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Romita

@Rmuk

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Posted: 12 years ago

#121

Awesome awesome awesome update girls!!! Wow both u are just fab writers!! I loved both abhay's and piya's parts!!!Gosh u both are perfect combination of writer for this ff!!!
I just loved alex and abhay here, alex seems to be a true friend of abhay, he just wants abhay to be back to normal but poor abhay, he is so heartbroken😔. I loved lisa as always, she is so understanding. Alex, abhay convo was beautifully written and emotions were perfectly described!!!
I hope abhay heeds to alex and lisa, rest depends on u both what u have planned for this story, but I know it will be hell interesting!!!
Ok now coming to the second part I just loved piya's character here. Wow she fought with the goons and saved jia!!!
Wow we have got a saviour piya which I really liked. The whole scene was described beautifully and amazingly written!!! The last part was good too, now I am waiting to know how abhiya will meet and abt abhay's past!!!
once more superb job girls, u both just rock!!! Plz update soon and yea really sorry for commenting so late and yea thabks for the pm and this amazing update!!!

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Mandy

@BeyondHorizon

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Posted: 12 years ago

#122

Originally posted by: -juhi-lily-
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brilliant update guys👏loved it ❤️
hawww...abhay is in so much pain😭 bcoz of his own mother😲😭
pia too seems very lonely types...
WOW!! she fought with the goons😃 our new savoiur Raichand😉
waiting for the next😊

Thanks Juhi 😳 Means a lot to us. Yeah Abhay has had to endure a lot Pia maybe lonely but she knows how to handle herself n live her life unlike Abhay Yep we have savior Jaiswal not Raichand 😆 Will update soon 😳

Originally posted by: Monami_50
Wow...u guys finally updated.Awsm update.My favourite part...piya beating the guys to a pulp...that past was cool

Thanks Monami 😳 Yeah I suppose its nice to see Pia being the savior than the typical damsel in distress types 😆

Originally posted by: --Rose--
Wowww AMAZING update dear:-):-):-) jus loved it:-):-):-) plz continue soon...

Thanks Rose 😳

Originally posted by: bookworm-ALS--
That's awesome. I feel so bad for Abhay.
This girl Jia... Will she be important later on?

Yeah I know Abhay's had it bad Yep Jia will play an imp role here 😊 Glad u liked it Shreya 😳

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Mandy

@BeyondHorizon

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Posted: 12 years ago

#123

Originally posted by: Alicia2001
wow great story plz update soon
i'm really looking forward to your next part of your story
thanks for the pm

Thanks Alicia 😳 Will try to update soon.

Originally posted by: koli97
lovely update😊wahooo Pia saved a girl,really impressed👏wht happen Abhay?plzz continue asap😊

Thanks Koli 😳 Pia is a bold n fearless girl here 😳 U will know wat course Abhay's life will take 😊

Originally posted by: .rumki.
gr8 update.wow pia saved a girl
what happened to Abhay in past? Feeling bad 4 him

Thanks Rumki 😳 We will reveal Abhay's past in the upcoming updates.

Originally posted by: MS-meghasharma
wonderful update
thanks for pm

Thanks Megha 😳

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Mandy

@BeyondHorizon

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Posted: 12 years ago

#124

Originally posted by: Cute_Gal
awesome update..
continue soon..
thanxx for d pm..

Thanks dear 😳 Will try to update soon.

Originally posted by: spn-abhay
Awesum update dear.
wow pia beat those ppl.lol
aww abhay is in pain.
Cntinue soon
just lovd it

Thanks 😊 Abhiya's portrayal is drastically different from what we have seen in the show or in other stories so far n this is all Indu's idea 😳

Originally posted by: shria
lovely update mandy & indu felt really sad for abhay & piya she fought with them😲😲
want to kne wat happened with piya😛
continu soon

Thanks Shria 😳 U will know soon abt both Abhay n Pia's past.

Originally posted by: ashu1909
nice update.but when will abhiya meet❓.i thought that abhay saved piya but it was jia. do continue soon

Thanks Ashu 😳 Hmmm as for Abhiya, maybe in another couple of updates? Nope it wasn Pia who got into trouble. But Jia whom Pia saved 😳

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Indu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#125

Originally posted by: --sonali--
nice update indu n mansa.actually its awesome,it was just a start n fab work!thanks sonali..glad you liked it so much..! 😳
loved the Abhay-painful man,nice bonding of alex n abhay!lisa is nice too! ya abhay-lisa bonding is special! alex is a gud friend. he understands abhay inside out! 😊
jia saved pia,mistry...umm! no dear! its pia who saved Jia actually!! 😛

waiting for abhiya meet!update soon. ya,will update today! 😊

Originally posted by: harinisriram39
Nice start Indu. I will not ask you now at this point where the track is headed or how Abhay and Piya would meet. I will wait for you to update 😊 thanks for reading harini..😳 n thanks a lot for the comment. 😊 they will meet soon...! By the way, the bonding of Abhay in Lisa reminds me of my bonding with some colleagues. A bond of humanity nothing more and nothing less.

