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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Rmuk

First of all I am really sorry for commenting late dear. It's really good to see u back with a bang, I feel so happy. thanks romi.. aww..it's alright! no worries dear. 😊
Now coming to the update just update amazing yaar, seriously from beggining till end just loved every bit of it dear. Amazing descriptions, the way abhay cared for piya calling tora everytime, not wanting to go to shoot everything was just perfect. Loved that director scene where where abhiya talked on phone and abhay was ready to do the scene again lol, really u made me remember abhay's natural smile, naughty ones. thanks a ton dear.. glad i could make you remember him...😳
My most fav part was last one so in the mirror scene, was so cute, I can sweetly abhay wanted forgiveness and I know piya will forgive him. yes you'r right! she will dear..😊 So abhay didn't kile anik taking with piya, jealousy will play it's card. i guess so..😉 But I am feeling bad thinking abt anik, let's see what u two do with his character. hm..ya i feel bad too! he is a jem of a guy..! Loved all the convo's and now abhiya track will start na slowly, it's gonna be interesting now. ya, i hope so dear...😊 I am waiting to know what will abhiya do now. Plz continue asap dear, waiting for next part. yep, will b updating soon...😊
Once nore just a fab, sweet and b'ful update, update when u can, studies and health come first ok so no worries. Gr8 job dear, tc and thanks for the pm

u'r welcome...once again thanks a ton for such a lovely comment...🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
sorry indu its my view i want to share anik is gud guy he luvs pia alot, care 4 her, he not evil like kate so y people hate him jst becz he is wid pia, he is her fiance. he is their i ther her when she is vulnerable and then also all want him out of pia life just becz dey want abhiya together. abhay who is pia's best fren and dat to childhood belive on crap of her gf and humiliate pia, i knw it was all unintentionally but stil5 its matter of trust... though if he is in illusion of kate but still
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Posted: 13 years ago
but still things r same and wat if he again do d same thing due to some other reason... and by d way pia is happy wid anik and leaving anik and going wid abhay is really selfish part of pia and i dont wish dat... and in which book it is written dat always ur childhood best fren is ur lover and whatever... soory i am not good at xplaining my thoughts but hope u understood and at last i wish anik and pia together... plz understand may be i am wrong but dis is d way i think...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Am sure Anik is a gr8 guy Indu n as a human being he's tons better than Abhay n maybe Pia deserves him 😊 But the question is does she want him? 😕 Trust me if Pia felt for Anik I would never have wished u to get Abhiya together. She clearly feels for Abhay coz even Abhay acted like an A class jerk 😡 going by Kate's words but still Pia couldn stop thinking abt him. So does Abhay deserve Pia more than Anik? Clearly the answer is NO. But the thing is Pia also feels for Abhay coz she could never hate him even when he treated her like trash n she longed to hear his voice n have him back in her life. She seems to respect Anik a lot n if she were to choose him not out of pity but out of love I would not contest that coz any sensible girl would do that but is love really sensible? 😕 Guess not. Also Anik deserves better than a girl who'll love him simply out of respect while her heart belongs to someone else. I agree with Trishna that friendships needn necessarily blossom into love. But even when Abhay was with Kate he felt deeply for Pia n Pia couldn get Abhay out of her heart though she was engaged to Anik. So is it fair for Anik is my question. But I will wait for the story to unfold n see which route it takes 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Abhiya_Gunner

Nice update! 👏 thanks dear...😳
Abhay calling to check up on Pia was cute😊
Abhay asked for forgiveness, I guess Pia will forgive him😊 Abhay didn't like Anik calling Pia😆 i guess so..! 😊
I think Anik will realise Abhay and Pia feel for each other even before Abiya do 😆😆 hmm..can't say..!! 😆
Thanks for the Pm🤗 most welcome...😊


Originally posted by: ..dishu..

i wonder what will you do to separate anik and pia. i just hope u make him a good guy who makes pia realize where her heart actually lays and does not come between them


ofcourse not dishu..!! anik is a good human being,and his character is nothing near to grey...😳

Originally posted by: Alicia2001

wow great story plz update soon
it's an amazing story to read
thanks for the pm

glad you liked it dear...u'r welcome..😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: bookworm-ALS--

Excellent. Finally Abhay gets a taste of his own medicine... Serves him right. But I really hope he doesn't lose his head again... Well written.

thanks for liking shreya.. 😳hm..well lets see wat happens...

