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neha

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: abc123ca
nice...r u gonna rite da 1st chap. olso...???

ya with in hours

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Resh

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Posted: 13 years ago

#12

Nice concept
Plz cont & PM me

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Posted: 13 years ago

#13

loved it

continue soon

maithli is abhay's sis(sounds interestin)

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Rose

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Posted: 13 years ago

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ITS INTERESTING DEAR:-):-) PLEASE PM ME WHEN U UPDATE:-)I m sendind u buddy request:-) CONTINUE SOON...

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neha

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Posted: 13 years ago

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here in my ff vampires do not cry with blood tears.
chapter 1
in LONDON-
abhay was siting in a dark room on his armchair facing towards moon and pouring his heart to his bestest friend-MOON ,closing his eyes and remembering his golden days .
flashback-

mathalli was brushing feather on his ear while he was reading his book.
abhayendra(with anger)-"stop it . you na i get irritated with your such stupid acts. now stop it other wise i will not talk to you anymore!!!!!!!. i will leave u ."
maithalli(pouting face like innocent child. seeing her like this his anger jumps out of window but he still pretends to be angry)-"oh bhai stop behaving like small kids. i know u can never get angry with me.(he was staring her with narrow eyes)...ok okkk. i m sorry. i will not do it again. u know na how i m . it make me smile when u show ur fake anger to me. i promise i will not do it again.(with serious tone) but please never say that u wil not talk to me and will leave me. i can't live without u. i m sorry."(hugs him tightly so that he can never go any where)
(seeing her like this abhayendra realizes how serious she was. she has teary eyes which was like it will cause flood within a second. but then he felt guilty for making her little princess cry.)
abhayendra-"heyyy.. stop crying . i m not going to leave.(sooth her back gently and make her face him) listen to me i m sorry i make u cry. i will not do it again. and we will always be together"
maithali (with watery eyes asking him directly into his eyes seeking for promise)-"together forever???????????"
abhayendra(smiling seeing her innocence)-"together forever."
maithalli-"i love u bhai"
abhayendra-"luv u too my little princess"
suddenly some one knock at the door . abhay comes out of his thinking.
abhay="come in bhai. "
sid enters.
abhay-"from when did u started learning manners bhai????"
sid( realizes that again he was missing his sister and to change his mood says with smirk)-"uummmhhh... let me think."
sid put his index finger on his chin and pretends like he was thinking
abhay (rolls his eyes)-"don't cause damage to ur brain bhai. i know how u r."
sid (opens his arms and come forward to hug him)-"u know me so well. u r bestest brother of this whole world"
abhay(parting away)-" ya ya .so whats the matter????????????"
sid(putting his hand on his dead heart pretending to be heart)-"it was genuine."
abhay stares him with a look like"as if"
sid(feeling caught)-"ok fine . coming to the point. mom and dad had called.
and they want us to shift to india with them..."
abhay(says abruptly)-"so whats the problem. i m ok with it"
sid (glares at him to see his reaction )-"to dehradun...!!!!!!!!!!"
abhay was shocked and stares him with a disbelief look . his face expression changes to sad,guilty, full of remorse.
sid(tries to control and console him perfectly knowing that they are vampires and they don't have any emotions or feeling but still both brothers were very emotional, still having humans quality and thus feeding on animals)-"i know its painful for u to again go to that haunted place which has snatched ur life,ur happiness, ur family moreover ur sister...(sid stop to see the expressions of abhay and then continues) but u have to move on in ur life abhay . u have been mourning for her for last 200 years . she is gone . let her go. we vampires are immortals. we live for centuries. u can't be like this for ur whole existance. u should accept this harsh reality that she is gone and will never come back . u have to move on . feel the light in this dark life. give chance to urself"
abhay(with teary eyes)-"i can't forget her. she was my life only reason for living. how can i move on when i already died with my sister on that fateful night. my only ray of light was her which has gone. how can i feel light in this dark world. i can't . i m sorry. i can't forget her. i know u r right and u,mom and dad really cares for me but i can't help it. i m sorry."?(hugs sid while sobbing)
sid knows how difficult it was for him but he has to move on and he would do anything for bringing light back to his life by hook or crook. sid sooth his back make and make him face him
sid-"i know. but still. abhay we have to go... mom and dad need us. there is some problem in dehradoon which can cause damage to our clan. and we have to help them. u understand na . family and duty comes first"
abhay nodded his head and agrees to go dehradon.
sid="great then . we will go tommorrow. pack ur things. i m going to inform them that we r coming. it would be a great fun to go back home. girls be ready to drool over riachand brothers."
abhay nodded and smile
sid smile and leave
abhay stay freeze for a minute and take a deep breath
abhay-"i hope i could face the reality"
and starts packing.
IN INDIA-(mumbai)
hasina(hang up the phone)-"chand , they are coming. abhay agrees to go dehradoon with us."
chand-"thats good"
hasine-"i hope its good idea to go back to that haunted place. u know na how abhay..."
chand-"hasina , calm down . stop behaving like humans. we are vampires. we don't have feelings..."
hasina-"i know chand. but i care for abhay. how will he cope up?????????"
chand-"its high time for him to move on . he had already wasted 200 years for her. now it should be over. and i don't want to talk about it any more. this discussion is over now."
hasina-"ok fine as u say . i think we should also pack our things as we have to go first at delhi to receive abhay and sid and then head towards dehradoon"
chand-"ok"
hasina leaves.
chand thought i m sorry hasina i m hiding half truth. but it is for our own benefits.
in paris-
a young,smart,beautiful girl is siting on the bar counter in pub with her sis cum best friend misha celebrating the success of her fashion show with her few friends and also her last night in paris as tommorow they would go back to their home town - DEHRADOON
she was fully drunk and misha was stoping her to take shots.
misha-"piaaa, stop it now. u have already taken 4 shots . u can't handle it anymore. we must go now . its late also. u know na tommorow we have get up early to go back home. first we have to go delhi and then proceed to dehradoon. mann it would be a long journey."
pia(fully drunk)-"nooo. i want more. u have taken 7 shots and i only 4 that not fair "
misha-"come on man, its over now . we r going and thats final no more arguements. u know we have go home tommorrow early morning so buk up and lets move(holding her from shoulder)"
pia-"nooo..."
misha stares with her anger.
pia sees her anger face and she know that its not right to fight with her when she is right. i had to agree to her. i hate her when she is right.
pia-"ok fine. lets go"
pia and misha bid a good bye to all his friends and leave for their apartment where they live.
precap-
riachands,pia and misha arrives in dehradun

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Edited by laxmii - 13 years ago