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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow great story plz update soon
I'm really looking forward to your next part of the story
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chapter 3
at the deep inside the jungle-
abhay was kneeling down on his knees in front of tomb crying his heart out.
abhay-"why u did this to me?? why u leave me??how could u, maithali??(shouting towards sky)why only me??"
he cries harder and lie down near her tome to find some solace and mental peace. after 2 hrs, abhay realized that he had already spend 2 hrs . and was late for home. so he left that place.
at riachand mansion-
chand was yelling at sid
chand-"sid, how could u be so careless??how could u leave him alone knowing very well that what was he upto. i send u both far away from dehradoon...india. so that he could move on and u could help him out .i have given him 200 years to mourn over her but now it has to over. let him come , i will not spare him this time. its high time now and u r least bother. u have forgotten ur duties and responsibility . u r such disgrace to our family , to our clan . one thing was told u to do but u can't do that also!!!!"
sid was just listening quietly with head bow down.
hasina-"chand, please calm down...u know how well sid has handle abhay while he was in depression. just calm down. think and speak wisely chand. we will talk to abhay... ok .don't say any thing to him please. "
chand-"ok fine hasina, but make sure this is last time. by the way i have got abhay's addmission in one of the prestigeous college of town-MOUNT COLLEGE. tell him to join tommorrow"
saying this chand stares back to sid-hasina and left for his study room.
hasina console sid
hasina-"sid ..."
sid-"its ok mom. i understand... i should go to my room. bye"
hasina-"i m really sorry my son"
sid-"no need mom"
sid left for his room

sid was seating at couch facing towards fire place having a goblet of blood in his hand and after some time , some one knock at the door making him coming out of his thought.
sid-"come in little brother..."
abhay enter and sees him sitting like that. he knows when sid get upset he used to sit like that and he also knows the reason behind it.
abhay looks at him , sid smile and same does abhay.and sit next to sid.
abhay-"i m sorry bhai. its only becoz of me that dad scold u. i m really very sorry. i didn't mean to hurt u. mom told me every thing."
sid(smiles)-"its ok little brother. what happen had happened, just leave it and stop saying sorry or feeling guilty. u no need to say any thing . i understand u even more than u"
abhay(smile)-" but what dad did..."
sid-"what dad did was right on his behalf and u did was right in ur behalf. so chill now"
abhay(tears in eyes and hug him)-" u know u r bestest brother in this whole world"
sid(with pride)-"tell me some thing which i don't know ,,ok!!!"
abhay(rolls hie eyes)-"ya yaya... whatever"
sid-"hey , by the u know na u r going to join college tommorow, i m very excited..."(rub his palm with glittering eyes)
abhay could not not understand y he was so excited and staring him in confusing
sid (reading his mind and face expression)-"oh my little innocent brother. i will also come with u to talk to our principal and do formalities and also making all dehradoon hooties go drool over me...(looks at abhay who was glaring him with narrow eyes)...ok okkk i will let some girls go drool over u also . now happy . see how big heart i have!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
saying this they both started laughing and began their pillow fighting which turn out to be a great mess in sid room causing damage to furniture.

