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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: bellaaa

lovely update
so master want to piya vampire too
so what will maihtili doing now?
cont soon

thank u benni😊
will continue soon😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Rmuk

First of all a big sorry for commenting so late yaar 😔
Coming to the updt it's not al all faltu it's just amazing yaar!!!
I loved all the convo's here.
Arnab wants to bring back piya and now misha knows the truth I am waiting for her reactions now.
So superiors wants to turn piya let's see what happens next, I hope abhay agrees😉 panchi ka toh rofl🤣
Metz is upto something big, reveal it soon na.
awesome updt once more and plz update asap, can't wait more!!!

now I think its my time to say sorry for late update after all it has been so much time I haven't updated😆
thanks for liking yar😳
yep misha knows the truth...and u have to wait a lil more for metz plan...
will continue very soon😳
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Posted: 12 years ago

will be updating in a day or 2...
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I am so sorry guys for the late update. But I promise now I will give it frequently...
hope you all like the update🤗


Part 7

Dobriyal House :

Misha pushed the door open and walked inside with Kabir. A trail of tears could be seen streaming down her cheeks. Kabir himself was shocked with this revelation. "Is it true?"Misha asked softly, still not being able to believe it. Arnab and Madhu looked at each other and then at Misha not knowing what to say. Arnab has decided to tell Misha and Panchi about this not like this. "Your silence answers a lot Papa. Now I got to know why Piya nowadays stays aloof from us. This the reason she doesn't come here now." Misha said, her voice spitting fire. "Misha beta listen-" Arnab started to explain but was cut off by Misha "No. No don't say anything. Till now we never knew that we have one more sister...and...and all these years she must have suffered so much while here I and Panchi were living like queens with all the comforts." She shouted. Tears continuously pouring down here cheeks. Kabir took his best friend in his embrace to comfort her. "You did wrong uncle." He finally found his voice and said slowly. "Thank God that Abhay is always with her." Misha said as she remembered what she had witnessed just few minutes ago. "What that Raichand is still trapping her. No I will not let this happen." Arnab said angrily. "No Papa. Not at all. You have already made her suffer so much. Now don't interfere in her life." with that she went from there with Kabir following her behind.

Abhay-Piya:

The ride to the hostel was a quiet one. Both of them were having different thoughts running in their minds. Abhay stopped the car in front of the hostel. He sat there holding the steering wheels tightly and staring at the road ahead. Piya looked at him and quietly laid her head on his shoulders. Both of them didn't know what to say or where to start from. "Didn't I tell you that something is right." Abhay said quietly. "But why are you so tensed Abhay? They didn't do any harm to anyone. They are here to you people." Piya said hoping that it would reduce his tension a bit. "And ask what? To turn you into a monster like me?" Abhay growled angrily. "Abhay, how many times I have told you, you are not a monster." Piya replied angrily. "And moreover, I think...I think..." She hesitated a little and looked at him before continuing, "I think...that...he was...right." "What?"Abhay was shocked at what he just heard. "You...you mean...are you out of your mind? Do you know what you are talking about?" Abhay said, still not being able to register the fact that Piya was saying its ok to become a vampire. "Abhay why are reacting like this?" Piya asked. "Piya..."Abhay started to say something but was cut off by her. "No Abhay. Today you have to listen to me. It is always you telling me but today you have to listen."She took a deep breath and continued, "Abhay, being a human, one day or the other I will be dying and then what will you do? Hun? For then it is ok with you na that I die? Abhay I want to be with for all my life. Tell me what will you do then?" Abhay knew whatever she was saying was correct. He couldn't image his life without her even for a second but he never wanted Piya to become a part of his dark world and face dangers. Abhay sighed and said, "Piya its really late today, you should go inside now." "You will come?"Piya asked. "Hmm..."Abhay replied and kissed her cheeks. Piya got out of the car and went inside the hostel.

