'THE FIRST RAIN'updtd-chap14 AUG Note pg:153 - Page 77

Awesome update

awesome update

indu brilliant update
thats really sweet of abhiya again normal
but anik call make abhay jealous
but both are unaware of their feelings yar
hope soon they get it they love each other
cont soon

nice update.abhay jelous of anik well abhay u have fallen in love piya accept soon.hope abhiya realise their luv for eachother soon

Very nice dear ...thanks for pm

there are lot of stories with never ending which enoying me, i start reading but updates come so late, i love to read whole work together, its interesting you should continue but hope it will update continuously on time.

Waaooo...It's really Awesome @ lost_in_love oOPS!..i DONT KNW UR NAME SO :-( ..NYWAYS...it's really lovely yaar Love it 👏 👏

Originally posted by: mandy1024

Indu this is for underestimating urself 😡 This update was so subtle, sweet and realistic 😳 n here u were telling me its turned out bad Love the way u express a person's feelings with subtlety, its awesome 👏 thanks dear..glad that you felt i can...😳 Nothing overboard, a right mix of feelings n emotions 😊 thanks yaar..😳Abhay getting restless on wanting to see Pia, hear her words was so natural for a friend who was guilt ridden seeking her forgiveness. He didn't mind ditching his shoot so that he could be by her side? Awww so sweet of him 😊 ya,abhay is a sweet guy,but at times he is arrogant as well...😛 On the other hand Pia too is unsure if her friend still hates her n even she's desperate to hear his voice but doesn hold any anger towards him though he hurt her so many times 😭 that too for that vile Kate 😡 hm..ya abhay did hurt her,but you see he had his own reasons,n pia knows it n him inside out...😊 Finally Abhay got the smile back on his face that reached his heart n dont we all know why? 😉 Then Abhay wanting to meet Pia immediately n Tora telling him off was so cute but still our Abhay knows how to get something when he really wants it 😉 ya..he is abhay raichand afterall...😉 Loved Abhiya moment. It was so natural Tora, u expressed it beautifully n for me this was the best part of the update 👏 thanks a lot for ur appreciation dear...😊 It is clear that both of then are being friends but neither of them have realised it completely yet How sad! I hate Anik 🤢 I know he's a good guy n all that but still I dont want anyone between Abhiya 😭 Abhay did beg for Pia's forgiveness n damn this Anik 😡 He interrupted their lovely moment 😆 But please make Anik step aside for Abhiya, please 😭 don't hate anik dear...he is not only a nice guy but a good humanbeing as well...he is the kind of guy to whom other's happiness matters the most...more you know him the more u will like him...😳 Once again a lovely update Indu 👏

once again thanks for such a long n lovely comment dear... 🤗