while along at the same time in dobrial house-
whole house was decorated with lights ,flowers and different decorating materials for party. mean while all doberial sisters went for shopping and were chating and getting ready for party .
madhu yell at servants to fasten their hand as guest would be arriving any time. and then went to check on if her daughters were ready or not.and she went to their room.
madhu-"panchiii,piaaa,mishaaa. r u all are ready...???"
all three in unison-"yesss ...mom"
pia wore purple strapless long gown with half tied hair and falling on her left shoulder with very natural , sober makeup and light weighted silver jewellary. she was looking very gorgeous,eligent,beautiful like princess.
panchi wore pink color gown with some contras patches on it... she had tied her hair making bun of it . she was looking very pretty.
misha as usual was in her funky-cool tomboy look
madhu(with teary eyes,looking at pia and panchi)-"awww my little angels. u both r looking breath-taking, my dear."(kissing their forehead)
pia & panchi-"thank u mom..."
but seeing misha in her tomboy get furious and shouted at misha
madhu-"mishaaa... r u out of ur mind what r u wearing????????/"
misha-"what mom, u don't know that i m wearing cloth that r washed such a silly question ahhh and by the way whats the big deal"
madhu(angrily)-"misha doberial, get that straight into ur little dumb head that if u came down like this than i will snatch ur bike key and will not give u pocket money for next two months. got it."
misha(jumping and patting her feet)- "but mom... "
madhu-"not but. its final. get ready fast in 15 mins and come down.(politely) pia help her out. and panchi come with me , u help me out down stairs"
pia-panchi-"ok kkk mom"
misha(folding her arm)-"ok fine . i'll change. why every one is after my life"
then panchi and madhu left and pia gave her short knee length blue dress to misha to change.
after a while , they all were ready and guest were starting coming, madhu-arnav greets everyone and party starts.
arnav(taking mike)-"every one , excuse me ,attention please , ladies and gentlemen. today we have gathered here to celebrate as my two lovely daughters are back. pia , misha are here with us.(they both comeand stand next to arnav and smile to every one)i m very happy as my family is complete now. so thank u all of u for coming and sharing ur happiness. so let the party begins"
.
every one cheers and clap.
panchi was busy with her some NGO'S and college friends. as she has some emergency in one of her NGO so she left party after a while informing madhu about it
misha and pia went towards bar counter where their friends(kabir-ruhi-angad-shanker and the irritating T were present)
kabir(with wide eyes)-"wow www... pia u look sooo...mesmerizing"
pia(with pride)-"tell me that i don't know... by the way thanks for complement"(and smiles)
kabir(smiles)-"my pleasure..
by the way misha u also look great"
shanker-"i agree with him. u both r looking out of this world , seriously"
misha (makes face)-"dude stop it now .i know i m looking like alien who landed from mars... u know how irritating this bimbotic dress is and these heels mannn its hurt. i cant even walk proper. i swear i will kill that b**** who invented them. have merci on me yarrr'
every one laughs
T was fuming like volcano which is going to erupt any time
T-"oh please. u dobrial sister , u all r so attention seeking bimbos..."
pia(smirk)-"oh T HOW WELL U KNOW US. i m glad"
every one is shocked
misha jaw dropped opened in disbelief
pia-"and u also know that one more word u shit out ur dirty mouth and i will kick ur ass u b*****. so u better shut,... otherwise with in a second u will forget who u r and curse ur birth."
T left the place with anger and giving dagger looks to her
T-"i will see u bloody B**** doberial later "
misha-"me too"
and every body laugh
after some time elders were having their party outside in garden and youngsters inside house.
the dj played the music, every body were dancing.grooving.enjoying,laughing,drinking.
where at the bar counter-
kabir-angad-shanker-pia-misha-ruhi were having competition of taking maximum number of shots.
misha-"come on every one , let see who has the gut to take over great misha.. hahaha"
pia-"this time u r gonna loose.,misha "
kabir-"lets see"
they all start
ruhi-
angad down after 2 shots.
shanker after 4 shots
kabir after 6 shots
now there was competition btw two sisters.
misha(smirks)-"u can't upper hand me pia. i m more use to them u better accept ur defeat"
pia-'better luck next time mish..."
after taking 8 shots kabir-shanker try to stop them
kabir-"girls its better u over it now. its enough now. okkk . you can't hold now. u know na tommorow u both have to come college. so stop it now'
pia-'ohhh come on kabir. don't be spoil sport cheer up. u r behaving like small kid"
misha-"pia u better accept...'
pia"no never. pia doberial never lose"
mean while almost party was over only some special guests were left. and at the same time madhu-arnav came back into house.and sees their daughters at bar counter having shots and werefully drunk
seeing this madhu gets angry and shouts at them
madhu-"piaaa , mishaaa... stop this non sense right now. other wise..."
arnav making her calm down
arnav-"madhu , relax. pia misha the party is over now . go to ur room now. (to others) its late now i think u all should also leave now as tomorrow u all have college"
misha & pia-"but papa..."
arnav-"no its enough... go now..."
pia & misha-"ok fine now'
they all bid good bye to their friends and went to there room
by now panchi also came back and went to her room
in pia room -
pia was sleeping soundly when she sees two deep blue hypnotic eyes in her dream
and she get up with jerk which made her head spin and she felt dizzy.she look at clock it was 05:30 a.m. so she tries to sleep again but could not and every time those two eyes haunted her and her headache was unbearable so she finally gets up and went to have something for her headache.
after drinking she comes back to her room and stand near window closing her eyes but again she sees those eyes but this time she could see his whole face and he was not other than that young, handsome man whom she had seen at delhi airport.
she was feeling very strange that she could understand whether it was good sign or bad sign. why she saw him??what was that?what does it mean?/


precap-
in mount college - abhiya meeting


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Edited by laxmii - 13 years ago
alicia212 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
#43
wow great story plz update soon
I'm really looking forward to your next part of the story
I'm wondering what is going to happend when abhay or pia meeting at rhe college
alicia212 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
#44
wow great story plz update soon

