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Posted: 13 years ago
ooohhh .. . . .i love this rough abhay.sooo hoottt .☺️nw he knows all about piya.what will he do?
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Posted: 13 years ago


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awesum...beautiful...marvellous update 👏🤗
heena n tanzie...hats off to both of you... 👍🏼
'tht room ws almst like mine empty n full of darkness' i lovd dis lyn..its so ironical..! !
'I cnt deny is evn n darknss...cold-blooded nd deadly' oh...dis abhay is irresistable.. 😳
Pia hs gt a glimpse of d real persn inside him...
She is makng abhay uncomfortable ,quite natral,he isnt usd to d situatn of a victm depndng n hm(a assasin) ... 😲
Abhay's tryng hs best to terrify hr..
And dis 1 ws amazng..'WTH does he thnk of hmslf' omg pia will nevr change..! She is messing wth an assasin..!!
'I ws also nt ready...sum hlples woman...although ws 1 at tht moment' and tht ws humorous!! 😆
'd way she bats hr eyelashes...thoroughly distrbng me' aahaa..so our handsum assasin is fallng fr hs victim..!! ❤️
Oh..d way she refusd to eat d french fries ws Class ! Pia n only pia cn behave lyk dis...!!
I Lovd dis line...'how stubborn,brave nd rathr intrepid...she does wat she says' that is why she is choosen for abhay... 😉
And by askn abhay , y is he so complex, pia hs set hr foot into AR's World..i thnk..!!! 😉😳
Poor pia..she's havng a hard tym..
'took out a t-shirt n put it...distrbg me!' mm..abhay's gttng too much distrbd lately..!! 😉
Ohh...poor abhaiya..bth need eachothr...hope thy find solace soon...!!!
M feelng the heat nd passion of d unspokn romance already...!!! 😍😳

All ovr..its an mindblowing update...!!! 👏
Bth of you are doin a fav job... 😃
Do update soon... 😊

-Indu
Edited by lost_in_love - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hallo, my 2 lovely ladies!🤗

First thanks for the update. It was lovely yet a bit confusing.
Why is Abhay doing this? He secures Pia yet he is cold towards her??

Poor Pia, mesmerized over his body!! I loved when Abhay snapped Pia out of her drooling!!😳

So Arnab wasn't her father? And Madhu is maternal Aunt??

Thanks for the PM.. Update soon!😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
I am loving Dark Abhay!! Make him possessive as well!! Cont sooon!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
thanks for the pm dear... Loved the update... Continue sooonnn :-)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing!!!
continue soon!!
plz add me 2 ur pm list
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: flora212

Truely it was lovely! thanx dear But how they will fall in love. Is it a lovestory or somethingelse? of,course its love story wid lil difference n soon u wl see wat xact diff i m talking abt😉 I just hope u would give a happy ending may b😆. Abhay is sometimes kind and sometimes evil. he is grey Well update soon sure.








Originally posted by: priya.1

awesome update...thanx

im jus loving this dangerous abhay 😳 glad
nw wt is abhay gona do? pia has told him all da truth she knws... wat ru xpecting him to do??😉
continue soon dr sure

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Posted: 13 years ago
plsss jaldi se update karo and mujhe pm karna mat bhulna
gn tc ks hsd
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jaldi se abhiya ke bich mai LOVE IN THE AIR dikhao plsss
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: -Sonia-

awesome update thanx sonia
loved it glad
OMG! Despite being a killer ... I love this deadly dangerous Abhay ! thanx, dt v could make u guys fall in love wid a killer😉
So, piya told him the truth .. Wat is abhay going to do now? wait n watch
Continue soon sure
thanx for the pm
tc







Originally posted by: abhiya_pkyek

awesum updt thanx

abhay is a 2 face person...nt xactly, he is a grey shade person😊





Originally posted by: strawberryrashu

👏awsum mindblowing...heena and tanzie.thanx a lot rashu..hmm so why is she saying kill me nt madhu mom...😕 coz she is d only person in her life whom she loves n respects abhay kidnapped her but i guess pia is enjoying there...😆 true😆





Originally posted by: mandy1024

This story is brilliant 👏 Kudos to both u n Tanzie. thanx dear If anything could qualify as a dark love story this surely would.awww this is such a big compliment for us Even though there's nothing supernatural its so dark, intense n passionate 😍 Kidnapper Abhay is surely more complicated than vampire Abhay. Brilliantly written. U guys can give this script to the CVs. Trust me the show will be a super hit. dear u r too kind n sweet, thanx for ur such big n warming words... they mean a lot to us😳

That bit where Abhay is bare chested reminded me of Jodha Akbar scene where Hrithik will be practicing sword fighting n Ash will be seeing from behind 😆 hehehehe, bt atleast she was staring her husband😉
I also loved the last part where Pia tells him about her true lineage. It was so painful 😭 n Pia loves Madhu so much n Arnab is such a jerk 😡 But maybe since Pia wasn his child he looked at her as if she was a burden There was so much of sexual tension between the two that it was electrifying 😳 thanx Please update the next part soon.sure







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