ya, there bonding is special but cannot be named! its different but beautiful. 😳

Originally posted by: Mohit-deewani
A great upd Indu and Manu 👏 I m sooo sorry for not commenting on previous chapter actually I read it just now 😳 thanks roshni. 🤗n its alright dear! you have commented n that's wat matters! 😊 both the chapters where amazing and were wrote beautifully , glad you loved it. 😳 ahhh abhay and Lisa binding is great I loved it and tat was soo great of abhay of saving Lisa's son well I m pretty confused with piya's character though , would love to know more about her though and Alex is real and true friend 😃 ya abhay is a gem! ya alex is a great friend! sorry for confusing u dear..pia's character will get more clear in the coming updates i hope...
I love bonding of Alex and abhay and also I love Alex's personality reminds me of sammy 😳 thanks dear.. i too enjoyed creating his character..😊 by sammy u mean supernatural? yes i too like sammy! but no dear character wise alex is bit different from him.!
both abhiya's life miserable , wonder how would they meet 😃 you will know soon!
sooo who's jiya now , does she play a imp character ? yes.she has a very important role to play! Well I m having feeling tat piya and jia are gonna be great friends ahead 😃 hmm...lets see...!
upd soon girls u both make a amazing pair together 👍🏼

thanks dear. ya am really fortunate to have got mansa as my partner..n i always enjoy writing with her...😳 will update today!

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Indu

@Paint.It.BlacK.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#126

Originally posted by: vishti.dvd
nice update :-)

thanks dear.😳

Originally posted by: meerubzara
fabulous update thanks meeru...😳
wow pia fought with goons yep! she did! 😉
w8ng for next

will update today! 😊

Originally posted by: darkcocoa_renu
Mindblowing update Indu!the way u brought out doz latent emotions of abhay,surely made me spellbound.thanks renu.😳 glad we could please you...😊
Poor alex..though he tried his best to flip his buddy's LIFE theory,but still Abhay's pain was sumtin tat was beyond worldly words. yes dear you'r right! abhay's wounds are too deep to heal so soon...but one cant leave trying..also..
As 4 pia..oh god..she screwed doz guyz,seriously!n her last words were filled with so much of pain n despair tat any reader cud feel it. yep pia did !😉 she is different here. not weak but strong enough to fight any eventuality! 😊 hmm...its nt pain actually, its just she sees no point in disclosing her name to some stranger...
You bring out emotions very well,indu!luv ya 4 tat;-)

aww...thanks a ton for your compliment renu...it really means a lot dear...😳

Originally posted by: vampire123
Super Duper Upload but feel sad for abhay b/c of his mom

thanks salman..ya abhay is in pain...

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Indu

@Paint.It.BlacK.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#127

Originally posted by: vmpy
superb u r really doing a great job. thanks dear. 😳
felt bad for abhay.piya seems to b an emotionally vulnerable soul.wow jia the super girl. its not jia dear...its pia who fought with the goons!! 😛
thanx for pm and continue soon. u'r welcome...will update now! 😊

Originally posted by: Rmuk
Awesome awesome awesome update girls!!! Wow both u are just fab writers!! thanks romi..we are glad you loved it...😳
I loved both abhay's and piya's parts!!!Gosh u both are perfect combination of writer for this ff!!! thank u dear. ya mansa is a great partner to have...😊
I just loved alex and abhay here, alex seems to be a true friend of abhay, he just wants abhay to be back to normal but poor abhay, he is so heartbroken😔. I loved lisa as always, she is so understanding. ya lisa is a wonderful person..😳
Alex, abhay convo was beautifully written and emotions were perfectly described!!! we are really happy to know u liked it so much. it matters a lot dear..😳
I hope abhay heeds to alex and lisa, rest depends on u both what u have planned for this story, but I know it will be hell interesting!!! hmm...lets see...😊.hope so...😛
Ok now coming to the second part I just loved piya's character here. Wow she fought with the goons and saved jia!!! yes! pia is different here! she is tough not weak! 😊
Wow we have got a saviour piya which I really liked. The whole scene was described beautifully and amazingly written!!! thanks..writing that part was truly enjoyable! 😛
The last part was good too, now I am waiting to know how abhiya will meet and abt abhay's past!!! hm..well for abhiya meet you have to wait a bit more dear. 😉 n about abhay's past you will know very soon..😊
once more superb job girls, u both just rock!!! thank you once again for this big n lovely comment...🤗
Plz update soon and yea really sorry for commenting so late and yea thabks for the pm and this amazing update!!! u'r most welcome. will update now! n i know the reason,so its perfectly alright dear..i am just happy you commented..😊

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Indu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#128

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bookworm-ALS--

@bookworm-ALS--

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Posted: 12 years ago

#129

More than anything else it is Jia who really makes me curious. I like her chracter - fab job guys.
Aww I felt bad for little Simon who could not talk to his BB.
Continue soon... I want to know where Derek went.

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Romita

@Rmuk

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Posted: 12 years ago

#130

Indu and manasa fantastic update girls!!! I just loved the way u two arranged and described each and everything of this update. Just outstanding!!!
I feel miserable for abhay, his state of mind was explained beautifully!!!
I just loved abhay and simon bonding, both find solace just by talking with each other, it was just written beautifully and I was literally feeling each and every emotion the characters were going through btw BB nice name 😆
Abhay's pain was hard to resist and I wonder who that lady must be, and what made abhay leave MBBS.
Flashback part was written so perfectly that somehow I was getting lost in it.
Jiya and piya part was brilliantly written. I loved their conversations, I wonder if there is any mystery related to this jiya.
Piya's character is really complicated and hats off to u both for potraying her character so beautifully, I am looking forward for future updates to understand piya's character more well.
Hmmm now who is this heartbreaker aka derek and stratuss, I think they will play some signifcant role in this ff.
Once more just superb work, u both are just terrific writers, gr8 job, plz update soon and yea really sorry for commenting late hope u both won't mind. Thanks for the pm and this fabolous update!!!

Edited by Rmuk - 12 years ago

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