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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: pkyekfanclub

Tanzieee 😡 what is that ❓how could u end there ❓😡 specially when next update will b late 😭 😆 but loved it dear awesome update so Armaan saved Amby hmmm n he is a vampire hunter 😲 that was unexpected yaar n what about Gaurav uska khatma hua ki nahin or he is just hurt but I would like n I want Amby 2 kill him it's her right 2 kill him as i said before n Jeh also came to know that Amby is Gaurav's ex-wife but does he know d whole story or not n also I wanted 2 ask before does he know what her mother did 2 Pia I mean c tried 2 kill her n for what n all those things c did n what lead 2 her death n d whole story ❓ loved everyones POV's n Pia ne kya punishment di hai Abhay ko 😉 😆 but I dought is it really a punishment for him or a reward 😆 but in a way it will b an punishment if u know what i mean 😉 😆 chalo mera essay khatam hua😆 n thanx for pm😊

😆 I love essays dear...no problem. 😆 U will always get somethin unexpected in my story 😉 Jeh knows everything now. n Gaurav is in danger...no doubt.. wait n watch 😆 for Abhay, Pia's punishment is kind of reward.. but same for Pia na... 😉 lets see 😳

Originally posted by: anjali0111

wow!!!!!! it was jus awesome!!!!!!!!👏

it was full of shock Shockedn happy surprises!!!!!!!Smile Thanks dear 😳
first of all abhay treated pia wid his famous kiss therapy😳...which we were dieing to read😉... then her memory came back...thats all we wanted since so long. I miss kiss therapy like anything n still some left btw 😉
you beautifully described pia's pov...her emotions, pain,helpnesness when abhay again tried to convince her to stay away frm him...her outburst...her reaction when he saw abhay entering the room...the way she touched his face n cried...all was fabulous!!!!!👏⭐️👏 a big hug to you for describing it so well.🤗 Thanks a lot dear...glad u liked it 😳
abhay's inner turmoil...his myriad emotions seeing pia like that...in pain, feeling guilty for leaving her...n accepting his defeat n finally promissing that he will not leave her n love her till the end of time❤️...all this was mind blowing...i had happy tears in my eyes reading this!!!😃 Awww that's such a huge complement 😳 I always pay extra attention to Abhay's feeling while writing because he is the most difficult to comprehend Smile
n pia's naughty punishment☺️...made me blush thinking about your next update😉...make it soon n give us long chapter full of abhiya romance.😉😳 Will try my best to please you 😉
aryan's pov was also nice ...so he knw that alina love him...poor guy..torn between his past n present...😕..well...whoes gonna get him in the end...peehu or alina??? Time will tell 😆
n that 🤬gaurav...kill him asap...btw you have created a nice villain in the form of gaurav...but what about the real villain..mohini...where is she??? you havent told yet much about her n abhay n aryan's past...reveal it soon. I will write Abhay's flashback n Mohini's story soon..within 1/2 chapters... u will know who's Mohini n trust me.. if u thing Gaurav is a good villain... u haven't seen anything.. wait for Mohini 😉
n lastly you gave a surprise by reaveling that armaan is vampire hunter!!!!Shocked what turn will his n amby's story will take??? eagerly waiting for that. For the time being they will be staying far from each other

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: TISA07

lovelyyy update.i hate that gaurav.who is the other person there with jeh nd gaurav?WOW 240 kisses. . . ☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️.bt why 242 in precap?whatever eagerly waiting for the next update.

Thanks Tisa.The third person there was Arman present there. 2 bonus 😉 will update soon 😳

Originally posted by: abhiya07

nice update!!!!!! pia ko sab yaad ageya!!


cant wait 4 da next update!!! abhay ki punishment u noe

Thanks a lot dear.

Originally posted by: bellaaa

awsome superb update yar...the way u explains piya abhay emotions thts r too great...loved abhiya part when piya says to abhay 240 kisses wow...so happy piyas memory vame back and now abhay do whatever piya said to him...so arman is vampire hunter and he saved amby thts gud...hope so aryan also try to make it to alina yar poor alian...waiting 4 next update eagerly but its time to update now but very excited 4 it...lovely update

Thanks a lot dear. Glad u liked it dear 😳 Abhay still has a lot to explain 😕 yeap Arman is a vampire hunter 😊 will try to update soon 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: shivanirajput

hey tanzie that was an amazing update
i loved it to the core
aryan's point of view was very well written he is such a darling i m glad he has decided to give alina a chance i will be looking forward to this pair Thanks Shivani... you busy with studies? i missed your comments 😳
i guessed that armaan would save amber but him being a vampire slayer was a shock he is hunter like Alaric in vampire diaries
so now he know about amber being a vampire wonder what will he going to do
i m soo happy finally Mr i m a beast has got some senses
pia's punishment was shocking but its giving me goosebumps right now 😆
240 kisses😲 seriously how will they be able to control well..lets see... n its abhay we are talking about so you know 😆 😉
lloved the title of next chapter can't wait to read it
thanks for pm will update very soon 😳

