ABHIYA FF GROUP:::SANDS OF TIME::18 July 12 pg 148 - Page 42

Brilliant update as usual 👏 But Abhay gave in? 😲 I hope Pia again maked him feel remorse n bring out the humanity in him. Is Ayaan healed yet? Please continue soon.

Originally posted by: matwamango

I can't like this Anj coz i posted it but it was a superb update and thanks for making it a little longer. Next time hopefully U can make it even more longer. U were a life saver upon posting the updates coz i have been trying to get updates done once at least but we all have commitments na. 3 of my writers have EXAMS so they couldn't do the updates. Now i am not sure who will update first. This is a grey area. Its not their fault. Even i have problems updating coz my COURSE starts this week. Wish me luck.

Girls let me know who can do the next update ok?

U had me gripped from start to finish Anji. I loved the update so much the way U had emoted ABHAY'S anguish, his devilish side squashing his conscience so it is overtaken by his animal needs. I couldn't stop reading. I always knew from your mini updates U were a great writer and welcome to my family of brilliant writers.

Thanks Ayesha!😊 Your appreciation means a lot to me. I have admired your work as a writer soo much and having my work appreciated from such an amazing writer is overwhelming for me. I'll always cherish these words of yours. I was really nervous while updating since this FF has such brilliant writers like you, Tanzie, Ronee, Gauri and Shivani. And best of luck!😊

nice part...
So, the monster is still dominating abhay..i hope, piya is able to tame him..
Continue soon
thanx for d pm
tc

Originally posted by: anjali.K

]Thanks Ayesha!😊 Your appreciation means a lot to me. I have admired your work as a writer soo much and having my work appreciated from such an amazing writer is overwhelming for me. I'll always cherish these words of yours. I was really nervous while updating since this FF has such brilliant writers like you, Tanzie, Ronee, Gauri and Shivani. And best of luck!😊

U know these writers all have the same problems too U know. But i think once U get going U begin to start getting confidence in your own work and U my dear have impressed espcially understanding the story and what ABHIYA R in this FF. Chalk and Cheese. So Hats off to U.

wow great story plz update soon
I'm really looking forward to your next part of the story
thanks for pm

Res-

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WoW..Anji..wat a marvellous update !!! Loved it to d core...!!! 👏 [<3]

'His mind & heart had been fighting a battle of their own.'

'...he would fight back,fight to tame the monster'

' The sigh was so overbearingly painful...the monster immediately vanished...sharp pangs of pain nw stabbing at hs heart.' Though the entire update ws brilliant, bt these were the lines..whch i lovd d most..!!! [<3] 😳

Abhay's inner turmoil..hs agitation ws shown brilliantly!! 👏

'There was no way this cud be love.' ...no doubt,it will take tym fr hm to decipher the emotions tht ws forbidden by hm long tym ago..!!! 😕

'He wont let her win for long.' abhay - ' I''ll make you mine very soon piya.'

'Abhay Raichand,you will nt kill again! I will nt let you!'

umm...so abhay and piya, bth are ready fr the war...lets see who wins!!! 😊 The story is gettng more n more intrstng n thrillng day by day...!! Cnt wait fr more... 😃

And anji i really didnt knw tht you are such an awesome writer!!! 😃 Seriously you shud start your own ff..!!

P.s. Thx fr d pm ayesha..awaitng d nxt update...



Tcr... Anji.. 😳

-Indu

great update hope abhay reforms soons

anji i loved the update. It was truely awesome..abhay's turmoil was described beautifully!