Abhiya SS:My Beautiful Disaster(Note pg143)

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Posted: 13 years ago

#511

Originally posted by: Phoenix.Xeelan

Thanks for the wonderful comments Manasa... it means a lot to me 🤗 Its very high and emotion I have always felt that. and I think even last time I commented somewhere that Im usually lost while writing it.n sometimes i get so sad that I feel like crying...they are in so much pain. They surely are going to have a child 😉 and im not sure if she will run away. dont think so...dont wry. But Chand will surely come and when he will find him they will be together. will get romantic updates from update after next. 😳

U have no idea how much u have made me cry 😭 I can literally feel each n every word 😳 Haila? 😲 Abhiya baby? Sachchi?????????????????????? 😃 Par plz ye mat kehna ki epilogue mein milega 😡 Plz I want Abhay to enjoy the phase of fatherhood too. Bechara 😭 He has missed out on a lot of things in life 😭 Ab chocloate mousse cake dekha kar cheen na mat, OK? I am already in Abhiya la la land 😍 thanks to ur reply. I always love to see this phase in the lives of any fav couple of mine. How I wish we had got one in the show? 😭

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Posted: 13 years ago

#512

Originally posted by: bookworm-ALS--
I had tears in my eyes when I was reading Abhay's story. It was so well written Tnzie! And so Abhay and Pia both realise they love each other but are hiding it... I wonder how long they can keep it up! Lol. Continue soon

Sorry Shreya.. wait for Pia's story. it mght be difficult to decide who had the worst background. and glad u liked it. im emotional myself while writing it. donno how many times I read and my heart wrenched in pain. Wont be hiding for long 😉

Originally posted by: abhiya0006
Abhay and pia both love each other!! just haven't confessed! 😉

glad Abhay opened up and shared about his life wid pia!!

😊

him buying her a saree was soo cute!😍

They wont be confessing in typical way. 😆 thanks for reading 😊

Originally posted by: abhiya_pkyek
AWESUM UPDT TANZIE!!! WAITING 4 ABHIYA 2 CONFESS THIER LUV..LOVED
ABHAY'S STORYN ALL ABHIYA MOMENTS WERE AWESUMN CUTE

N CHAND..HOPE HE DOESN'T FIND THEM..THNX 4 D PM N CONTINUE SOON..

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Thanks a lot. They wont be confessing in a typical way. its going to be very difficult n complicated. Chand will find them much later but he will. he must.

Originally posted by: Pari-Gupta

awesome update

loved it

finally Abhiya realised love for each other

It was a really emotional update

It was fantastic to read that Abhay wanted to change for Piya

Only Piya could make him realise what could really bring peace to his mother's soul

So Chand is still keen on finding Abhay and he belives that he is still alive

Abhay bought a sari for Piya wow I hope he helps her in wearing that😉

Continue soon

thanks for the PM

Thanks a lot Pari. Lolz.. no Abhay wont be helping Pia wearing it. 😆 its not gonna be so typical. their relationship is very complicated so there wont be any formal confession as well. but the undeniable passion they hold for each other is gonna explode very soon 😳

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Posted: 13 years ago

#513

Originally posted by: flora212
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UFF WHAT A UPDATE!!! REALLY BREATH TAKING...U DESCIBED WELL ABHIYA'S FEELING FR EACHOTHER!! WOW..ABHIYA R FALLING IN LOVE..GREAT GREAT!!! I AM REALLY LOVING THE WAY U R TURNING THE STORY...SUPERB!!! AND MAKE THIS SS LONG...ITS ONE OF MY FABOURITE😃

ABHAY BOUGHT SAREE FR PIA...SO CUTE!!! I AM JUST WAITING FR THE DAY WHEN ABHAY AND PIA WILL CONFEESS THIER LOVE FR EACH OTHER...AND WHO IS CHAND???😕IS HE PIA'S REAL FATHER!!!!😲 WANT SOME MORE HOTY ROMANTIC SCENE...AND YES I WANT PIA TO BE JELOUS OF ANY BIMBO MODEL AS ABHIYA R GOING TO MODEL PARTY!! 😳

UPDATE SOON...CANT WAIT FR NEXT CHAPPY!!!

Pia will be very jealous of all the models drooling over Abhay...don't worry 😆 and their confession wont be in any typical way. glad u are liking the story. hope you enjoy reading further

Originally posted by: hema_rawat

beautiful update tanzie ...

u describe abhaiy emotions so well ...

i luv whn abhay said " is it hurting me or its hurtng u ",

aww abhiya luv each other yeee ...

abhay bought saree 4 pia so sweet .. nw i m waitng 4 dere confessn ...