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Posted: 13 years ago
#45
amazing yr...
sid is really gr8... i loved sid abhay bonding...
d party was gr8... i loved it...
waiting 4 abhay pia meating...
cont soon n thanks 4 d pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
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WOWWW AWESOME UPDATE:-):-) LOVED IT:-):-)
SheDevil thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
#47
Nice update
Cant wait 4 abhiya's meeting
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Posted: 13 years ago
#48
lovely update..m loving sid n abhay's bond..waiting for abhiya meet
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Posted: 13 years ago
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continue soon ..waiting 4 abhiya meetin
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hi
thanks for liking the update and comments.
sorry i could not reply individually .
so here it goes, hope u will like it.

chapter 4
next morning-

in doberial's house-
in pia room-
while thinking about her dream she sat on the chair kept in her balcony and doesn't realize when she again doze off.
around 8:00a.m. , misha entered her room to wake her up for college . and to her surprise pia was not on her bed which shocked
misha
misha(with wide eyes)-"omggg...(very loud,almost shouting)
and this made pia get up with jerk, moving her head left-right with astonishment.
pia(running back to her room)-"what happened... why r u shouting??"
misha(still shocked)-"oh god ... m i dreaming??"
(pinches herself) oouucchh...(than rubbing)
pia(almost irritated,losing her temper)-"will u shit out what happened that u shouted like this..."
misha-"i can't believe u got up early that too on ur own. i still can't believe it..!!!"
pia was rolling her eyes and recalling her dream and those blue eyes, perfect face,sharp jaw lines, silky black hair.
while misha was babbling and realize that pia was lost some where.
misha-"pia...piaaa"(clicking her finger in front of her face bringing her back)...hey day dreamer come back on earth... dude what the hell from when did u started day dreaming haaa... r u ok ... or should i call sycatress ??"
pia(burning with anger giving daggers look, throw pillow on her)-"oh u .. shut up .. idiot... don't stress on ur dumb head... it will get hamrage...and i m not day dreaming okkk... by the way what made u to storm in my room so early??"
misha-"ahhh day dreamer...(pia glares) ok fine piaaa... u know na today we have to go college...remember... so i came to wake u up but u were..."
pia-"ok i understood... u go i'll come in half an hour"
misha-"ok come fast.. i m waiting down stairs...'
pia-"ya ya"
then she went to bathroom to freshen up and after almost an hour she got readt wearing purple short knee length dress with matching heels, little make up and her curly hair were open on her shoulder and was fully prepared to make boys drool over her.misha was as usual in her t-shirt and torn jeans. she came down at breakfast table where misha was furiously pacing and waiting for her.
arnav(at breakfast table)-"are u both not going college??. its all ready late. where is pia??"
pia-'i m ready ... lets go.."
misha-"ahhh finally u made it . i thought u would take a century to come down... mann what takes u so much time. we are all ready late u know na ..."
pia-"shut up ... and from when, u were so eager to go college??... whats cooking haaa."
misha-"ohhh... stop it . its nothing like that. i m just excited and haaa ... lots of chit-chat is done, we should leave now"
pia-"ok fine, bye papa.,bye mom,bye di"
misha-'bye all of u . lets go now..."
arnav-"bye both of u and take care"
misha(rolling eyes)-"ya ya"
and they leave for college on misha's bike.
in riachand mansion-
at the same time,chand-hasina were sitting in hall.waiting for abhay-sid.
chand-"hasina, i hope u talked to abhay and told him..."
hasina(assuring)-"i told him chand, relax. he will behave like normal teenage boy, mix with people,make friends and he promised to do that. u can trust me . he will not repeat it again."
chand
-"u better be right"
meanwhile sid-abhay comes down and sit with them.
chand-"abhay, r u ready for college?."
abahy-"yes, dad. and i m sorry for yesterday. "
chand-"its ok .(to sid) u know na sid u have to talk to his principal...and behave properly.ok and u both try to avoid using ur powers in public, m i clear???"
sid-abhay-"yes dad"
sid-"we better should leave. after that i have to go office for meeting"
chand-hasina-"ok go ..."
abhay-sid-"bye mom.bye dad"
and they leave for college in sid car. while driving their way to college there was complete silent which annoys sid , so breaks the silence.
sid-"my little brother, don't be nervous. its college only..."(seeing towards him for his reaction as abhay was glaring him)
and then after a sec they both laugh.
abhay-"u know its not that bhai ...(serious tone) i m sorry bhai but i promise that now i will try my best to move on in my life at least for u and mom'
sid-"no need to say sorry my little brother and if u again say so then ...then i will bite u...(looks at him) ok just joking... and one more thing move on not for me or mom but for urself. if u want us to be happy . then for once give urself one chance, one chance to ur life...to destiny..."
abhay(smirk)-"u know bhai u are talking like mom..."
both laugh
abhay-"i promise..."
sid-"to make girls bend on their knees..."
abhay-"u don;t think any other thing accept girls. some time i have doubt on u that r u really my brother and son of mom-dad...(and he realizes what he said) i mean..."
sid-"its ok .. no need to explain. ...(smiles) even sometimes i also doubt the same"
abhay-" u r ..."
sid-"ahhh i know best in this world...okkk ... by the way we have reached ur college. i m too excited"
abhay-"kuch nahi ho sakta apka bhai"
in college-
pia-misha went to their group.
kabir-"hey , girls where were u , we were waiting for so long"
misha-"its not my mistake.. "
pia-"ohhh let it be ... so whats up guys.."
kabir-'welll nothing spacial ... by the way u look gorgeous today , pia"
shanker-" gorgeous??..."
every body looks at him
shanker-" i mean she is looking out of this world , mannn"
pia-"ohhh thanksss..."
ruhi comes running towards them and almost crashing on them with excitement
angad-"baby. what happen ??why r u so excited??"
misha-"so who is the new guy now ????"
ruhi-"he is handsome,smart,tall,dark, men in black,dashing, out this world..."
kabir-shanker get annoyed with desciption
kabir-"thanks for the desciption ,tracher "
pia was little bit curious about him.
shanker-"what's his name??"
ruhi-"he name is ...aaa oh my god ...he is there(pointing finger towards college gate while jumping)
every one turns and look towards that direction.

