Book 2 FF:Till the End of Time(updt*June8*pg140)

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Rashmi

@Rashu1505

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Posted: 13 years ago

#921

Update sadu raichand back 🥳and he was so rude but cute also and i know pia will get him back
this mohini aargh mad women she shld also die with her sis permanently she can live with her thats what mohini wants 🤣 as usual mindblowing update...btw any romance in nxt update 😛

Edited by strawberryrashu - 13 years ago

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sonia

@-Sonia-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#922

OMG Tanzie !
awesome update...beautifully wriiten..loved it
these different shades of abhay are so much fun... The seducing part left me speechless.. Never thought abhay cud do this.. Lol
abhay seems to be too cute when he behaves like a child..& when he is sadu , he still cares for piya!
I hope , peehu & the baby are fine!
Feeling terrible for aryan, amber n piya! I hope , they succeed in bringing the real abhay raichand back!
Continue soon
thanx 4 d pm
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flora212

@flora212

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Posted: 13 years ago

#923

WOW TANZIE GREAT AND AWSOME UPDATE.. LOVED ABHAYS SHADES.. THE UPDATE WAS HOT AS WELL AS DANGEROUS. .NOW HOW ABHAY WILL COME BACK TO PIA.. SUCH A MYSTRY THAT WHO IS THE MAN TALKING TO MOHINI.. I THINK ITS JEY!!

UR STORY IS GETTING MYSTRY DAY BY DAY...

UPDATE SOON..😆

Edited by flora212 - 13 years ago

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..juhi..

@..juhi..

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Posted: 13 years ago

#924

oh my god! this ch was truly as the name says COLORS OF ABHAY RAICHAND god mohini is sooo evil...i m getting vry impatient tanzie to knw abt that ph person...who is he???is he frm SC...nah! wat a member of SC wil get killing its own kind...nw only 2 ppl r left jeh nd mohini 1 is already creating probs nd the other might be on the ph...ah i m getting mad plz continue soon...

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Ayesha khan

@abhiya4evr

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Posted: 13 years ago

#925

Awsome fantastic and mind blowinnng update!!!! 😍 With super HAWTTT abhiya ☺️ ☺️
update soon and thanks for pm 😃

Edited by abhiya4evr - 13 years ago

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Alicia thelwell

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Posted: 13 years ago

#926

wow great story plz update soon

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bookworm-ALS--

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Posted: 13 years ago

#927

Tanzie I love the name of the chapter!
Poor Pia has to bear Abhay blowing hot and blowing cold...
I am waiting to see what Mohini had done in the next chapter...

Ps that Abhiya bit was hotter than the SR... Just saying ;)

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Indu

@Paint.It.BlacK.

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Posted: 13 years ago

#928

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wow!!wow!!wow!! 👏Wat an superbly smashing update tanzie!!!! 👏 Xcellent potray of emotions!!! 👏 ⭐️

poor abhay is completely devastated,confused but becz he is extremly intelligent,he did feel sumthng was wrng!and his thots r heading at the right direction..i love the way this plot is taking shape..if it had been the cvs they wud hv ruined it! Bt i lovd hw despite hs partial memory loss hs mind worked still and he tried to think logically and wantd to go away as evn in hs terrible conditn he was mre worried abt pia! And thts y we love and adore abhay so much!❤️ and tht essence was kept intact thru ur beautiful writing!awesum!⭐️
Abhay seducing pia nd leaving her nd letting her go...and then hs inner turmoil despite of nt remembering anythng...was immencely heartwrenching...tanzie this part was excellent! And only u can write in such a way!!
and u knw dear i am nt so emotional but wen the lost,vulnarable abhay entered i felt terrible!! Tht mohini..😡
bt inspite of everythng pia took care of abhay sumtimes like a loving mother,sumtims as a wife n sumtim as a friend..keeping her pain to herslf! And This part touchd me the most and you wrote it so beautifuly tanzie..i cud feel her pain...wonderful..⭐️
wow! Mohini is singing leaving abhay n aryan to rot in hell..she is humming nw?? Hw dare she..😡
bt here was a mention abt her husband so does dat mean,he is going to enter the picture ?? 🤔

