Abhiya SS:My Beautiful Disaster(Note pg143)

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Posted: 13 years ago

#501

thnx for d pm

awesome gr8t

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Posted: 13 years ago

#502

Hi..I am Sonu..I am new here...😊 😃

An awesome SS it is..👏 👏 Its a brilliant piece of work ...

I loved all d updates...

waiting for their confession...😍

Please continue soon...

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Mandy

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Posted: 13 years ago

#503

Tanzie update karo na plz? 😭 Atleast let us know when u'll do it. This is one of my fav yaar. Waiting for a long time 😃

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.SmokeySilence.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#504

Next update will be up by saturday night or Sunday everyone. Heena has recovered so we have started writing yesterday 🤗

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sonali

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Posted: 13 years ago

#505

tanzu...nt sunday yar..its too long to read...on saturday..plz .plz..plz han...!thanx.

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.SmokeySilence.

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: --sonali--
tanzu...nt sunday yar..its too long to read...on saturday..plz .plz..plz han...!thanx.

It's not Tanzu... Tanzie 😆 and will try but can't promise sorry. we both of lots of work now but will try our best... 😳

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..juhi..

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Posted: 13 years ago

#507

whenever u update it tanzie i dont hav any problem...i understand u hav work...

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flora212

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: Phoenix.Xeelan
Next update will be up by saturday night or Sunday everyone. Heena has recovered so we have started writing yesterday 🤗

nahi🤢 ar aktu age pls😆

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.SmokeySilence.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#509

Originally posted by: -Sonia-
awesome update ... Tanzie !

Loved it to the core

Finally! Abhiya have realized their love for each other...I am so happy for abhiya... They have found solace in each other...Cannot wait until they confess their love ... It's going to be difficult 😆

This SS just gets better from chapter to chapter! It was superb !

I really felt bad for abhay.. hate his father ! I'm glad that Piya understands him!

Bixie getting jealous from abhay was sooo cute ! I actually had a tortoise name Bixie 😆 and glad u liking the chapters 😳

OMG ! Abhay bought a saree for piya.. Sho shweeet ! Cant wait for the show & Abhay watching piya wearing his gifted saree... The moment is going to be so special !!

Master Chand is still looking for abhay ! I hope he doesnt succeed in finding him ! I dont want abhay to go back to the dark world...

Continue soon
thanks for the pm
tc Chand is far away for now. but another trouble will hit them next update. but Chand will come...

Originally posted by: mandy1024

Tanzie, sorry yaar, this time I really have no words to say for the update 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏 Hopefully u get what I mean 😃 I so loved everything abt it. Abhay's POV was brilliantly written. Abhiya are in love even though a confession hasnt happened? 😍 And I already love Bixie 😳 Choo cute 😊 Abhay competing with a dog for Pia's affection? 😆 This is so emotional and so beautifully written that I can literally feel each and every emotion Abhiya go through. Loved the fact that Abhay bought a saree for her 😳 I hope you give us readers something intense n passionate in the next update lets say a super duper emotional Abhiya confession 😃 WOW tat'll make my day 😳 I really hope history doesn repeat yaar 😭 I dont want Abhiya to get seperated again n I definitely dont wanna see Pia run away with Abhay's child(if they have any) like his mom 😭 Please no tragedy there, please please please. Requesting u well in advance in case u had planned for it. I cant stand Abhiya seperation yaar 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 Also I am really scared for them as well. Chand plans to target Rhode Islands? 😲 Please let Abhiya elope yaar 😃 Atleast want a romantic update for few more updates before things get too serious. U rock Tanzie 👍🏼

Thanks for the wonderful comments Manasa... it means a lot to me 🤗 Its very high and emotion I have always felt that. and I think even last time I commented somewhere that Im usually lost while writing it.n sometimes i get so sad that I feel like crying...they are in so much pain. They surely are going to have a child 😉 and im not sure if she will run away. dont think so...dont wry. But Chand will surely come and when he will find him they will be together. will get romantic updates from update after next. 😳

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sonali

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Posted: 13 years ago

#510

ok nt TANZU,TANZIE.k!

