New joint ff-: Broken paradise note on pg 81

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Pari Gupta

@Pari-Gupta

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#201

awesome update

loved it

so Piya is pregnant wow

cont soon

thanks for the pm

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Ekta

@HaymurS

Achiever

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#202

awesum update👏

totally romantic

wow pia pregnanat

continue sooon

thanx 4 pm

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sofia2

@sofia2

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#203

sorry fr late rply. i was too busy.btw great update.

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diana

@vampireking

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#204

👏hatts off to your work !!!👏👏 👏!👏👏👏 work !!!👏👏 👏!👏👏👏 👏 👏

i mean the way yu express the abhiya feeling its breathtakingly amazing !!!!

and the varun tara bond !!!is really superb !!!i mean the way you expreess their nauk jhok it just awesome !!

thanku so much for writing such a nice ff and giving us the breathless sughrat !!!!😳coz of your update my room temperature get really hottt

you both rocked together !!

awesome 👏👏 👏👏

amazing 👏👏 👏👏

superb 👏👏 👏👏

fantastic 👏👏 👏👏 👏👏

the next i will tell you when i will remeber it !!!!

offcourse dil mange more next time more big update you know naa how much greedy i am when it comes to good sorry fantastic ff haha😆😆my patience level will be ZERO !!HAHA

i hope you will update soon !!!!!!ghadi aage challlo !!!!!yaar aur kitna tarpaygi jaldi update karna haha😆

i have many question in my mind coz of this ff !!!!plzz do unfold the mistory otherwise the fuse of my mind will burst hhaaha😆😆

update soon otherwise i will going to make you fall i the ocean of ...😭😭

btw you both are sick😆 am i really talking to those lazyness ki dukhan😆 i mean tumne itna badda update kar kaise diya😲 !!!!i will going to faint right now help me help me haha😆!!!!

Edited by vampireking - 13 years ago

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Romita

@Rmuk

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#205

Originally posted by: Alicia2001
wow great story plz update soon
thanks for the pm

Thanks a lot dear.
we will update soon and u are welcome dear.

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Romita

@Rmuk

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#206

Originally posted by: fabliha
<font color="#990099" size="5">wow!!! superb update...⭐️
abhay pia's wedding night,next morning part was amazing...😉
& now pia is pregnent...👏
wow!!!great...
</font>

Awww, thanks a lot lamu.
glad u liked both the parts so much.
yea piya is pregnent. Thanks for liking dear.

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Romita

@Rmuk

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#207

Originally posted by: fabliha

<font color="#990000" size="5">good aab huena good girl wali baat...😉.</font>

Lolzzz yea me goody goody girl

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Romita

@Rmuk

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#208

Originally posted by: love-piya-abhay
very hot abhiya all scene ...very nice up date thanks for pm

Thanks a lot dear.
glad u liked it.
u are welcome dear.

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Sheena

@Abhiya-gunner

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#209

Comment Updated on page 25😳

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Romita

@Rmuk

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#210

Originally posted by: Abhiya_Gunner
Res

Sorry

Loved the abhiya scenes😳
Varun abhay part was sweet😊
Pia is pregnant! yeah😳 Though i thought it was first😆
Continue soon! wanting to read the next part
This time i won't res i always forget😆

Aree it's ok don't say sorry ok.Thanks a lot dear.
glad u liked that part.
yea, piya is pregnent, yea we know it's fast but it's necessary for the development of plot. we will update soon.
Arre main hoon na reminder ke liye.

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