ABHIYA FF GROUP:::SANDS OF TIME::18 July 12 pg 148

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Anj01

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Posted: 13 years ago

#401

nice update!!!!

so abhay finally admitted that he loves pia but running frm truth...fighting his inner beast...seems pia has to really work hard to tame this beast.

continue soon

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Romita

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Posted: 13 years ago

#402

Wonderful update Anji. Abhay hallucinating piya was great. Piya controlling Abhay's mind was superb. Pls complete it soon and pm me.

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Akshita

@Akshi0019

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Posted: 13 years ago

#403

superb anji... abhay finally acepted dat he loves pia... dats cool... i hope pia manages 2 kill d monster inside him...

its amazing...

cont soon

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Posted: 13 years ago

#404

brilliant update sis 🤗 🤗

beautifully written... 😃 loved the way you wrote it...

best part ws abhay hallucinating pia.. 😳

wow.. abhay accepted tat he loves pia... 😃

hope pia will be able to kill the monster inside abhay...

continue son guys... 😊

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Posted: 13 years ago

#405

very well written so far anji!
Loved what Pia did to control Abhay!
Complete it soon

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.SmokeySilence.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#406

Superb update Anji...loved it 👏 👏

So finally Abhay realized he is in love and as expected he is trying to run away from his feeling... very predictable.. he has been in the dark for too long where emotions cant reach him so initially he would surely try to run away from his feelings and let blood and darkness consume him again... the hallucination part was too good...lets see how Pia is will play her cards knowing its not gonna be easy...very nicely written Anji...👏

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Aysha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#407

I can't like this Anj coz i posted it but it was a superb update and thanks for making it a little longer. Next time hopefully U can make it even more longer. U were a life saver upon posting the updates coz i have been trying to get updates done once at least but we all have commitments na. 3 of my writers have EXAMS so they couldn't do the updates. Now i am not sure who will update first. This is a grey area. Its not their fault. Even i have problems updating coz my COURSE starts this week. Wish me luck.

Girls let me know who can do the next update ok?

U had me gripped from start to finish Anji. I loved the update so much the way U had emoted ABHAY'S anguish, his devilish side squashing his conscience so it is overtaken by his animal needs. I couldn't stop reading. I always knew from your mini updates U were a great writer and welcome to my family of brilliant writers.