Thanks hema. Its always a pleasure to write such a complex and rich in emotion character like Abhay. And Abhiyas devine relationship is a pleasure to write so I enjoy it a lot. Their confession...hmm let's see 😆

Originally posted by: abhayfan_dishu
Tanzie, that's a fabulous update dear. how i love the gradual falling in love of Abhiya. their hesitations, their confusions it's just amazing.

so chand is the master. so now trouble is going to enter their little paradise soon

Thanks Dishu. I didn't want to rush it. Since they have been through too much and according to their characteritics its impossible they will fall in love so soon.

Chand will find them much later.

Originally posted by: .rumki.
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awesome update👏
loved abhiya moments😳
hope abhiya will confess their love soon

Thanks Rumki. Glad u liked it

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Posted: 13 years ago

#514

Originally posted by: anjali0111
awwwe so cute update❤️!!!!👏

full of emotions n love❤️...jus the way i like it.👍🏼...loved ur idea of taking their love story slowly...i m quite romantic person myself...n big sucker of romantic stories😆...i knw people like me does'nt exists in todays world😆 as i believe in love as it was in olden times...slow but passionate...away frm todays pomp n show...😍...n u just described it in ur ff in the same way. thank you... thanku so much 🤗 i know reality is too harsh thats why love stories which passion and complication are so popular.. according to Abhay and Pia's character in this SS.. its just impossible to fall in love overnight so had to take it slow...

both r complex persons...wid troubled past...so there cant be love at first sight...it has to take time n slowly build up trust n friendship as a plinth on which love can stand up straight ...so far abhiya have done this job n only needs to confess it.😉will be eagerly waiting for that.😍 Exactly u said it all correct their confession wont be in typical way too...

loved each n every part of update❤️...specially where abhay told abt his past n pia cud feel his pain...there was no need of words between them at that moment. also i felt bad for pia when she was imagining herself in his mom's place😔 ... abhay's past was too dark n i can guess in future both will face problems because of it...but plz plz...no matter what...dont seperate them though i m ok wid temporary separation😆 for the progress of story...as it will have twist n turns but plz do give it a happy ending.😊 She has already fallen for him and she knows that. but she knows it too loving abhay wont be easy. so she is confused. and Abhay's own history is proof how this love stories turn out. and when abhay will realize Pia loves him he will initially avoid it only to make things worse.

now jus that every thing is going fine betwen them what that jerk chand😡 wants frm abhay...why cant he let him leave in peace????😡 dont let happen anything to him before he confesses his love n we have some lovey dovey moments.😉 Chand wont find them soon. When he will abhiya will be together by that time. but he will find abhay - that is certain.

continue soon.😊

Originally posted by: abhiora
lovely update tanz!!!they r falling hard 4 each other!!u describe their love so beautifully..its amazing!!!oh nw ths chand is here to disrupt this magical world:-(bt hpe nthng separates abhiya!!wishng ur mother gud health,tanzie:-)

Thanks Tora. Glad u liked it dear 😳 Thanks for the wishes dear... she is recovering very slowly.. will take time

Originally posted by: bellaaa
just loved it yar...
awsome update...
abhay is nice to her...telling her all the past of his life...wow
abhiya are getting closer day by day...hmmm
so now waiting for piya reaction when he touched her...
both were in love now...
so sweet of abhay gave a saree to piya...
hope chand didnt find him...
cont soon

Thanks Beenish. That reaction wont be important... u will get plenty later 😉 glad u liked it.. chand will find them but there's still time for that...

Originally posted by: Rmuk
Brilliant update tanzie. I loved each and every part of it. Really beautifully written. Abhay and piya's past was really painful.
wow abhay brought a saree for piya that's great.
abhay and piya's pov were really written wonderfully.
so, now both abhiya are In love with each other but are not confessing. Pls make them continue soon. I loved this update to the core. U are a great writer.
pls continue soon and thanks a lot for the pm.

Thanks Romita. glad u loved it 😳 They are very complicated character so confessing wont be easy. thank you so much. glad i could please you 😊

Originally posted by: .Shiva.
WOW!! too good👏👏👏👏👏i so loved piya's POV and abhay's POV⭐️
this line was bonus for me, what a thoughts.

