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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice update!!! thanx 4 the pm
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Wow Its really amazing i loved it. So the temple boy is Abhay and he is Shaurya Singh nephew who is moving to dehradoon. great can't wait till abhiya meet again and is this a supernatural story? can you add me to you r pm list please. i love reading it .
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Originally posted by: luckdiya

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yup:-) You r right dear:-) ABHAY IS COMING:-)
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Originally posted by: shivanipandit29

Wow Its really amazing i loved it. So the temple boy is Abhay and he is Shaurya Singh nephew who is moving to dehradoon. great can't wait till abhiya meet again and is this a supernatural story? can you add me to you r pm list please. i love reading it .

i m glad u like it:-):-) Hmmm abt supernatural? Well thats a SECRET;-)...
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wow great story plz update soon
I'm really looking forward to your next part of the story
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Nice concept and gr8 start. Pls continue soon and pm me.
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😊~~Chapter 3~~

Pia's house, Prashant, and the adjacent house, Chinten, which also belonged to her family, were proof of the family's golden past, when they had been affluent, and had many members. But it was a very long forgotten past; for almost a century, 'think and think again before you spend' had been an integral part of the family's thought process.

Chinten was as huge as Prashant ? but it lacked the little open indoor courtyard that Prashant had. Both Prashant and Chinten were one-storey houses with 7 rooms, and a huge open-air terrace on the second storey. The houses were separated by a short wall, which was less than 2 feet away from the external wall of both the houses, and there was a little gate in the middle of it that connected the houses. Both the houses had courtyards in the front, sizeable backyards, and a common compound wall, which was quite tall, with separate gates for each. The houses stood in a quiet corner of a big square, which was dotted with similar kind of houses and lots of trees. Pia's family temple was in the centre of this square, and a few feet away from its door stood a huge banyan tree with a natural alcove in its trunk, a holy tree for some and giver of shade and rest to others.

Prashant and Chinten were both a little shabby looking from the outside, with the paint chipping off in some places, as the family had found the maintenance of even one home, leave alone two, too expensive.

But thanks to years of dedicated and loving care by Madhu and Pia, Prashant sparkled from the inside; and now Pia and her family were determined to make Chinten glitter too.

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Ruhi sat down on the floor, exhausted. Misha, who was equally tired, was currently sitting against a wall in the same room. Pia was sweeping and swabbing the last room, and she too planned to join her friends on the floor once this was done. Rishi had been given the responsibility of thoroughly dusting the furniture and he had taken 5-minute breaks every 15 minutes. 1 hour ago he had left for a bathroom break and had not reappeared. Pia strongly suspected she would have to dust the furniture all over again. It was not a very happy thought - they had been cleaning non-stop for almost 4 hours.

Pia finally finished with the work and went to join her friends; she sat down next to Misha. It was nearing lunch time and her mother had already called out to them twice to come eat. But they didn't even have enough energy to walk over to the house that was just 9 feet away. So all three were sitting in silence in a now clean room, recovering from their exertions.

The stillness was broken by Ruhi, who said, "So these two people who are moving in?tell us about them..."

"They are Dobriyal uncle's friends?.Shaurya Singh and his nephew."

"What's the nephew's name?"

"I don't know, uncle didn't say?"

"How old is he?"

"I think uncle said he is 18."

Misha sat up with more interest and asked enthusiastically, "Any idea if he is good looking?"

"I didn't ask uncle that," Pia said dryly, "I'm sorry I forgot the importance of that question."

Both Laughing😆...

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The expensive-looking black car, aflame in the first rays of the morning sun, purred along a beautiful road that had forests on both sides. It had two passengers. One, a very distinguished looking middle aged man, was sitting next to the driver. The other passenger, a young boy, was sitting alone in the back seat. The car was nearing the outskirts of Dehradun.

The driver had been hired from the nearest metro, which was very far away. His instructions were to drop the passengers at Dehradun, return to the metro and drop the car at a specific address.

"Stop the car," the boy commanded.

The driver immediately pulled the car over to one side. He had learnt early in the trip that it was in his best interests to do as the boy wanted without a second's delay and without asking any questions.


The boy, dressed in a white shirt and jeans, disembarked and walked over to the front of the car, surveying his surroundings, and leaned against the bonnet, with his arms crossed. The gray-haired, middle aged man also got out of the car and stood at a respectful distance from the boy.

Is something the matter, my lord," the older man asked deferentially.


"How long before we reach the house," the boy asked with his eyes on the road ahead.

"Around two hours, my lord."


The boy turned his head very slightly towards his right, where the driver, who had also hurriedly gotten out of the car, was standing very nervously and said coldly, "Leave us for a few minutes."

The driver almost tripped in his hurry to obey; after he was gone, the boy finally turned to face the elder man.


"I am perhaps asking this of you for the hundredth time, Shaurya Baba.?you have to stop me calling 'lord' in private also," he said irritably. "You know I hate it when you call me that. And someday it might slip out in front of others too."


"I am aware of your dislike; I will not do it again. I am sorry, my lord," the senior man said quietly, then caught the boy's glare and gave a rueful smile at having just repeated the mistake.

So far, we have somehow managed to maintain the act that I am your nephew. And now we are going to a new town where they have been informed of our relationship. Don't you think people will wonder why my mother's brother is calling me 'my lord'," the boy asked, frustrated.


"I will be careful henceforth, I promise."

The boy moved on to another pressing issue, "The family does know that we have chosen the house next door for some calm and quiet and they must mind their own business and not interfere in ours, don't they?"


"Yes, I had specifically asked Raghav to inform them of that condition. But as today is the first day, we will have to meet them and spend some time at their house to discuss the arrangements for food and some other minor details."

"That can't be avoided I suppose," The boy said grudgingly, "but we will not spend more time than absolutely necessary?.and please try and keep them away from me, Baba."

"Of course," the man said seriously, but there was an affectionate and indulgent smile in his old eyes.

"Hmm?We will not take the car to the house?.it will draw too much attention in the small locality," the boy said, frowning, "We'll go in a little, and then walk the rest of the way. We have just three bags...we'll carry those."

"That would seem the sensible thing to do, my ..." the older man stopped abruptly, restraining himself in time.


"Alright then?.find that fool of a driver and let us move on."


When the man had left to follow the instruction, the boy looked in the direction of Dehradun. He had sworn that he would not come back, not at any cost, and had tried everything possible to avoid returning to the town. But all his attempts had been foiled. It was almost as if something up there had been determined to bring him to Dehradun.

If that was the case?.then that something was just about to learn that this time, they had chosen the wrong person to impose a decision on. He had always made his own decisions, and written his own destiny?.


No one - not even the powers that be ?ever told Abhay what to do without facing the consequences?

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Hope u like it😃😃😃
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Edited by krishnarock - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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love it!
So Shaurya and Abhay are pretending...let's see how far they can keep it up 😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
#39
nice part
waiting for abhay pia meeting...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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they r pretending...waiting 4 abhiya meeting...n awesum updt

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