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visma

@kuttu

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#791

so chand is not that bad after all. Your writing has changed my perspective of Chand altogether. And what is with Arjun did he actually kill her or is it some big misunderstanding.

And loved the way that Abhay is out to do it right this time. I hope he can see his mother on time through Pia.

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megha sharma

@MS-meghasharma

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#792

awsum update.i m really confused bout d arun kidnapping.did both chand & hasina were involved & why would they do it...did they had a history? Abhay saw her & was relieved dat she is fyn. Good first step by him to rectify his mistake. Thanx 4 pm.

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..juhi..

@..juhi..

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#793

fabulous update tora👏

y had chand lied to abhay and alisha????

2nd good thing done by abhay😃😃

hey arjun kya pia ko dhundne nai jayega?????

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Shria

@-JuniorAngel-

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#794

Awesome update tora...loved it😃

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NidhaA

@NidhaA

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#795

Honestly Tora, Piya is too innocent.
I mean if it was us getting the weird feeling on the street and then getting the post we were denied, wouldn't we be suspicious?
Abhay hasn't yet got the diary.
Chand is right, humans can never make unbeatable plans.
Good job dear.

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bellaaa

@bellaaa

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#796

amazing update tora
so chand lied to his children
poor arjun
love the scene when abhay saw piya and how the way u describe abhay inner feelings for piya
wow piya also feel that abhay is here
thats gud that abhay did something right for piya
cont soon

Edited by bellaaa - 12 years ago

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--geny--

@--geny--

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#797

tht the awesome wonderful n fantastic piece of writing..thank u so much for this ff...its my bestest..read it three times tora...love u/...vl cmnt again in night...loved a lot ...how sweet u describd all..she got job ..abhay..he saw her..omg..u wrote feelingz so aswesm.

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bookworm-ALS--

@bookworm-ALS--

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#798

that was so brilliant tora. i mean just fab. awww abhay got her a job. the thing is , i wonder if piiya mite find out abt it. she wont like it then...

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Disha

@FantasyFan_8

Stunner

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#799

i am simply amazed at how you manage to weave so many emotions into words. its really beautiful tora

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tangled.pms

@tangled.pms

Beginner

Posted: 12 years ago

#800

Originally posted by: Phoenix.Xeelan
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Tora that was too beautiful. I mean how do you portray emotion so beautifully with words? I have no words to praise you right now.. hatss off.. I read it four times already 👏 👏u're embarrasing me now tanz😳..four times???really????😲aww thank u that means a lot😊
My perspective towards Chand changed after reading this update. seems like theres a lot more family secrets to unravel. why would he lie about Haseenas death and what exactly happened with Arjun. i guess the diary will open a lot of secrets but alas, Abhay didn read it till now. Im waiting for that.yup the diary will reveal a lot of secrets but that will have to wait..abhay doesn't remember about the diary now it seems😕
Abhay seeing Pia - that part took the cake of this update offcourse. it was soo beautifully written, heart wrenching and beautiful at the same time. Abhay's emotion and Pia's goodness, her innocence. 👏 so true, a simple sorry would never be enough for what he has done to her but im glad how you are making the redemption of Abhay - PERFECT it is ⭐️ he started amending things for Pia because sorry is defo not enough. I wish he could heal her and she should burst on him, take out his anguish and cry her heart out to let go of every bit of pain she holds right now glad u liked it tanzie😊
fabulous update again. totally loved it dear 🤗and thank u for such a wonderful comment🤗

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