Abhiya SS:My Beautiful Disaster(Note pg143)

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Rashmi

@Rashu1505

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Posted: 13 years ago

#201

👏awsum mindblowing...heena and tanzie...hmm so why is she saying kill me nt madhu mom...😕abhay kidnapped her but i guess pia is enjoying there...😆

Edited by strawberryrashu - 13 years ago

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Mandy

@BeyondHorizon

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Posted: 13 years ago

#202

This story is brilliant 👏 Kudos to both u n Tanzie. If anything could qualify as a dark love story this surely would. Even though there's nothing supernatural its so dark, intense n passionate 😍 Kidnapper Abhay is surely more complicated than vampire Abhay. Brilliantly written. U guys can give this script to the CVs. Trust me the show will be a super hit.

That bit where Abhay is bare chested reminded me of Jodha Akbar scene where Hrithik will be practicing sword fighting n Ash will be seeing from behind 😆

I also loved the last part where Pia tells him about her true lineage. It was so painful 😭 n Pia loves Madhu so much n Arnab is such a jerk 😡 But maybe since Pia wasn his child he looked at her as if she was a burden There was so much of sexual tension between the two that it was electrifying 😳 Please update the next part soon.

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Disha

@FantasyFan_8

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Posted: 13 years ago

#203

this is awesome heena and tanzie. 👏 absolutely brilliant piece of writing. 👏

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Romita

@Rmuk

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Posted: 13 years ago

#204

Wonderful update. Loved the way u showed the contrast of good and evil in Abhay. The last part where piya said the truth to Abhay was very nice. Ur ff is getting really interesting. Pls update soon and pm me. A big thank you to both u and Tanzie.

Edited by Rmuk - 13 years ago

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bookworm-ALS--

@bookworm-ALS--

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Posted: 13 years ago

#205

Well written tanzie and heena! Abhay really is trying hard to be rude to her...but his control is slipping slowly and surely...wonder what he will do now that piya doesn't seem to know anything?

Edited by bookworm-ALS-- - 13 years ago

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Rose

@--Rose--

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Posted: 13 years ago

#206

wowww... FABULAS update yaar:-) really loved it:-):-)

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tamoha(tora)

@..tora.tangled.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#207

haw!!wundrful update tanz n heena!!!abhay truly is dangerous 4m all angles bt its nt his fault he's soo hawt!!lets see wat abhay says nw he knws that they r nt hr real parents!!!bt a longer update nxt tym pleaseee

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..juhi..

@..juhi..

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Posted: 13 years ago

#208

oh wat an update! jst one wrd FABULOUS!!
pia is so stuborn 😆 abhay is trying vry hard to b rude to her bt his own senses r gettng affectd by pia's gaze[:))]
felt bad for pia wen she told her stry 😭
lets c wat abhay wil do nw...,
hey tanzie u didnt pm me...,.. 😭 😭

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navnit

@sukusnavnit

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Posted: 13 years ago

#209

heartouching update 😍 i simply adore ur writing style and way of presentation. both are experiencing pull for each other although one is the hunter and the other is the prey.plz update soon waiting for what is going to happen next ❤️ 👍🏼