CleviveDsouza, flora212: Thanks for reading 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: PurpleFairy

WHAT THE...???*Arnav style*😲.😡.🤔 *Neetz spends her entire pocket money on eggs and tomatoes and throws them all on Tanzie!*😡.😡

HOW COULD YOU TANZIE? HOW?😡 WHY? Why do you hate your readers so much? Firstly, you left it at this point and now you say that we won't get another update for a while and then you expect us NOT to throw ande-tamatar on you?😳 AND btw, this is not called a 'long update'😛 I love his expressions when he says WHAT THE Tongue 🤣It wans't long? u kidding me? Shocked Tongue

Anyway, coming to the update, AbhIya😍 I love them soo much, man!! Lol! This Pia is the best, I tell you. Bechare Abhay ki baja di, ABHAY ki!😛 Haha! Loved the punishment. Serves him right. We got kiss therapy after so lonnnggg😍 Yeh banda kabhi nahi sudhrega! He will see how Pia walked into danger because she was with him but he will conveniently forget that he is the reason she is even alive in the first place otherwise her swine of an uncle had made sure she'd die before her wedding. Stupid tyaagi baba🤔 Chalo chhaddo, all's well that ends well😳 Hayyee, Abhay blushing, aww!!❤️ Sabki bajana Abhay ki adaat hai so there sud b someone who can bajao him 😎 his self sacrificing nature is epic and sometimes it annoys you and let you wonder - how can a person hurt himself to this extent... always complicated he is 🥱
OMG, Arman is a vampire hunter? This wasn't expected😲 But good, he saved Amby😳 This means he knows about Amby and Abhay being vampires for sure and maybe about Aryan being a wizard as well. I wish he'd killed that🤬 Gaurav as well. Just wounded, Arghh!
Aryan's so damn cute, man! And adorable!! Aww! You see why I love him so much?😳 Gaurav will die every soon.. no prob. and yes.. i know Aryan baby is sweet Tongue
Aww!! Rofl, he will be under Pia's control as well. Good, two powerful supernatural brothers dancing around her little finger, lucky chicROFL.ROFL I think Aryan has played a big role in bringing AP together as well. He puts some sense into Abhay's head. I just love their bond. Remind me of the depth, intensity and unconditional love which Stefan and Damon have. Intriguing and heartwarming. BTW, I read someone say they want Aryan with Peehu, not Alina. Count me in on that one as well. I, too, prefer him with Peehu specially since we know Peehu does love him❤️ she will take full revenge of her memory loss now Tongue You know how much I love the salvator brothers Embarrassed Abhay and Aryan are inspired from them here. but I didn't want to put any girl between them so portrayed them differently Embarrassed and Peehu will arrive soon so lets see...😉

The name of your next chapter is enough to make me☺️ I will wait for your reaction after reading next chapter ROFL

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: abhiyan_soni

superb update tanz
i loved it
all character is pov written very well specially aryan . i m glad aryan know about alina feeling and try to gave her chance .
omg this is shocking armaan 's vampire slayer . but he save amber . gurave such a jerk. finally our hot ty come to some sense and now he stop his stay away mission .i like pia here . waiting for next part eagerly .continue soon .

Thanks Sandy. Everyone should have a second chance in life so why not Aryan 😳
Arman is a hunter not slayer. will update soon dear 😊

Originally posted by: anukrati

WOW
SUPERB UPDATE TANZIE REALLY LOVELY
REALLY SORRY FOR LATE REPLYING
abhay save pia, and pia question bombarding too cute.love it
love the idea of pia memory back,2nd life and vampire spell broke.genious thats why u are amazing writter.
OMG 240 KISSES, what a punish ment. now let see who will save mr. abhay raichand.
love aryan saying ab aaya oot pahar ke niche it is ab aaya vampire pia ke pahar ke niche.
what about ambi?
really excited
UPDATE SOON
TAKE CARE and thanks 4 pm.

Thanks a lot dear 😳 no problem you are late 🤗 Say who will save Pia from Abhay now... imagine her condition after 240 kisses 😆
Will write what happened to Amber and Aryan in next update.
Will update soon dear 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sweet_sudeshna

amazing update dear


nw waiting 4 da 242 kisses eagerly😳

Thanks dear 😊

Originally posted by: abhiya4evr

AWWWSOME update!!!!! 😃
arman is a vampire slayer 😲 😲 zor ka jhatka bht zor se laga !!!!! 🤣 so does he always knows that amby is a vampire??? 🤔
what to say about abhiya!!! 😍 😍 😍
they were super duper adorable!!! 😍 n 240 kisses in punishment 😲 ☺️ ☺️ ☺️
egerly waiting for next update ☺️
see i m already blush hard ,pta nh next update ke baad kya hoga 😆 kahi me tamatar me transfer na hojayo 😆 🤣 🤣
thanks for a totally awsome update!!!
thanks for pm n sorry for late cmnt...