---------------EDITED----------------
I think i hav read only haif update on tht ni8-now again read full of it-TANZIE!
as usual awesm update-

u written really well-jst loved it-
like-

1.Now he will leave me? He will leave me? Just like that?
But I don't want him to leave... no way. -true feelings!

My only companion, my dog Bixie is helplessly looking at him.
Maybe wondering where is he going. She doesn't like him because ever since abhay has arrived,
I paid no attention to her bur right now even my poor dog is looking at Abhay sadly.

-aww poor Bixie...!

she looked at me with her tearful baby brown eyes.
There's so much I never noticed before. Her eyes are soo beautiful.
No wonder she was a brand ambassador for eyeliner.
Her lips were rosy and trembling.
We keep looking at each other as I keep drinking her beauty-
--aww-jst nice lines -i can imagine this scene...oho!

"is it hurting me or it's hurting YOU?" is still buzzing in my head.
Why I'm so concerned about him.
I would have no one to share my happiness, pain, ranting, noone to cook for, noone to love... is it what he is for me?
I'm in love with him... yes... that is the answer. I keep looking at him for donno how many hours.
Sometimes I stroked his thick black mane,
sometimes I touched his rugged hand and all I knew is I want him here with me.
he looks so innocent while sleeping but I must not forget he is a killer. How could I ignore that?
--kya likha hai-TANZIE...manna padega boss-thanx!

It's probably the most beautiful morning of my life.
The first thing I saw when I opened my eyes is Pia's face.
Her angelic face in deep slumber leaning against the wall.
Her one hand is under in my grasp and another is near my head.
I was sleeping in her lap peacefully.
Maybe that's why I had the best sleep of my life.
I wish I could look at her like this forever.
I traced her hand with my finger trying not to break her sleep.
I was holding back my urge to touch her.
So stop myself I shut my eyes down and it's when she woke up.
--aww how i wanted this scene in serial-just dream hi reh gaya---bloddy *1!

ya-abhay ki history-such a painfull yar---wrote really well..with all emotion,drama...na?

aww-how beautifullly described them TANZIE-

"Love is like poison ... the sweetest poison you can ever have.
It gives you blissful pleasure and then destroys you from limb to limb.
But she also wrote, The purest kind of love, which is one of a kind can decontaminate even the darkest heart.
The dark heart can be sterile from the depravity only if a purest soul sacrifices their heart to their beloved
and I wish my son could find that kind of love one day."

AWW--poor abhay

I just couldn't say outloud neither I could say, "Mom... look I have found the purest soul...
the love that is one of a kind.. She has rectified my soul with her love
. Is that it's called? Does she loves me? I don't know but I do...
I have dedicated whatever I have to her.
I will do anything to keep her happy. She deserves it. YA!

He hates social gatherings and wants to live a low-profile life which is impossible for me.
Anyways, I always know how to blackmail him emotionally.
-pia d great..way to go girl!

I just touched the saree again and again and hugged him tightly.
I only managed to whisper, "this is the best gift of my life.
Thank you so much though you don't have to show your appreciation.
I understand.." and he put his arms around me after a while and stroked my hair for the first time...

-mind blowing !

-Abhay is not someone who can be killed so easily.
He was my sword and he is even powerful then that...
-YES-how can abhay dead so easily...!

aur bahot kuch likhna tha---bt..!
really well written with all feelings of abhiya--abhy's past is really painful & pia's too!
made 4 each-other!

now in next update ye hot jodi-going out for d 1st time-WOW,&
inka confession-soon na TANZIE...!want them to accept it soon...bt will surly wait!

waiting for next update eagarly-ON SATURDAY NI8!
aww--heena is well na?hope so...TC!

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