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tamoha(tora)

@..tora.tangled.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#781

Originally posted by: Monami_50
Abhay going to shimla..hope he finds piya soon.
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glad u like it monami.😊.will pm u.

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tamoha(tora)

@..tora.tangled.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#782

Originally posted by: lost_in_love
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wonderful..wonderful...wonderful...👏 thank u fairy😊
so diana acceptd..thats gud atleast..and abhay knws the truth nw! He confrontd chand,and am so glad he did!! Chand deservd much more though!! 🥱yeah, he does...i agree😊..
pia is sufferng n it really feels bad to see her like this...hope abhay reaches shimla soon n consols her.. she needs hm infact bth of them need eachother! they will meet..but not face to face😉

You brought out both of their pain brilliantly! The sadness,the longing,those undeciphered yet strong feelings of belonging is soo beautifully weaved...that every emotion became lively. The conscience and it had slowly taken its place back in him where it ought to b..! And no wonder pia was the one to bring it back! And credits to u for showing the imprtnt n integral aspct of humans without whch we r nthng mre than animals, so brilliantly!!!👏 ⭐️thank u fairy..u r always generous with showering ur praises on me😊but i appreciate them..thank u😳

and i really felt bad for haseena! She has a big heart n i really really hope she survives becoz inspite of pia being there the childrn needs her n so do abhay..she shud let d opertn tak plac atleast for hs sake who had nevr got the opprtunity of having a mother's love! And so do pia! Hope she gets well! I will really b disheartend if she doesnt! 😔lets see..i won't be saying anything here😕

carry on dear...and once again it was a wonderful update! 🤗thank u🤗

p.s. Btw the one who cments wud nly get pms so tht means i wud nt hav if i havnt cmentd..is tht so princess.?..😉 hehe u know its different where u r concerned😉i have already sent u a request long before😃

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Indu

@Paint.It.BlacK.

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Posted: 12 years ago

#783

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that was a very brilliant way of depicting human emotions..dextorously magnificient!!! 👏
each time a character encountered their shadow..the explaining..way Of describing..was really wonderful..⭐️

hmm..after reading ths update i have many questions...bt i will wait for the next updat to get my answers. For nw just want to say that there is sumthng much bigger in chand's past that forced to part haseena n him which is also smehow relatd to arjun..though i dnt knw whats exactly that, bt sumthng that abhay is nt aware of. 😔
i dnt knw whether chand wil ever change becz right nw it looks pretty impossible bt yes am quite sure abhay will soon make hmslf worthy of forgiveness and pia whz heart stil beat 4 abhay no matter hw much it tries to decline wil surely forgive hm nce the time cmes. 😊
in ths updat the only person for whm i felt bad and is utterly lonely is Arjun. 😔 abhay atleast hav sumthng who did care 4 hm bt arjun has no 1 who wud undrstnd hm,yes he has hs parents..hs mom is there..bt still donno why i feel he is one soul who has no 1 to share hs pain or vent out hs frastratn..he is terribly lonely. I really wish pia had calld hm to share the news nt nly 4 her bt also 4 hm. I guess i am startd feeling 4 hm mre than abhay..mayb..cnt see arjun like ths..please toru please get hm out frm that devastating path that he is leading towards..it will destroy hm..please..

special mentions- loved this dialogue 'he did locked hs heart...' and the first part..the descriptn was outstanding princess !!!👏
and the part where abhay saw pia n thought sunlight was making hm hallucinate was just fantastic! All i cn say is slowly you are emerging as a very powerful creator of story telling..superb..👏 updat soon..am waiting..😉
and here's a hug for this extremly wonderful update..🤗

Edited by lost_in_love - 12 years ago

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.SmokeySilence.

@.SmokeySilence.

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#784

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Tora that was too beautiful. I mean how do you portray emotion so beautifully with words? I have no words to praise you right now.. hatss off.. I read it four times already 👏 👏

My perspective towards Chand changed after reading this update. seems like theres a lot more family secrets to unravel. why would he lie about Haseenas death and what exactly happened with Arjun. i guess the diary will open a lot of secrets but alas, Abhay didn read it till now. Im waiting for that.

Abhay seeing Pia - that part took the cake of this update offcourse. it was soo beautifully written, heart wrenching and beautiful at the same time. Abhay's emotion and Pia's goodness, her innocence. 👏 so true, a simple sorry would never be enough for what he has done to her but im glad how you are making the redemption of Abhay - PERFECT it is ⭐️ he started amending things for Pia because sorry is defo not enough. I wish he could heal her and she should burst on him, take out his anguish and cry her heart out to let go of every bit of pain she holds right now

fabulous update again. totally loved it dear 🤗

Edited by Phoenix.Xeelan - 12 years ago

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Seema

@...Seema...

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Posted: 12 years ago

#785

Tons of thanx for giving such a wonderful,amazing,touchy and quick update.wat an irony of fate.poor abhay and piya they love each other,can feel each other but still they r far far far from each other.flash back helped in peeping into da truth behind haseena not living with her family.continue soon.

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Alicia thelwell

@alicia212

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#786

wow great story plz update soon
i want pia and abhay toeghter soon
thanks for the pm

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kanya007k

@kanya007k

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#787

Outstanding update
now abhay is here with piya & helped her secretly yieepiii

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Mandy

@BeyondHorizon

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#788

Am late again this time 😭 Sorry The update was beautiful Tora 👏 The way u portray human emotions so beautifully amazes me dear 👏 It was so touching 😳 Chand had once been a normal happy person leading a happy life with his wife n kids though destiny had rendered him a cripple Though Arjun wasn at fault he held him responsible for Haseena not being in his life anymore n the same person took away his precious daughter from him 😭 Fate has been cruel to him as well. But I'd rather he'd punish Arjun than Pia Arjun was the one responsible for all this mess. I agree he was fighting his own demons but tat did not give him any rights to accidently kill an innocent girl I do sympathise Arjun but still what he did is not something tat can be forgiven easily Arjun's pain was wonderfully depicted Tora 👏 I felt I was watching tat scene before me. A drunken man swaying around not being in a coherent state of mind while his mother looked sadly 😭 The stunner of this update was Abhay's feelings for Pia 👏 He is on the road to redemption n one now needs to see if it leads him to his salvation or not I really hope Pia gets to know tat Abhay isn the one to defame her before the world I really cant bear to see her despise Abhay for a mistake he never committed 😭 Fabulous update dear ⭐️

Edited by mandy1024 - 12 years ago