Abhiya FF:Tell me ur dreams.IMPt.NOTE ON PG-24! - Page 12

Awesum update dear.
wow pia beat those ppl.lol
aww abhay is in pain.
Cntinue soon
just lovd it

lovely update mandy & indu😳 felt really sad for abhay & piya she fought with them😲😲
want to kne wat happened with piya😛
continu soon😳

nice update.but when will abhiya meet❓.i thought that abhay saved piya but it was jia. do continue soon

A great upd Indu and Manu 👏 I m sooo sorry for not commenting on previous chapter actually I read it just now 😳 both the chapters where amazing and were wrote beautifully , ahhh abhay and Lisa binding is great I loved it and tat was soo great of abhay of saving Lisa's son well I m pretty confused with piya's character though , would love to know more about her though and Alex is real and true friend 😃 I love bonding of Alex and abhay and also I love Alex's personality reminds me of sammy 😳 both abhiya's life miserable , wonder how would they meet 😃 sooo who's jiya now , does she play a imp character ? Well I m having feeling tat piya and jia are gonna be great friends ahead 😃 upd soon girls u both make a amazing pair together 👍🏼

fabulous update
wow pia fought with goons
w8ng for next

Mindblowing update Indu!the way u brought out doz latent emotions of abhay,surely made me spellbound.Poor alex..though he tried his best to flip his buddy's LIFE theory,but still Abhay's pain was sumtin tat was beyond worldly words.As 4 pia..oh god..she screwed doz guyz,seriously!n her last words were filled with so much of pain n despair tat any reader cud feel it.
You bring out emotions very well,indu!luv ya 4 tat;-)

superb u r really doing a great job.felt bad for abhay.piya seems to b an emotionally vulnerable soul.wow jia the super girl.thanx for pm and continue soon.