Abhiya SS:My Beautiful Disaster(Note pg143) - Page 50

tanzie,u write beautifully.the update ws so wonderful.full of emotions.the way u describe abhiya's feelings was lovely.

Awsm.Sorry i cant press the like button coz i'm usng net 4m mobile.PLZ PLZ PLZ pm me of ur next update

tanzie you simply rocked 👏 👏 👏

You are out of this world ! 🤗 I cant find suitable words to praise this piece of writing.. How do you manage to write so beautifully yaar ? I have a holiday today on the occassion of Good Friday. And the friday really turned out to be good after reading this update.. I just love love love love love it.
For me, it is the purest form of love. Even before confession, they understand each others unspoken words. They can read the others eyes.. What can be more beautiful than this 😍

Abhay has such a painful past and a sorrowful childhood. This explains why he is the so called killing machine 😭 Bill was such a 🤬 He was just a waste of space..
The worst sufferer was his mother. What a heavy price he paid for falling in love with a criminal 😭
But she must be so happy up there seeing the changed abhay. Thats what she had always wanted. In fact she sacrificed her own life for abhay's sake.. Please dont make abhay go back to the darkness again. I know his past is going to haunt him badly and we cant help it either 😭
But he can fight against all odds with piya being on his side. I just cant see him in the dark world again 😭

The abhiya moment in the room was worth drooling.. She cares for him and he knows it. Aww.. Poor dog. He is getting jealous of abhay 😆
And abhay is going all green seeing kabir. Point hai boss ! 😈

Piya is planning to wear a saree for abhay and he gifted her the same ! Whoa 😃
Piya is going to kill him when she wears the saree..!

I am getting a very bad feeling about Chand.. Is he piya's biological father ? 😲 God that would be devastating 🥺
Hope he doesnt find abhay or piya..

PS - I guess this is the most quickest comment I have ever made on any of your works and that too without reserving a place 😆

Amazing dr...
i loved it... i had tearts in my eyes while reading abhays past...
abhay is nithing like his father... he will nit return 2 d dark world ever again... but i really hope that dis time he gets over with dat...
Abhay n pia loved each other... i wish dey confess each other...
abhay gifted pia a saree dats amazing...
Waiting 2 see abhays reaction in seeing her in saree...
N dat chand can not forget abhay kya? I wish he will never able 2 find out... what happen with abhay...
cont soon wating 4 d next part... cont soon n sry 4 d late reply.. thanks 4 d pm

Nice update Tanzie!

wow awesome update tanzie & heena.Oh I m so unlucky 2 read so many updates late but was y na but koi na now I will b regular.Oh loving Abhiya's blossoming love & I actually feel bad 4 Abhiya's bad fate but happy they r together now & whts pia's history?

Awesome n amazing update Tanzie aarrrggghhh why cant people let Abhay leave alone 😡 chanduuu 😡

Awww such a cute and emotional update it was , really loved it , both abhiya had horrible past , poor abhay's mom,she suffered sooo much I just loved abhay's pov , u had written excellently and abhiya loves each other soo much , so is there any confession in next update and loved piya's dog and abhay wala part so cute and abhay gifted piya a saree awww shoo shweet of him and couldn't chand live without abhay grrr I hate him hope he doesn't find abhay , conti soon tanzie u rock