Originally posted by: Phoenix.Xeelan

Wonderful update... good to see your back Indu 😊 thanks tanzie...😳

Very nice one... so things started to melt between Abhiya and here comes the remaining problem named Anik 😆 ya...😆
Abhay is getting back what he did and good for him but I hope this time he keeps his head cool and dont end up hurting himself and Pia again. I hope they will sort out their feelings soon 😳 hmm...well cant really say now,wat will happen...😕


thanks hema..😳

Originally posted by: flora212

WOW GREAT! ABHIYA R FALLING FR EACHOTHER! AHAAAN ABHAY GOT JELOUS OF ANIK! BUT PIA FUTURE HUSBAND ANIK! YAAR PHIRSE ABHIYA KO APART MAT KARDENA! BUT I WANT MORE JELOUSY PART! AND PLS ABHIYA KO MOVIE BI SIGN KARWANA! NOW DONT UPDATE SO LATE...UPDATE JALDI😆

hmm..well cant say they r falling nafi ..but yes the gap btw them is fading slowly..😊hmm...about abhiya separation..lets see what happens... yep! gud news for you..lots of jealousy track coming up..!! 😉hmm...ok..cant promise though..! 😛 ya..will b updating this week..!! 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: smdosi

wow dear!! It ws fab...too good...thanks for the pm...so now anik vil cum btwn dem..

thanks a ton dear. glad you liked it..😳 welcome..😊

Originally posted by: love-piya-abhay

Just Feb story ,nice and well written please continue and thanks for pm

will b updating soon. thanks for reading dear... glad you liked it...😳

Originally posted by: MS-meghasharma

fab update.glad dat abhay is back to his freinds.bth abhay & pia have feelings 4 eachother yet they dnt realise it.abhay got jealous f anik.grt part & thanx 4 pm

thanks for liking megha. most welcome..😳

Originally posted by: sukugeny

fab awesm update indu...lovd it..u wrote welll abhiya emotions...
ya i know..thr is lot of jelousy n abhiya cute moments upcmng na...plz...plz.thnx.

thanks a ton dear..😳 ya..you'r right...! next update will b up soon..😊

Originally posted by: tara.singhania

It was awesome...aree but this anik will create problems yaar...I hope they don't get apart now...thankyou for the pm...continue soon...

thanks tara..hmm..lets see..😊

Originally posted by: Monami_50

Awsm update.Uff...ye abhiya kab tak dur rahenge ek dusre se

thanks dear..😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -juhi-lily-

awesome update jst luved it❤️ Bt yar ye kya anik is pia's future husband😲dude..bf tak thik tha...hope both realizes their luv soon...

thanks juhi. glad you loved it.. 😳

Originally posted by: _Chandni_Sadia

Very nice dear ,hope they will realize their love for each other soon ,thanks for written this please continue dear ...add me in your pm list

have added youalready..😊 thanks dear..will b updating soon..😳

Originally posted by: trishnawaliya

nice update indu its gud dat abhay is back to old one... but y abhay get upset wit anik name...

thanks dear.😊 i think u have missed some parts,,read the story attentively dear,you will know why...!!

Originally posted by: koli97

I think u forget ur ff...😊lovely update...very romantic😳wait 4 nxt...awww Abhay...wish Abhiya get marriage not Anik😊

glad you liked it dear. 😳how can i forget dear..,i didnot forget but was unwell so couldnot updat for a long time..

thanks neetu..😊

Originally posted by: vishti.dvd

nice update dear Abhay was really worried n he was jealous of Anik in d end n that way only he is going 2 realise his feelings for Pia I guess

thanks dear.😊 hm..ya,u'r kinda right..well not entirely though..! u will hav to read further to know...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
comment updated page 102...at last😆
and now..m off to sleep..gud nyt fairy 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
thanks meera..😊

Originally posted by: luckdiya

hiii indu hw r u?🤗

luvly updt yaar... evrythng is fine in abhiya's lyf...i ws jst wondering is he fallin in luv wid piya 😕 ? or its jst a nw phase of dere frndshp ...he care 4 her :))
thx 4 pm😃

am fine diya. thank u.😊
hmm...well abhay already have had feelings for pia,it's only a matter of time when he realises it..! ofcouse they are setting on a new journey which isn't possible without friendship..😳 n thanks for liking yaar...😊 u'r welcome..🤗

thanks rumki. 😊

Originally posted by: spn-abhay

It was a super awesum update dear.just loved it.abhay was so concerned for pia.aww.wow old abhay is back.bt at last,he was again in pain hearing anik name.ye ladka bhi pta ni kb samjhega ki ise pia se pyar hai.uff.continue soon.thanx for pm.

thanks dear..glad you liked it..😳 ya..abhay always takes time to understand..kiya kare...😆 yep dear,next update will b up soon..u'r most welcome..😊

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