Book 2 FF:Till the End of Time(updt*June8*pg140)

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@Cute_Gal

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Posted: 13 years ago

#941

dat was an awesome long update..
continue soon..
thanxx for d pm..

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--Siva--

@--Siva--

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Posted: 13 years ago

#942

Tanzie dear!

I loved it! Abhay as a innocent child and as a arrogant vampire at one shot is rare to see yet I feel bad for him and Pia!

If Peehu is the poor soul then I would say Alina is the poorest soul!

Aryan.. Though he told the truth, yet I feel angry on him.. May be I'm just like anger impatient and short tempered?

Hope, Pia will bring him back soon enough!

Thanks for the PM..

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Peehu24

@Peehu24

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Posted: 13 years ago

#943

awesome tanzie...loved it...

abhay was really at his best...sometimes child like...innocent..then his old rude self...and then being the seducer...gosh!! loved it...

i feel bad for alina...peehu...and aryan...things are a bit messy...

mohini has evil plans..glad that all of it will be backfired as for now...continue soon...

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D.O_Xing

@D.O_Xing

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Posted: 13 years ago

#944

Tanz... I'm surprised... Itne saare twists and turns ek hi chapter mein... WOW!!😃

I'm planning on to give you a name MYSTERY QUEEN...😆

Kya awesome chapter tha yaar...👏

I read it twice...😆

Poor Abhay!! He's in such a big dilemma...

OMG!! Aryan... I feel so bad for him... His story is such a mess...😕

Alina!!... Such a strong girl... I feel horrible🥺

Abhay has made Piya his target for his frustrations... Though this thing has proved totally romantic... It was dangerous too...😔

I never thought Abhay could hurt Piya to this much extent... They both are in so much pain...😭

Hope Piya cope up with this situation soon...😕

And the evil MOHINI... Wish all her plans fails against Abhay... I really want that she never ever be able to make alive her sister... I'll be waiting for that day...😡

You totally justified the chapters name with the story... I so Loved it..😳

Gosh lady you don't realize you've left the story at such an interesting cliffhanger... I'm excited to read the next chapter but won't be able to do so until 11th coz I'm going out...🤔

Will be waiting for the next chappy Tanz..😃

Great Work...👍🏼

Thanks a lot for PM...😊

Lots of love..🤗

Edited by -_Sweta_- - 13 years ago

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bellaaa

@bellaaa

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Posted: 13 years ago

#945

tanzie superb update yar
wonderfully u descirbed the diffrent abhay
poor abhay and piya
love the scene when abhay seduced piya and bite her
seriously when abhay came to know about this he will be heart broken
wht mahini want from abhay?
shitt if ragini will alive then what happened betw abhiya
poor aryan and alina too

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sandeep

@SANDY_ROSE

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Posted: 13 years ago

#946

Superb update tanz Love the way you describe Abhay .Awww i hate mohini . Poor alina . she is so selfless person and aryan is in so much tension . but in this update Abhay shade got all appreciation!!!!!!! continue soon !!!!

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Anj01

@Anj_01

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Posted: 13 years ago

#947

fantastic update!!!! 👏⭐️just loved it!!!

feeling bad for alina😭...poor girl...she is really selfless. she is heart broken but she is ready to help aryan even after knowing very well that aryan will always love peehu.😔

hate that mohini😡😡...she is truly a chudail.😡😆

best part offcourse was the different shades of abhay...you said it right, it was a treat for abhay fans.👏
just loved the part where abhay was seducing pia to the extent that she herself asked him to bite her😲😉😳...what a scene!!!!👏⭐️ i could imagine pia's expression the feeling mixed emotions of shock, pleasure,longing, fear, terror on her face. i felt that this was the first time where abhay truly behaved like a brute blinded with lust n thirst...in short a monster...what he keeps calling himself.😆

btw you said we'll see pia in sexy avtaar seducing abhay but here it was opposite...anyways...its a pleasure reading abhiya moments either way.😆😉😳

loved the child like abhay..he was cute.😊

n sadu abhay...he is everyone's favourite...but this time he hurt pia...but in this condition also he can feel her pain...awww that was touchy scene.😭

hope mohini's plan will fail soon n abhay n pia will be together 😍n no one will hate abhay.

continue soon.😊

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Sulagna

@SheIsTheOne

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Posted: 13 years ago

#948

Freaking awesome update...👏👏 Piya is shattered at Abhay's different personality disorders...

And Abhay..he himself is very confused at what is happening to him... But one thing is fixed...and that is his connection with Piya..😳 I mean whether he is old-self or rude,arrogant or seductive-hunter or child-like..that 'thing' with Piya never goes...😳 I guess it's their connection..😳 And Aryan...my heart goes out for him... he's in such a miserable condition... All the persons he loves are in trouble or sad...be it Peehu..Piya..Abhay or even Alina.Feeling very bad for him..😭 And Mohini...you know I'm not hating her 🤢 because she loves her sister..and according to her Ragini died during the transformaion of vampire and the main reason of it is Abhay... so..ya..she is just taking her revenge...but I'm hating her ways though..She is not even for once thinking about the girl Abhay got married to (Piya)...what would be that girl's condition seeing her husband like this just only after their marriage day.. I mean she is not at all thinking about that...what is Abhay's wife's fault..she is indirectly punishing her...and why only Piya?? Peehu...what is her fault if Ragini got killed and that she loves Aryan and their child is in their womb...if the thing would have lasted till blackmailing Aryan with Peehu as bait..it was understandable...but her plan to kill Peehu after her mission gets accomplished...that's very pathetic..What sister love is this if she's not being rational at all... that's stupid...Mohini is cleverly evil and stupid...🤓 And Alina...she is heartbroken...feeling sad for her too...😔 BTW...did I say that that child-like Abhay is very cute and adorable...😳 and yeah...one more thing..Abhay pushed Piya off two flights of stairs..😲.how can he do that...as far as I remember..the Rude-Arrogant Abhay always insulted Piya and her dignity..but he never physically hurt her..that's very shocking actually...😲 but his heart is very sad at Abhay's this reckless and heartless act of hurting Piya so severely...I mean..whatever may have happened to Abhay...his heart will always remain that original Abhay who loves and respects Piya a lot...😳 and you know what...the songs which are Mohini's favorite happens to be my favorite too...😳 But I have a question..Mohini is almost 2000 or something years old...and Abhay was also with her something like 200 years ago..and from that time those songs were Mohini's favourite...so..if i'm not wrong...those songs were sung by Asha Bhonsle I think...😕 but Asha Bhonsle is not even 100 years..😆 so..it is kinda confusing..😕 Silly question I know...but kya kare?? 😆 Anyways...overall...a very nice update..👏.super awesome.👏..eagerly waiting for the next part...update as soon as you can...😳..not in a hurry...😊...but not too slow also..please..😆 and yeah...thanks for the PM...😃

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hema

@hema_rawat

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Posted: 13 years ago

#949

awsm update tanzie ...👏

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snitchseeker

@snitchseeker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#950

i loved these shades of Abhay even though I feel sad for Pia and Abhiya. can I say I simply cracked up when Abhay imagined as a food leaving him I was totally rofling despite the tricky situation.🤣

Mohini is a Asha Bhosle fan it seems love her who was she talking with? and iske hubby ne kya kiya tha jo ussey bhi nahin yaad karti uff questions hi questions no answers

awesome update👏