Abhiya SS:My Beautiful Disaster(Note pg143)

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.SmokeySilence.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#521

Originally posted by: sukusnavnit
awww superb update highly emotional this love track is highly magical and logical love is building gradually and how one feels when fall in love is sweetly depicted. i have always said ur writing style is such that it clearly portrays all feelings in the most accurate way and one feels connected to the characters. waiting eagerly for ur next update ❤️

Thanks a lot. Im really glad u said it. means a lot. emotions are the most powerful thing to portray by words I suppose so I always give my full attention to it. will be updating tomorrow 😊

Originally posted by: TISA07
tanzie,u write beautifully.the update ws so wonderful.full of emotions.the way u describe abhiya's feelings was lovely.

Thanks Tisa. Glad u liked it 😊

Originally posted by: Monami_50
Awsm.Sorry i cant press the like button coz i'm usng net 4m mobile.PLZ PLZ PLZ pm me of ur next update

Thanks a lot dear. will surely send you Pm for next update 😊

Originally posted by: cccppp
wow tenzy amazing update!!!!!👏👏

so good to love between abhiya 😳😳 abhay's story is so pain full..

hummm...abhay jealous of kabeer...😆

and he gift pia sari...wow!!!! i hope pia were it in party and i really love to see that pics...

Thank you. and IT's TANZIE 😆 pics nehi hai..imagine the saree.. its very simple 😆

Originally posted by: priya.1
tanzie you simply rocked 👏 👏 👏
amazing amazing amazing...

when ever i read your update i think this one is ur best update till date but you prove me wrong by giving a better one next time... 😃

it was really a mind blowing update...

abhay's pov & pia's pov was written brilliantly...

both have feeling for each other.. hope they confess very soon...

loved the jealous abhay 😳 but the dog being jealous wid abhay ws super cute 😆

really felt bad for abhay hearing his past 😔

continue soon tanzie...

waiting to see abhay's reaction seeing pis in saree 😍

Thank you so much Priya 🤗 Awww...such a huge complement for me that you think my writing is so good Wait for Pia's past... its also very painful... his reaction will be obviously very pleasant...

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.SmokeySilence.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#522

Originally posted by: flora212

WOW RASHU WHAT AN IMAGINATION🤣

Rashu..offcourse you will want him to remove her saree 😛 🤣 sorry nothing like this is going to happen 😛

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flora212

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Posted: 13 years ago

#523

Originally posted by: Phoenix.Xeelan

Rashu..offcourse you will want him to remove her saree 😛 🤣 sorry nothing like this is going to happen 😛

OH SO SAD😭🤣

Edited by flora212 - 13 years ago

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.SmokeySilence.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#524

Originally posted by: -Chinky-
You are out of this world ! 🤗 I cant find suitable words to praise this piece of writing.. How do you manage to write so beautifully yaar ? I have a holiday today on the occassion of Good Friday. And the friday really turned out to be good after reading this update.. I just love love love love love it.
For me, it is the purest form of love. Even before confession, they understand each others unspoken words. They can read the others eyes.. What can be more beautiful than this 😍 Thank you soo much dear 🤗 . Do you live in US? 😳

Abhay has such a painful past and a sorrowful childhood. This explains why he is the so called killing machine 😭 Bill was such a 🤬 He was just a waste of space..
The worst sufferer was his mother. What a heavy price he paid for falling in love with a criminal 😭
But she must be so happy up there seeing the changed abhay. Thats what she had always wanted. In fact she sacrificed her own life for abhay's sake.. Please dont make abhay go back to the darkness again. I know his past is going to haunt him badly and we cant help it either 😭
But he can fight against all odds with piya being on his side. I just cant see him in the dark world again 😭 That's what Abhay and Pia's concern too. Abhay is self guilty cause he cannot even trust himself for what he has became now. and Abhay's past will haunt Pia thinking her future might be the same.

The abhiya moment in the room was worth drooling.. She cares for him and he knows it. Aww.. Poor dog. He is getting jealous of abhay 😆
And abhay is going all green seeing kabir. Point hai boss ! 😈 Glad u liked it 😆

Piya is planning to wear a saree for abhay and he gifted her the same ! Whoa 😃
Piya is going to kill him when she wears the saree..!

I am getting a very bad feeling about Chand.. Is he piya's biological father ? 😲 God that would be devastating 🥺
Hope he doesnt find abhay or piya.. Chand will find them... that's certain. If Abhay is killing Machine dont forget Chand is the man who made him so he will. but not so soon.

PS - I guess this is the most quickest comment I have ever made on any of your works and that too without reserving a place 😆

yes...I saw it when you commented and I was like no RES and big comment 😆

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@Trouble.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#525

Originally posted by: Phoenix.Xeelan

Rashu..offcourse you will want him to remove her saree 😛 🤣 sorry nothing like this is going to happen 😛

😆😳😛

Edited by abhiya_pkyek - 13 years ago

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Rashmi

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Posted: 13 years ago

#526

🤣 tanzie bad girl...why not 😛...heenu told there is romance in this update ...k will we get passionate kisses ...

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STUTI KANSAL

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Posted: 13 years ago

#527

Originally posted by: strawberryrashu
🤣 tanzie bad girl...why not 😛...heenu told there is romance in this update ...k will we get passionate kisses ...

I ALSO HOPE FOR SOME PASSIONATE KISSES OR HOT ROMANTIC SCEES OF ABHIYA PLSSS THOD SE HOT ROMANTIC UPDATES TO DIKHA HI SAKTE HO HAINA 😳

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Posted: 13 years ago

#528

today yu have to update dear dont forget to update and pm me

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flora212

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Posted: 13 years ago

#529

Originally posted by: strawberryrashu
🤣 tanzie bad girl...why not 😛...heenu told there is romance in this update ...k will we get passionate kisses ...

🤣🤣