Piya had just come out of the bathroom after changing went she felt two strong familiar arms encircling around her waist from behind. Piya smiled knowing who it was and turned around and put put her arms around Abhay's neck. "What are looking at Abhay?" Piya asked. " You look so beautiful when you smile." Abhay said lovingly placing his forehead over hers. Piya smiled shyly and turned her face. Abhay cupped her face and started kissing her. Piya too responded passionately to the kiss. Abhay slowly broke the kiss, their foreheads still attached. "Piya its really late. You should sleep now." Abhay said. Piya looked at him and started to say something when Abhay continued, "I know, but we still have one week for that. We will talk about it I promise." with that he kissed her forehead, lifted her in his arms and tucked Piya undeq the duvet. Piya being really tired because of tiring day instantly fell asleep. Whole night sat beside Piya, watching his angle sleeping peacefully. He again started thinking about all previous conversations. He knew that he wanted Piya by his side always and won't ever be able to bear the parting which is very much possible if Piya stayed human. A selfish part of him told him to turn Piya, but the other part denied. He then decided that since they have full one week, he will see what future has decided for them. Just before the dawn, Abhay left from there with a note on Piya's bedside table.

Next day:

Misha had decided to go and talk to Piya and asked Kabir to come along. All this while, in all the turn of events nobody noticed or rather remembered that Panchi has still not returned home. Misha and Kabir reached college but they couldn't find either Piya or Abhay. Here in the hostel, Piya got up only to find Abhay was gone. As she started getting down the bed, she found the from Abhay saying that he will pick her up for the college. Piya smiled and kissed where Abhay's name was written and got up to get ready for the college.

When Piya came down, she found Abhay already waiting for her. She went him, standing at her toes kissed his cheeks. Abhay was very surprised with her sweet gesture and also felt very happy. "Piya come lets go." Abhay said smiling. "Abhay are you sure we should go together?" Piya asked. "Yes Piya I want to tell everyone that you are MINE. ONLY MINE" Abhay said opening the passenger's door for her. Piya was surprised by this but she was also loving this side of Abhay. With that they moved for the college.

In College:

As soon as Abhay and Piya entered the college, all the students looked at them with a shock seeing them together but the two lovebirds didn't pay any attention to all these and moved towards canteen as there was still sometime for their classes to start. Just then Misha came running to them and hugged Piya tightly. Piya was a little taken aback by this and Abhay too got surprised seeing a sheet a tear filling in Misha's eyes. When he concentrated on her thoughts, came to know the real reason and sighed. "Misha what happened? Is everything alright? Please look at me, tell me." Piya asked her. Her voice showing the depth of concern for Misha. Misha seperated herself from Piya, controlling herself hard not to cry and said softly, "Why didn't you tell me Piya? This was why you were avoiding me?" "What? What are you talking about Misha, I clearly don't understand." Piya asked thouroghly confused. "That...that...you are...my sister..."Misha answered in a wisper. Piya looked at Misha bewildered. "What is happening? How did she know? Will she hate me now? Now what will happen?"All these thoughts were running in Piya's mind, when Misha started saying,"Why didn't you tell Piya? And all these years...you were bearing so much. Piya you don't know how happy I am. I have always considered you as my sister and now...knowing that you actually are. I am so happy today. Now we will live together, you, me birdie, you don't have to live in the hostel. We'll have lots of fun." When Misha said something about living together, Piya snapped out of her thoughts and said, "No Misha, please. I happy the way it is and I am very happy that you don't hate me. But please Misha I can never live under the same roof as Mr. Dobriyal. He has cheated mum and played with her emotions. Please." Tears threatened to give away and Piya started to walk away when Kabir chose to speak, "Piya I know what uncle had done is wrong. Very wrong. But for that don't punish yourself and Misha too. She wants to be with you." Till now Abhay was standing quietly witnessing everything when his phone rang. He attended the call and said said a grim face to all three, "We all need to go to a place urgently. Misha please call your parents and ask them to come to X place, its very urgent." (Sorry guys I don't know any specific place of DD. You can assume any place near the forest area.)

As soon as Abhay had said this, Misha clearly denied saying she first wants to talk to Piya and stay with her and also asked the reason from Abhay, to which he replied, "I don't know much, but it concerns Panchi." "What? Panchi? What happened to her Abhay?"Piya asked. "I don't know. We will only get to know when we reach there." So without any further argument, all four left for X place.

