I wasn't sold on how to pen the draft where the confrontation between Pia and GRAMS shoukld apn out but in the end i opted for a more mature and dignified take on it. Its so easy to play the teen as a typical teenager. Note will remain until i get confirmation on your behalf. Let me sleep on it. the FF is so huge i guess i am drowning a little.Originally posted by: mandy1024
YAY Am first
Ayshu honestly u wrote such an amazing update n u felt it was crappy? 😡 Wow! I loved the revelation 👏 Beautifully penned.Coming to the starting part I smell something fishy 😕 Who did Chahat crash into? He spells bad news 😛Coming to the best part, Pia Grams confrontation - was FANTASTIC 👏 Loved the way u portrayed Pia's outburst n Grams standing tall n proud n not wavering for a moment before she gave the truth to her. Was power packed 👏 Pia's dad seems to be another version of U-know-Who(hamara Voldy 😆) So Pia is all set to destroy her parents for ruining her foster parents lives? Go gal 🥳 But yes Grams is also right. Nothing can be more dangerous than a vengeful emotionally hurt witch n boy will her dad pay bigtime now 😆 Wow Ayshu! Love Prem Urvi tit bits 😆 U sure r one helluva story teller n dont u dare quit on us, OK? 😡It was awesome n u better remove that note of yours now 😛