening to all do's and dont's during this initial stage, both tara and piya decided to drive home back.
Tara wanted to drive herself as driving is not good at this period for piya, but piya explained her that this was her initial stage, so she can drive and tara agreed reluctantly, as having no other way.
Piya was driving and tara was sitting beside her playing with her mobile phone as she knew that while piya drives she doesn't talk much as she concentrates on driving mainly because she is not a expert in it, on the otherhand since the doctor have told them the good news piya can't stop blushing, she has started dreaming of the time when abhay will come back and she will tell the good news to him, then when the baby will be born how perfect their life will be, but all of a sudden she started feeling nervous and started sweating, she herself doesn't know wht but she can't stop thinking how will abhay react after knowing this news she knows he will be happy deep inside her heart but still she can't stop thinking other ways too like, will he want to be a father so soon, what if he react badly? What if he doesn't want to take this responsibilty of a father so soon? Will he leave her? All this question were surrounding piya's mind, suddenly she felt that her vision was blurring, she realised it's due to the tears that have spilled out unknowingly from her eyes, she suddenly applied hard break, making herself coming out of her own thoughts and bringing tara's attention back from her mobile phone.
Tara-: dii, what happened? Why are u crying? di u are alright na, let me drive di, plz tell something.
piya wiped her tears and smiled a bit.
piya-: nothing star, I was just thinking something.
tara-: dii, I know u must be thinking about jiju na, u are missing him right?
piya-: yea star I am missing him, star what do u think how will abhay react after knowing about this baby, he will be happy na?
tara-: dii, what are u thinking? How could u think like that, jiju loves u a lot and when he will know this news he will be in seventh heaven trust me, don't cry thinking all those negative things di, u need to stay cheerful during this period, now give me a big smile.
piya realised that whatever tara was saying was perfectly correct, how could she doubt abhay's love for her, now she is sure that abhay will be happy only and this thought brought a sweet shy smile on her lips.
piya-: yea star u are right how could I even think like that, infact how can I forget how much he loves baby's, I don't know from where all those thinking came in my mind, so stupid I am.
Tara-: dii, it's not ur fault, the doctor said na, during this period negative thinking is common, just chill di and yea be happy always, u look good while smiling only.
Piya-: (smilingly and showing a fake shocking expression) star, when did u grow up so much? U became more intilligent than me.
Tara-: (pouting)dii, I was always more intilligent than u, u only didn't identify the star in ur star.
saying this both the sisters laughed whole heartedly and shared a sisterly hug, after that both drove back to Raichand mansion as tara decided to stay there for few days till abhay comes back as varun was busy in office works and moreover no woman except some servants were there in raichand mansion, and during this time piya needs lot of care which can be done by womens only, as mans can be caring but a woman can understand another woman much better, and also piya should not be alone this time as it may make her depressed or gloomy and more than a sister who can be a good companion and she was both best friend and sister together of piya so it would be better is she stays with her for somedays as she was missing her dii a lot too.
Raichand mansion
After driving for 20 minutes, finally tara and piya reached raichand mansion. As soon as piya entered she found mr and mrs dobriyal sitting in the couch.
