New joint ff-: Broken paradise note on pg 81

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Trishna

@trishnawaliya

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#191

fabulous update frens.., u knw wat i like like and lot of like dis update... par itna jaldi story move, may be u r going to show how their perfect paradise broke and wat happens after dat and ya dat tard and varun ka abhiya ko tease karna mera to hans hans kar bura haal ho gaya yaar., sach m mast update hai

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Anj01

@Anj_01

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#192

roshini n romi so cute n lovely n romantic update!!!!!!
abhiya were so adorable n cute!!
abhiya moments were hot
liked the morning part were varun n tara were teasing abhiya
oh so now pia is pregnant...its so happy happy...but as the title suggest soon their little paradise gonna break na...anyways jab hoga toh hoga...abhi toh i m happy for abhiya

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Shria

@-JuniorAngel-

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#193

suprb update girls...!!😛
☺️☺️☺️ suhagrat☺️☺️☺️
piya now is pregnent😲so fast😆 but loved it😉
that jr raichand line said by abhay was too cute😳
continu soon😆

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piggi_Babes

@piggi_Babes

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#194

awsom stooory... i lovd it kip it uppp... da romance shown in dis waz amazingg😳... i lovd it👏 thnx 4 da PM...

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..juhi..

@..juhi..

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#195

awesome parts romi

so pia is prego wow!!

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670134

Hibernated

Posted: 13 years ago

#196

Its just awesomeee Romi & Rosh👏 !!! tum dono ne Abhay ko...😆...lol lol lol ! honeymoon se pahle hi Piya prego ??? honeymoon me kya karega bechara ?🤣??? lolzzz besharam Raichand😆 but I loved this besharam Raichand😉

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653787

Suspended

Posted: 13 years ago

#197

Awesome update ⭐️ Abhiya's sr was very romantic ☺️ I liked how they were teased by Tara and Varun. So Pia is pregnant 😃 Right now Abhay can't stay away from Pia for a moment but I'm already worried about what will go wrong. Cont asap n thx for pm 😊

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Renu

@abhiya_kapi

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#198

Wow Romi and Roshni. Maazzaa aa gaya yaar itna bada update padh ke. Romi you have really become my inspiration now for new ff. 😛

I've got some emotional words from your chapter, which I think I'll use in my new ff, sometimes later. 😳

Specially this one.

"both of their tongue danced in the tune of raw passion and love. As soon as both their lips met and tongues met, both started getting tied up in a more and more passionate kiss."

Awesome very passionate scene you wrote Romi. I was blushing here when Abhay and Piya started romancing. ☺️

Roshni your dialogues for Abhay and Piya were phenomenal for me. Good job Roshni. 👍🏼

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kirti

@Andromeda001

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#199

😉 awesome update!
Abhiya hav started a new chapter of life nd piya s pregnant too 😃
lovved d sisterly bonding b/w piya n tara and brotherly bonding b/w abhay n varun!
But i tink this all happiness s just a silence before d storm.Am i right?
Coz this s what d title n prologue suggests.
Continue soon!

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Mandy

@BeyondHorizon

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#200

First n foremost sorry for the late reply guys That was an awesome update. I really loved it.

Romi yaar their suhaag raat was hawt ☺️ but aesthetic n beautiful at the same time, juts like how the union of 2 soulmates should be. Dont know wat else to say. Everything was written very well especially the part where Varun teases them n hands them the gift was so beautiful 😳 I am loving Varun n Tara 😊 though I never saw much of Monaya as SaJan in MJHT I love them as Varun Tara. They r so cute n adorable 😊

Coming to the next part, Roshni u have written it very beautifully. Just like what happens in every other household. Sometimes these rouitnes also seem to be a very important part of life. The part where a newly wed Abhiya who couldn stand to be apart even for a day was depicted very nice. It was realistic as well 😳 The love n passion never lets them be apart atleast not in the initial few days of their marriage. WOW Pia is already pregnant but after having read the prologue I fear something might go wrong

Continue soon girls n fab job 👏

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