oh..poor alina! She has lovd the wrng guy! Aryan is so nice and kind! He perfctly undrstud her pain and apologsd to her! And tht is why he is everyone's blue eyed boy! Yes he did a mistake bt he ws helples tht tym and i still admire him!😳 bt what wil happn of peehu? Will arhu nevr b able to reunite? or is there any kind of slight chance of aryan-alina happning? 😕
oh..wat abhay did to pia! She is badly injurd! Bt then abhay though unknwnly feels her pain too!! And again dis was an excillnt piece of writing!
Tanzie dats the reasn the moment u told us tht abhay wil show diffrnt colors i said tht it wil b interestng and dis updat shows clearly as to y i said so...the diffrnt emotions actions and their repercussions was just amazingly depicted and though i felt bad bt at the same time it enthralled me!! And tht is the beauty of ur writing!⭐️ 👏
p.s. So mohini's magic hs loopholes too?!! Great! Dat means the old abhay wud b back soon! Yes he is already feeling pia's love nd wth the loophole once found, i hope ,thngs wil b bck to normal again!😃

continue soon dear..and thanks for the pm..😊
take care and thanks again for dis amazing update..🤗
p.s previously i usd to quote d lines always bt wth so many stories to cment nw tht i am no mre able to do tht and i myself feel bad 4 dat! So, Sorry dear,and plz dnt mind!

Edited by lost_in_love - 13 years ago

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Mandy

@BeyondHorizon

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Posted: 13 years ago

#929

Tanzie tat was a super duper update 👏 Loved Abhay Raichand's varying shades 😃 Love the way you breathe life into your characters Tanzie 😳

Pia - My heart was torn on seeing her in this state 😭 She lost everything just when she had found her life's greatest happiness Imagine having her own husband treating her like she's nothing short of dirt? 😭 I nearly cried for her. A man could be your husband but he has no right to force himself on you if you don't want that 😡 Poor her, despite all her fears and the shabby treatment meted out to her she still stood by her husband only to be hurt again. I hope Amber will heal Pia

Amber - I love this woman 😳 I have always loved strong minded woman n she's the perfect iconic choice for woman power. Loved the way she admonished Aryan n then Abhay in the end for all this mess. This girl sure has guts 😃 I applaud her for that 👏

Aryan - Poor guy 😭 My heart goes out to him. He is probably the most selfless person here but he's in this mess thanks to Peehu 😡 I will always hate that woman for what she did to Aryan. I agree she was a desperate mother who wanted to save her child but how could she forget that the child was not just hers but Aryan's also? 🤢 Tats the main reason I hate her. Had she not come back Aryan could probably have moved on with Alina n she was perfect for him 😭

Alina - I felt so bad for this girl. Everytime she faced rejection be it from her family or the love of her life 😭 Aryan could've set things right for her. It will surely hurt to see your love hurting over someone else and I wouldn have blamed if she refused to help Aryan right away but still she let the humanity in her win over her rage n feeling of betrayal 😭 Hats off to her 👏 Please bring someone nice for her. I dont want her pining after a guy who will never love her back.

Mohini - This woman is intriguing 😕 She is at her evil best but something tells me she's not evil at heart. She probably wont run after an innocent. She only wants to avenge her sister. Would really love to study a person like her with such varying drastic aspects. Would be a treat for any psychiatrist. 😃 Now coming to Mohini's husband, seems like he's a big mystery. Waiting to know more abt him. Is Mohini scared of him by any chance? 😉

Now coming to the star of the update ⭐️

Abhay Raichand - What a drastic change! One moment he's all innocent n vulnerable like a child, the other he's a raging bull, then next he turns all seductive - all in one go! Bravo 👏

But well the real star here is u Tanzie ⭐️⭐️⭐️ for coming up with such a stellar update

Edited by mandy1024 - 13 years ago