Abhiya SS:My Beautiful Disaster(Note pg143)

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Ankita

@Fly_high

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Posted: 13 years ago

#221

awesome work Heena n Tanzie this Abhay is really different n complicated loved d care n Pias past is sad n I hope, wish n want u both give it a happy ending bcz i dont like sad endings

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coolcats123

@coolcats123

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Posted: 13 years ago

#222

gr8 story n awsome update pls pm m nxt tym u update

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Peehu24

@Peehu24

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Posted: 13 years ago

#223

awesome update...very well written! Abhay really is complex. U cant predict him...nd piya is different here! M loving it..

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flora212

@flora212

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Posted: 13 years ago

#224

Tanzie do give happy ending!

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Anj01

@Anj_01

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Posted: 13 years ago

#225

thanks for pm!!!!!😊

awesome update!!!!👏👏👏

abhay is human yet so complicated in this ss😕...far more diff frm other stories n the way u r dealing wid his character (a murderer wid sum humanity still left in the corner of his heart) is jus amazing.👏⭐️👏...he is so ruthless n cold that anybody can hate him...bt u made me luv him by showing his kind side❤️...so basically he is a assassin wid principles...right!!!😳

pia's condition makes me hv pity on her😭...poor soul...first troubled past then empty luvless life was nt enough that nw she has been kidnapped n tortured 😭...n on the top of that she is feeling sumthing for her kidnapper!!!!🤪

liked the way u described their confusion abt each other, kind of sexual tension building between them😳...n the way they r trying to stop themselves frm thinking abt each other!!!!😉 gr8!!!

they hv developed empathy towards each other bt luv still seems far away...hw u gonna make them fall in luv 😍...will be eagerly waiting fr that.

continue soon.😊

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visma

@kuttu

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#226

Is Pia breaking down the barriers he has erected for himself looks like that. But somehow the story doesn't seem to have that fariy tale effect where in the girl falls for the bad guy and he turns out to be an angel. Abhay here seems to have some serious issues and very indifferent inspite of his considerations for Pia. And Pia she is having this sense of security with him Will he break that. And why did Pia have to spell out the one week point in he rlife to Abhay so is going to use that against her.

This is getting to be pretty intense now.

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sandeep

@SANDY_ROSE

Inactive

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Posted: 13 years ago

#227

superb update tanz and heena .😊

I loving this dangerous abhay 😛.

pia tell him truth what abhay do now .😊

pia falling for abhay .😊angry abhay look more sexy than normal .😉 gymnastic part was awesome .😛abhay melting slowly slowly😊 .waiting what happen next do continue dear .😃

Edited by abhiyan_soni - 13 years ago