'Love is like poison ... the sweetest poison you can ever have. It gives you blissful pleasure and then destroys you from limb to limb. But she also wrote, The purest kind of love, which is one of a kind can decontaminate even the darkest heart. The dark heart can be sterile from the depravity only if a purest soul sacrifices their heart to their beloved and I wish my son could find that kind of love one day."

👏👏
👏

Thanks a lot Bani 🤗 glad I could please you 😳

Originally posted by: snitchseeker
I was crying hearing Abhay's story. Its so painful Beautifully written Tanzie update sooner and oh please dont make anyone find abhay for atleast 3-4 updates more and not before they had kissed

Sorry for making you cry Snig 🤗 glad u liked it. Chand will find Abhay much later and you will get the kiss very soon 😉

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Posted: 13 years ago

#515

Originally posted by: shivanipandit29
Another Amazing update its awesome beautifully written👏👏👏
Abhiya love each other yippie
i am loving the gradual build up
finally Abhay opened to piya
Abhay bought a saree cool so cute n piya was going to wear a saree
i think she will wear the Saree Abahy gifted her.

Wishing your mom get well soon n fast recovery from sickness.

Thanks Shivani. 🤗 I love to write about their gradual buildup relationshp and mutual understanding as well 😳 She will defo wear the saree. thanks for wishes for my mom 😊

Originally posted by: kuttu
Abhay and Pia are slowly relaizing their love for one another. They are waiting for who is going to make the first move. I hope the fashion show is not going to expose Abhay. And why do i get a creepy feeling about Chand he seems to know too much about Abhay. He knows that he is an asset and is Pia his daughter then I guess all the more reason for him to get Abhay.
This story is getting to be a bit darker now i guess with Chand behind Abhay and Pia. But till then will we get to see some lovely romantic moments of Abhiya and the the dog being jealous was really sweet.

Fashion show wont expose Abhay but it will expose a truth in Pia's life for sure. Chand surely knows too much about Abhay. he has build up Abhay not to forget. it will get very dark but Chand wont find him soon. Will surely get lots of romantic scenes soon 😊

Originally posted by: luckdiya
muah!!!!!muah!!!!!!muah!!!!! outstanding.update tanzie...
u made me cry...abhay's story ws painful... slowly & gradually dey r falling in l❤️v...or i cn say dey r in luv😍 omg!!!!!! pia ws tryin 2 wear a saree...⭐️⭐️sooo cute.abhay is jealous of kabir...😆😆its natural...i lik d defination of luv...
lst bt nt d least abhay gifted her a saree...⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
dis is my fav ss... keep writing...

Thank you thank you Diya...glad u liked it so much 😳 Pia will be jealous in next update too. Thank you so much for considering this as your fav SS 🤗

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Posted: 13 years ago

#516

Originally posted by: sweet_neetu
No words left to explain..
So beautifully written...
Abhiya is fallen for each other..
But surly their past will come between their future...
Thnxx for update...

Thanks a lot Neetu. surely it will. and glad u liked it 😊

Originally posted by: MS-meghasharma
brilliant update
it was written beautifully.👏👏👏👏

abhay's entire story was very painful and i really felt bad for his mom...she was such a nice women.

m glad that after that awkward situation in the first part...pia has managed to get abhay back to her place.

just loved how their love story is moving...abhay sleeping in pia's lap was beautiful and he brought a gift for her...dat's so sweet.

i lvd hw pia managed to make him go with her to fashion show

it was an amazing part and i just can't waiti to read more...

thanks for the pm.

Thanks Megha. Glad u liked it. Both are so stubborn 😆 will update within sunday 😳

Originally posted by: -juhi-lily-
wow tanzie such an awesome nd lovly update!!!
so both hav fallen hard for each other bt alas!! they didn't confess fools...!
chand fir aa gaya interfere karne 😡
he gifted a sari awww!! nd both r going for party yay!!
continue soon nd thanx for d pm😊

Thanks Juhi. they have complicated pasts and painful life. confession or falling in love isn't easy for them. so i dont wanna rush. and there's wont be any official confession.