piya-: mom dad, u both are here, when did u both came here, u should have called me na, and yea I need to tell u something that...
Before piya could continue tara interruped,
tara-: dii, mom dad knows I told them before only, actually mom was hell worried for u knowing u are sick, she was calling me frequently so, I told her as soon as doctor told that u are pregnent.
piya now remembered how since few days she was feeking sick and then morning sickness since yesterday, while abhay was going too, before two days, she was feeling unwell that time too but she didn't tell him anything about her health because she knew very well that knowing she is unwell abhay will never go for his business meeting which was vital for their company to finalise the biggest project of theirs.
suddenly, she felt someone hugging her which brought her out of her own chain of thoughts, she looked towards her mother, who was hugging her and was murmering something.
mrs. Dobriyal-: piya, I am so happy for u beta, u are going to be a mother soon, now u have to understand all yr responsibilities and have to learn to take care of urself and ur child.
piya-: mom, u are there na, u will teach me everything, and with ur blessings I will be the best mother like u.
Madhu-: offcourse beta, I will tell u everything I know, and I am sure u will be a great mother, better than me also.
Arnab-: arre I am there too piya, u both forgot me.
Madhu smiled and left piya and piya went and hugged arnab.
piya-: papa how can I forget u, I am very happy today.
Arnab-: piya, I can't believe my little piya is going to be a mother, I feel like yesterday only I took u home from nursing home and I still remember the way u cried, smiled and always wanted to be in my lap. My baby doll grew up so much, I am very happy for u beta, I am going to be a grand father, I feel so happy.
piya wiped her tears which escaped from her eyes while her father was telling and expressing his happiness now piya realised abhay will feel same too, she hugged arnab tightly and arnab blessed her.
Both arnab and madhu were feeling happy and emotional at the same time, which was making piya emotional too.
Suddenly tara spoke out.
tara-: mom dad, u both are showering all ur love on di, what about me, u all forget me(pouting)
Piya-: tara, how can we forget u, our star, come here. Tara joined too and they shared a big family hug.
After that, dobriyals decided to leave accept tara, as she will stay with piya for few days, but after piya's insistence all did lunch together and mrs. dobriyal prepared all piya's favourite which she ate happily and finally on evening dobriyals left.
San francisco
Hotel Ritz-Carlton
Abhay who was sitting outside the conference room and waiting for his manager to come and Inform him about mr. dhanraj arrival, looked at the clock, he saw the clock wad abt to strike 3:00 that means 5 minutes left for the meeting, he was feeling a bit nervous, he switched on his laptop and began to check his work once again, suddenly his cell buzzed, showing new msg, he looked at the sender id and it was piya's message. A big smile crept on his face. All his nervousness went away, he immediately opened and read it, It was written
'Abhay, I miss u a lot, love u baby, waiting for ur reply'
Abhay smiled and replied' I am missing u too sweet heart, Now I am going for meeting, I will call u after that. Love u too.'
piya replied 'okk best of luck and I know deal will pass'.
Abhay saw piya's message again and replied, 'I know baby till ur wishes are there it will, bye.'
Abhay was waiting for piya's reply but danish, his manager came and informed him about mr.dhanraj arrival, abhay immidiately left from there and went towards the conference room.
Raichand mansion, india
piya read abhay's reply and she replied back 'bye' too with a heart shape icon and waited for his reply but no reply came, she understood abhay must have left for meeting. Piya was feeling hell boring so decided to watch a movie and spend time meanwhile tara joined her too.