there was a
tall boy entering in college .The boy was clad in a black jacket, dark jeans and an ash-coloured shirt. His face was fair, extremely handsome with deep blue hypnotic eyes but had a little bit hard look in his perfectly cut face that told he was a tough guy.
pia was shocked to see that he is same boy whom she saw at delhi airport and in her dream and also had a strange feeling and feel attracted towards him . At that moment, pia's big brown eyes locked with his deep blue eyes
They stared at each other and pia was unable to break it till ruhi started fainting and falling on her..
Across the way, abhay was also a bit perplexed and uncomfortable with those staring eyes. of people around her and was hell shocked to see pia standing in front of his eyes but he played it calmly, not showing his mixed emotions.and try to divert his mind and control his feelings and there he sees misha standing next to her.
before this , sid got a call so he was still in parking lot but he told abhay that he would directly meet him in principal office , so abhay left and went alone.
while moving in corridor, he came across misha and his gang and stand and gave whole hearted smile showing his deep dimple towards them.
every one was confuse with that smile accept misha who also was smiling fully which does not go unnoticed by everyone and were confuse with misha behaviour that too towards a boy.
pia was in trauma. she could believe that he was standing in front of her. she was shocked, happy, excited to talk to him and was flat when he came towards them , standing and giving such a cute smile with those dimple.it was breathe taking, she could do any thing other than stare him
but at same time could not understand why he was smiling and coming towards them and was bit confuse with misha's response towards him which made her uneasy.
some where in her heart
she even did not know his name and she started feeling jealous seeing all the girls staring him like they want his piece
all the boys were just glaring at him like they will eat him up.
misha(smile)-"so u made it "
abhay-"ya ... so as u ??"
every body jaws drop opened and could not believe on their eyes.
pia was hell shocked and felt like
earth beneath her foot had moved and a sharo knife is pass through her heart. but she was so mesmerize by his voice that for her it seems like the best sound in this whole world.
she could not digest that how come on earth her sister know him and she did not even bother to tell her.

precap-
abhiya's meeting

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