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neha

@laxmii

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Posted: 13 years ago

HI EVERY ONE !!!!!!!
I M NEHA
I HAVE BEEN SILENT READER FOR LAST 3 MONTH
BUT AFTER READING SO MANY FFs,OSs etc...
I DECIDED TO WRITE ON ABHIYA
I M NOT GOOD WRITING LIKE YOU OTHERS DO BUT I WILL TRY MY BEST TO DO
& I HOPE YOU WILL HELP & SUPPORT ME
I M NEW SO PLEASE SEND ME BUDDY REQUEST.
HOPE YO WILL LIKE...
HERE IT GOES...

PROLOGUE...
aryan-" i m sorry!!!!"
alina- "but why"
aryan-'i cant talk on phone. can we meet?"
alina- "but what happen? any problem?
aryan- "please... can we meet?
alina-"ok .. when and where?"
aryan-"thanks.meet me in the jungle same place where we usually meet within in half an hour. i m waiting ."
alina- " ok i'll be there"
aryan-"thanks"
alina-"no need to .any thing for you"
aryan-"bye"
alina-"bye"
both cut the phone
aryan says to himself-"i m sorry alina for what i m going to do but i have to do . i can't betray u "
saying this he move out of his mansion
and heads towards jungle to broke the innocent heart

please tell me how it is????
should i continue??
index
character sketch- page 2 chapter 21-page 71
chap 1-page 3 chapter 22-page 72
chap2-page 4 chapter 23-page 75
chap 3-page 7 note page-78
chap 4-page 8 chapter24-page 79
chap 5-page10 chapter 25-page 81
chap6-page 13 chapter 26-page 82
chap7-page 14 chapter 27-page 84
chap8 (part 1)-page19
chap 8 (part 2)-page 22
chap 9-page 25
chap 10-page 30
chap 11-page 34
chap 12-page 39
chapter 13-page 43

chapter 14-page 47
chapter 15-page 51
chapter 16-page 54
chapter 17-page 58

note- page 60
chapter 18 -page 63
chapter 19-page 65
chapter 20-page 68

my other work-
it is of one of my favirote serial"love ne mila di jodi"...a human love story..
ss-my way of redemption
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2960151#56682799

ff-live again
it is of my favirote serial "pyar ki ye ekk kahani"...but no supernatural story...
a simple love story.
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3093129#60951201

ff-destiny calls!!!
it is one of my favorite serial"madhubala-ek ishq ek junoon"a simple human love story
http://www.india-forum.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3442076#76374198

Edited by laxmii - 11 years ago

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Diya

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Posted: 13 years ago

continue dear... i m also snding a buddy req.

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neha

@laxmii

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: luckdiya
continue dear... i m also snding a buddy req.

thanks
character sketch and chap 1 will be by today itself😊

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Diya

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: laxmii

thanks
character sketch and chap 1 will be by today itself😊

dnt 4gt 2 pm me 😊

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@_Chits_

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Posted: 13 years ago

hey pm me olso... m sending u a buddy req. ...😃

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minibsp2007

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Posted: 13 years ago

Seems to be nice concept continue soon

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Anukrati

@anukrati19

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Posted: 13 years ago

CONTINUE DEAR
ff seems intresting pls pm me
sorry i can't send u buddy request as my email is not validated yet.

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Anukrati

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Posted: 13 years ago

REALLY NICE CONTINUE IT NEHA
REALLY INTRESTING
pls pm me
sorry i can't send u buddy request as my email is not validated yet

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neha

@laxmii

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Posted: 13 years ago

Here is the character sketch '

Abhayendra Singh Pandher/Abhay Riachand/Aryan Yashwardhan '

He is supernatural i.e. vampire but more to it .He is very handsome with blue hypotnic eyes

,19 years old, mysterious, kind, emotional,selfless nature, protective , does not mingle with every one easily,cares for his family,misses his sister which he lost in an accident.lives with chand and hasina riachand as their son after becoming vampire and has brother Siddhartha(sid).He is prince of pandher

Pia doberial-

She is human . she is very beautiful with big brown eyes, 18 years old, kind by heart,very arrogant,fashionable,has pride for her beauty,paris return model after completing her education,younger daughter of doberial. Very close to her sisters.

Maithali pandher-

She is princess of phander. She is very sweet, kind , lovable , beautiful , 18 years old , very close to her brother Abhayendra , shares her all secret with her brother.she is vampire.she is looklike of pia.

Siddartha riachand/sid-
he is vampire. he is very handsome, 23 years old , flirty by nature, kind-hearted,caring,very close to his brother abhay,elder son of riachand family.

alina khuranna-
she is witch. she is very beautiful, best friend of maithali,18 years old

rest all characters are same as show. any change will be mention further.

Edited by laxmii - 12 years ago