Edited by Rmuk - 13 years ago

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Romita

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Posted: 13 years ago

#247

part b
(written by roshni)
Soon both the sisters slept while watching the movie . After almost half an hour Varun returned from the office , he didn't knew anything about piya being pregnant and Tara being home so he simply came home .
Varun : I m home bhabhi . ( no reply ) bhabhi where r u ? ( still no reply )
Varun went up to see if piya is alright but he saw tat a movie was going , Tara was sleeping in piya's lap while piya was sleeping on Tara's head and half eaten food and drinks were , he laughed seeing the cute sight and thought of doing a lil mischief .
He took pen from his pocket and made moustache on Tara's face and then increased the volume of tv which woke up both the sisters .
Tara : u mad Varun , itna volume kyu Badhya ? Can't u see u were sleeping
Varun: woh Sab chohdo , wat u doing her here ? Jab dekho yaha par aa jati ho , tell me madhu mom throws u out of house every 2 week ?
Tara : just shut up Varun
Just then piya saw Tara's face started laughing hardly and Varun also started laughing seeing tara's confused expression
Piya while laughing : Varun u ?
Varun knodded his head still laughing and gave a high five to piya .
Tara : will u tell me wats wrong ?
Piya : tara Varun made a moustache n your face !
Tara : what ! Varun I will kill u
Varun : yeah yeah in your dreams .
Soon Tara started running behind Varun to hit him while Varun defending himself by throwing everything over Tara , piya was laughing during the whole scene , just then abhay's call came , piya got excited and went out of room to pick it up .
Piya highly excited : hey abhay !
Abhay : So my princess sounds very happy today !
Piya : yep , m very very very happy
Abhay : but why ?
Piya : I won't tell u now , ghar aao phir only .
Abhay : suspense creator raichand huh ? Waise I hav got an excellent news piya
Piya : kya ?
Abhay : deal is final ! I m sooo happy piya , our hard work impressed them a lot and u know they didn't thought once before signing the deal saying they would feel honoured joinging us !
U r the sunshine of my life piya I can't explain how happy I m
Piya : that's really great abhay , I can't believe this . Your mom dad must be sooo proud of u right now abhay .
Abhay : yeah , I m miss them sooo much waise piya plss tell na wat good news got ? mcant wait
Piya : no abhay , I will not waise when r leaving from there ?
Abhay : few things r still left piya sooo tomorrow afternoon I will leave from here and at night in your arms . Waise waha Kya ho raha ?
Piya : nothin Varun and Tara fight as usual .
Abhay : Accha piya have to go on dinner with associates , miss u baby I love u
Piya : I love u too abhay , bye
Abhay : bye jaanu .
Then piya went inside the room an found an over happy Varun cause Tara just told him about piya being pregnant . Varun hugged piya tightly
Varun : I m soo happy bhabhi , I m gonna be chachu soon , can't believe it . U r the treasure of happiness bhabhi .
Piya : thanku soo much Varun , I m soo happy my kid is gonna hav such an amazing chachu
Tara : he is gonna hav a wonderful masi too di !
Piya : ha woh bhi !
Varun : btw chashmish u went to college today ? I was sooo busy in office today .
Tara : I only attended the first half cause then di called so I went .
Piya : Varun why didn't u go to college today ? It's very imp don't neglect studies like tat , and I will handle everything in office tomorrow like always u go to college , is tat clear?
Varun : but bhabhi in such condition ? I won't let u
Piya : oh common Varun it's initial stage only and waise bhi I go everyday to office only today I didn't go , going office is in my routine .
Varun : ok fine
NEXT DAY
It was an evening time and piya was eagerly waiting for abhay to come , Varun and Tara both were studying upstairs , piya was getting nervous now cause soon abhay will reach home and she has to tell him about her pregnancy , she was feeling anxious now and every minute passed like a month , so she called abhay
Piya : abhay where r u ? Kitni der mein aaogay ? Abhay : on the way piya , reaching in 2 hours . Everything okay ?
Piya : yes abhay it's just tat I was missing u
Abhay : mee to sunshine and when I reach home I want a kiss from your rosy lips .
Piya : and agar na mili toh ? Abhay : I will snatch it !
Piya : yeah yeah , we will see chalo Ab phone rakho abhay , don't talk while driving
Abhay : ok bye piyu , see u soon love u...
ps-: guys next part updated, we both wrote it in one go so mistakes may be there. Hope it'd not hell boring. Plz give ur precious comments and hit like button if u like it.
Love u all from both of us

Edited by Rmuk - 13 years ago

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chandni

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Posted: 13 years ago

#248

wow lovely update finally abhiya married..😃

humm abb jarur gadbad start hone vali he..
and rosh tumara yaha mohit love foot foot e dikh raha he..🤣🤣

continue soon dear..and romi dont u dare abhiya ko zyada separate rakha to .😡.😆

Edited by TeDylove - 13 years ago

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@_Chits_

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Posted: 13 years ago

#249

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no no guys it's not at oll boring...

it was a great update...

i did feel sad on not seeing abhiya...but it's k...

m sure next update ve'll get to see lots of abhiya...

but m olso sure ki un two hrs mein tum log kuch gadbad karne walen ho...!!!

kuch mat karna plz...atleast abhay ko itni achi news to sunne dena...

update soon...

itna suspense acha nahi hota...😆

well...eagerly waiting for next update...😊

luv u both...😆

Edited by abc123chiti - 13 years ago

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Renu

@abhiya_kapi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#250

Unres.

So sorry to comment so late, was busy with the update. 😕
Now coming to your update.
It was not boring, it was an awesome update. 👏 Aww that Piyu nick I simply loved it. 😳 😉 hmm waiting for abhiya moments, let see how abhay will react. 😳

Edited by abhiya_kapi - 13 years ago

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