Originally posted by: strawberryrashu
Slow and steady love grt going tanzie...gift ha gud i hope they will realize their feelings soon and no probs now in fashion show btw why do i feel abhay will help her in wearing saree😉

They will realize very soon but sorry to dissapoint you Rashu... he wont be helping in wearing the saree.. it has been written too many times in different Ffs...i wont write it 😆

Originally posted by: SheIsTheOne
It was a amazing update...I was kinda touched reading Abhay's story...😭 reminded me of someone and something 😭anyways... Abhay-Piya are in love with each other... .😃 just AMAZING...loved it...🤗 Just love u for that...😃 Please continue soon...😊

Thanks dear. May I know your name? glad u liked it 😳

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Posted: 13 years ago

#517

Comment updated on pg-69
plzz check!

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Posted: 13 years ago

#518

Originally posted by: lost_in_love
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beautiful..wonderful..awesum...exceptional but painful,hearttouching update tanzie!!!! 👏 👏 thanks a lot dear 🤗

'but dis is who I AM and I cnt change it.' one cn feel the pain n determinatn in hs voice..
'her tremblng voice and disbelvng...ws ringng inside my head..hammerng my heart cruelly.'..he is deeply hurt as no 1else evr touchd the part whch pia did.!!
"she reminded me my place,my identity...this is tym for reality check abhay"...ths part ws beautifuly writtn...pain ws evrywhere!! Thanks a lot 😳

"dnt leave like this...you need medicl attntn." ...um it cn b seen very well tht pia ws desparate to stop abhay! So she usd hs physcl cnditn as d vital reason instead of sayng tht she cared! Bt a man lyk abhay wud gve a damn!! Thy nevr care wethr thy live or die,all thy want and care is LOVE and only LOVE !!!
"thanku..whtevr u hv dne..to repay u it wud b an insult to u..." he's soo sensible!! He knws wel tht love n kindness cnt b repaid!!
"i wish we cud hv the same situatn in alternative atmosphere"haha..he is hopelessly n love wth her!!
"her eyes r soo beautiful..no wonder she ws a brand ambassador for eyeliner." wow!he's noticng it nw!! Bt tht ws romantic!!
"he grabbd my other hand in sleep and tuggd it near hs chest." this moment was beautiful!!!

Lovd reading pia's pov..specially this.."We are bth tryng to avoid our eyes...in unknwn rythmn of Love and Light." ⭐️ Thanks a lot dear.. glad u quoted some of my fav parts. they have both gone through so much pain that this new feeling os happiness n love is at the same time wondering and scary for them... but above all its beautiful 😊

"Love is lyk a poison...the dark heart cn b steril frm the depravity nly if a purest soul...sacrifices their heart to their belovd." I love..love..lovd it!! Among all the updats n ths ss,this was the best line ever!!! ❤️ Standing ovation..👏 👏 that should be my fav part from last update 😆
my dog bixie hates him...one day he ws smilng n sayng..."You'r jealous of me"...haha...tht ws soo cute and innocent!!
Hm..so abhay is jealous of kabir! bt the pain n darkness tht he hd undergone,its natural tht he fears losing pia,the nly posession he hd n hs lyf ryt nw!!
"I'm really behaving lyk a love sick teenager." haha..bt thts how love Is!!! It makes 1 childish,crazy and wat nt!!!
it seems amusng at hw nervious he was..bt thn love cn do miracles!!
"Thanku so much...dnt hv to show ur appreciatn. I understand." It was simple yet beautiful!! I soo soo loved it!! It hd such depth! They really dnt need to say anythng,they'r connectd and cn feel eachothr anyway!!! ❤️ their silence speak as well... 😳

so chand is lukng for abhay! I hope he dsnt find hm befre their love lyf blooms!! I knw their stry s nt an usual kind,its dark,rough..full of uncertainty! Bt as f nw I, just lyk abhay, dnt want to thnk abt it, rather i want to enjy their exceptional love story b4 a hurricane engulfs it!!
Once again,it ws an awesum update!! thanks dear.. chand wont find them soon. dont worry. 😆

Continue soon tanzie!! Thanx for the pm..
And i knw by nw u'r usd to me,so no, i wnt say sorry!! 😆 😉
Tak..cre..and hwz ur mom nw? yes, im used to with it 😆 mom is not that good. long wait for recovery..pray for her

--Indu

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Posted: 13 years ago

#519

😆aww my guess was wrong hehe koi na i know u will write some other kind of romance he can remove her saree also 🤣

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Posted: 13 years ago

#520

Originally posted by: strawberryrashu
😆aww my guess was wrong hehe koi na i know u will write some other kind of romance he can remove her saree also 🤣

WOW RASHU WHAT AN IMAGINATION🤣

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