Thanks a lot dear. No he didn't know Amber is a vampire 😆
hai na bohut hi passionate punishment? 😉 Anyone would die to have a punishment like this 😉
Tamatar me transfer ho jao.. i love tomato 😆
Will update soon and no problem for the delay Embarrassed
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: shivanipandit29

Tanzie i have no words i just read the three chapters i had left reading i have no words to say. gosh i can't wait till next chappie. i will not throw ande and tamatar don't worry. but update soon. plz and thanks for the pm and sorry for reading them late. n i hate that gaurav kill him soon.

Thanks a lot Shivi. I missed you...glad to see you back 🤗 I know you are very sweet... u wont do that ever to me 😆

Originally posted by: kuttu

Abhay should be very happy to deliver the punishment. Pia seems to be getting naughtier day by day. Jai seems to be caught in a fix. Will he stand against his brother. Alina seems to have more back bone than him. Thank God Armaan had come to the rescue. But now what is he and if he is a hunter hw come he never sensed that Amby is a vampire.

😆 Abhay should be defo happy delivering the punishment but Pia can survive the entire time. Jeh is confused and lost apparently but he will take his stand soon. Will explain the entire scenario of Arman and Amber in next chapter.
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Posted: 13 years ago
when u r updating it?????????
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Chinky_RPattz

Reserved 😳

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Hey tanzie 🤗
Here I am :D ;)
Firstly I feel like hitting your head when you end the updates when it is going to be the most exciting one!
Aur 1 paragraph type karne ko keyboard mana karta hai kya ? :-/
😡 Hellooo 🤗 are i wrote almost 4000 words 😲 Angry and u will get the next full chapter of them..so be happy 😛

As you might be knowing,.i had to read 7-8 pending chapters, so I will look like a crazy if I give my comments on all of them in detail 😆 and I assure you that I will make you crazy too along with me after you read a comment longer than the update 😆 🤣 But I will touch those points which I loved the most 😳 I know you are crazy 🤣 and this is the biggest comment I ever get and I lobbb it 🤗

But but but ! Before that.. Tanzie Can you just give me Aryan ?? I am so in love with him.. what a character you have developed yaar ! 👏 meri setting kara do na us se Tongue seriously man..you dont know how much I love him ! I so envy allina 💔 congrtzzz...you are the 5th person who wants him as real person 🤣 but seriously im really glad so many ppl likes him... im honored to make a character like him Embarrassed


That part was heart breaking when abhay took away piya's memory 😭
But poor piya ! She could still dream of him..sacha pyar ise hi toh kehte hain lawyer saheba 😉
I felt like jumping around to know that abhay killed deepu aunty ! 🥳 but that gaurav ! Ewww..jaisi ma waisa hi beta . Yukk 🤢 I am waiting when amby will rip off that wolf.. you know I had a doubt on amby when you first introduced her character.. after all piya cant befriend a mere human being ! He/she has to be a supernatural element 😆 Gaurav is worst then his mother as you can see 😆 and about Pia.. whatever abhay does.. all his ways will lead him back to Pia Embarrassed


And I was sure that she is a vampire when she told arman about drinking blood in the canteen 😆 and when aryan was talking over the phone and they finalised to move to dehradun..i knew yes ! It has to Amby Raichand. Though I was curious to know her real name 😆 But arman being a slayer ? That was a shock man ! Shocked now the question being does he knew about amby before ? 😕 the blood drinking scene was a hint and few people got it 😆 Arman is a hunter not a slayer 😆

Oh yeah..how can I forget how abhiya met again in that party ! That was beautifully written tanzie. Loved it.. POV of all the characters present were put just perfectly.. then piya working in his office and he being jealous on seeing jeh with her..that was so cute ! And when abhay dropped her home, misha's teasings cracked me up 🤣 no idea how she is going to react after knowing who is piya actually ! Love the bond piya-arman-misha share 😃 glad u liked it sweetz Embarrassed

Lastly our lovely couple. Gosh how hot and passionate were their scenes ! Absolutely hawwwtt 😈
Piya seducing abhay was totally unexpected but totally approved by me 😎 🤪 my tigress is back ! Not going to let abhay go.. Now looking forward to the 242 kisses.. 2 extra kisses khushi mein yaar ? Tongue bonus hai 😉

I will take your leave before you go insane..😆
Par yaar mere aur aryan ke bare mein kuch socho na 🤣 🤣
Update soon..
The best compliment in the dictionary is for you. Go and search. Mil jaye toh bata dena. I will use it for you. So addicted to your ff ! Love it beyond words.. You are a star tanzie ⭐️ 🤗

Awww thanks a lot dear.. means a lot me... that my hard work is appreciated 🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Jiya_tariq

Tanzie r u updating tonight?

Will update tonight dear 😳

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Hey, Guys! Long time no see!🥲🙂

Hello, guys! How are you all? It's been decade since I've been actively active.🥲 So, what's going on these days? Any new ff/VM/Edit on Abhiya?

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