::SEQUEL BOOK 2::ETERNALLY YOURS::June 2013 pg 55 - Page 30

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mandy1024

YAY Am first

Ayshu honestly u wrote such an amazing update n u felt it was crappy? 😡 Wow! I loved the revelation 👏 Beautifully penned.
Coming to the starting part I smell something fishy 😕 Who did Chahat crash into? He spells bad news 😛
Coming to the best part, Pia Grams confrontation - was FANTASTIC 👏 Loved the way u portrayed Pia's outburst n Grams standing tall n proud n not wavering for a moment before she gave the truth to her. Was power packed 👏 Pia's dad seems to be another version of U-know-Who(hamara Voldy 😆) So Pia is all set to destroy her parents for ruining her foster parents lives? Go gal 🥳 But yes Grams is also right. Nothing can be more dangerous than a vengeful emotionally hurt witch n boy will her dad pay bigtime now 😆 Wow Ayshu! Love Prem Urvi tit bits 😆 U sure r one helluva story teller n dont u dare quit on us, OK? 😡
It was awesome n u better remove that note of yours now 😛

I wasn't sold on how to pen the draft where the confrontation between Pia and GRAMS shoukld apn out but in the end i opted for a more mature and dignified take on it. Its so easy to play the teen as a typical teenager. Note will remain until i get confirmation on your behalf. Let me sleep on it. the FF is so huge i guess i am drowning a little.
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: --peehu--

finally i caught up last 3 updates..ayshu..they are amazing..just loved them..the way you described piya going to past and discovering the secrets was mindblowing. kept me completely hooked...i can only see troubles and mess all around..how are they ever going to come out of it..


P.S: whats happening in IF..who is bashing and why everyone wants to quit..i am totally confused 😕

:Pthere have been some unsavoury people trying to cause trouble but i am staying away from it for now.

About the FF i think i made the updates a little too OTT on the secrets aspect of this FF. Theres more black holes in it than a black hole. nothing i can't plaster over
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -juhi-lily-

superb update ayesha!!
felt bad for pia...hope she doernt do anythng wrong in her anger...

. IMMATURE actions only stem from pure ANGER and we shall see how i roll the dicebut kya kare v r YOUTHS & were born wid ATTITUDE.i guess i love CONFLICT and ANGST in my FF's so used to them that whenever i write about a normal couple with a plain sailing relationship i find it boring.freely maine kisi k upar roller nhi chad diya sirf FF main kuch jaadu dikhana chahti hu and yeh sahi maine main ek DARK FF hai
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: meerubzara

fabulous update

would love to read more
plz don't quit your ff & continu soon
thanks for pm😊

.For now i have to think like i have more to give so i will try to continue but i can't promise yaar.

FF par PURE BLACK ENERGY laa ne keliye aur bi kahaani baaki hai kehne keliye
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Monami_50

Awsm update.Aysha di,can u plz tell me whats going on?Our beloved PKYEK forum is on the verge of loosing their best writers.May i ask what is our fault? We,the crazy fans of ur writings eagerly wait for weeks for ur updates coz we knw u r busy.But why have u decided 2 punish us by taking the decision of quitting?Tanzie di also said that she will finish her current works soon nd then stop writing on IF.What is gng on?Who r these bashers that r making u guyz take such steps?For them,u guys have decided to stop ur beautiful writing.I'm sorry 4 writing such a long essay.Bt just want 2 tell u one thing.I cant beg 2 u as i dnt beg 2 anyone bt Allah.Bt as a reader who has read every single of ur Abhiya works,a lil sis-i can just request u 2 not quit writing.

I know U girls are not at fault and as a fellow Muslima i would never want U to beg. I don't want any drama or fuss. I didn't want people to wait for updates in case i decided not to write again

All i will say is for now rona dhona ufff is boring so i won't say i won't write anything any more just that i find my work is boring

Now let's talk about something positive, i am trying to get back in form this will take time i'm afraid
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Posted: 13 years ago

Oye PM nhi kiya?Awesome update.LOL Pia is right now ball of fire.All male Raichands r scared of her:P.Chahat is another stubborn woman.Who is the man they found?Oh I felt bad 4 Pia but her anger might cause harm 2 her.Glad Abhay is wid her.Jeet is sweet & prem is naughty.Plz cont..Nautanki mar kar😆

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Posted: 13 years ago
very nice ,just loved it .thanks for pm
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Posted: 13 years ago

Awesome update Ayshu...


but first...get that quitting ghost out of your head!!!!

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Posted: 13 years ago
Ayshu why r u quitting now itni achi story writer ur...just loved this update...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: matwamango

I know U girls are not at fault and as a fellow Muslima i would never want U to beg. I don't want any drama or fuss. I didn't want people to wait for updates in case i decided not to write again


All i will say is for nowrona dhona ufff is boring so i won't say i won't write anything any more just that i find my work isboring
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Di,take as much time as u need.Just dnt quit plz plz plz

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