On reaching there, the news they got was enough for them to stop their heartbeats. They saw a police team investigating the matter. Seeing pale faces of Piya Misha and Kabir, Abhay decided to talk to the officer himself. When asked, the officer replied, "Well, the victim has met with a dreadful accident and looks like when the accident occured she was alive of else we wouldn't have found the body as it too would have rolled down the hill with the car. In the car found the driving licence and it says she is Panchi Dobriyal." Misha could believe her ears. Just few minutes ago she was so happy finding that Piya is her sister and now...! Why was all this happening!? "No look you must be mistaken, Ok. This can't happen. My sister can't die. You are lying." Misha shouted at the officer wiping her tears. The Officer looked at Misha and felt bad for her. "See Ms. you can see the body yourself and identify it," Said the officer. When they were brought near the dead body, Misha with shaking hands pulled the covers down its face and started crying harder. Piya was in crying in Abhay's arms who tried to comfort her but at that moment nothing was helping. Misha was vigoursly shaking Panchi and asking her to get up. The officer asked Abhay to inform the victim's other family members to complete the formalities. Abhay nodded and asked the officer to give them some time seeing the current situation.

Abhay's mind was roaming somewhere else. His visions told him it was a vampire's attack and the first name that came in his mind was SIDHHARTH. But the surprising thing was, there wasn't any trace of Sidhharth's scent. This was very confusing and also a worrying thing. He has to talk to his parents immediately about this but right Piya needed him the most.

After some hours, Abhay and Piya are now sitting in Raichand Mansion. Abhay did not want to take any risk so he refused to let her go to Dobriyal House. Piya was now calm and sitting quietly but the sadness and pain of losing someone could be easily seen on her face. Abhay had told Chandeena about the vampire bite he had seen on Panchi's neck and also a new vampire's scent. Abhay had also gone check on Siddharth but found nothing. "So that means Master was right. There is someone who wants to destroy the peace and now these things will surely get us into trouble too." Chand said. "But what about that witch who died. Who was she?" Abhay asked. "That was an old powerful witch who used to practice black magic. We are also told that she too is killed by a vampire to gain wiccian powers. We don't know who that vampire is and also is it alone or there is someone helping that vampire. Also now that the dangers are arising we need to protect that ring too." Chand answered. "RING??" Piya asked. Abhay and Chandeena looked at her confused face then Haseena decided to answer. "Yes Piya. A ring. A very powerful one which is given to us by the superiors to keep it safe. For many years the ring is with us. Though we fear that if it lands in wrong hands, there would be nothing but destruction. But the actual truth is that ring is of no use without its RIGHTFUL OWNER." Haseena explained. "Rightful owner?"this time Abhay asked as he himself doesn't seem to know the whole thing. "Yes. It is said that when the ring's owner will wear that ring, then only its powers will get activated. It is also said that the owner is the one who will unite vampires, werewolves and witches again and will bring peace and harmony in supernatural world. In short, the owner of this ring will rule the supernatural world."Chand said explaining further. Abhay and Piya were looking at them with wide eyes.

Dobriyal House:

A mournful silence was spread in the whole house. After getting the news of Panchi's death, Madhu hadn't even said a single word. Arnab had completed all the rituals and formalities. Kabir was there to consol Misha. Also Ruhi and Angad too had come to stay by Misha's side. Now this loss has made Arnab Dobriyal more adamant to bring Piya home at any case. His lawyer has told him that court papers will be delivered to Piya latest in two days.

Somewhere in the midst of forest:

Maithili was standing facing many of new born vampires telling them what to do and discussing about the further plan. One can see a good number of vampires standing there obeying Maithili. "So now go everyone. We will soon attack them to have the ring and I will be the most powerful vampire", She said dismissing the meeting. She stood there looking at the moon thinking of everything till now. She is determined to get the powers and also make Abhay pay for choosing that human over her. The time replayed in her mind when she was learning black magic and gaining powers. By killing that witch she has gained some powers but not all as Maithili has betrayed her, the witch has refused to tell Maithili about the ring so Maithili has killed her. And now she has made an army of vampires herself who are fully under her control and soon she will be rule the world.



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Edited by -juhi-lily- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
That's great Juhi. I love how you wrote Misha's confrontation.
And omg the ending...left me worried!
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow great story plz update soon
what is going to happend next in your story
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome updt dear...luvd it...thanks for the pm...
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update
will be waiting for next update.thnx for pm.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update Juhi.Everyone found out about Panchi.The last part...metz is up to no good
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update after sooo long!!!!
Thnk God Misha reacted in a positive way to d truth n accepted d Piya.
Metz is on d verge of creating another storm.who s d rightful owner of d ring?/
plz update asap.

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