abhiya SS 'broken mirror' UD-pg-116,, last UD

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purple_shadoz

@purple_shadoz

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#811

dt ws sch a lovely endng...beautiful...😍i m stl in dr wrld...lvd everythng 4m dr honeymoon to d last part...i wndr hw abhay controllsd hmslf during dos 2 mnths...😉n u av dn ur research on tahiti well...👏i lovd d painting part n d way u reveald pia s preggo...😳abhay's reactns wr superb!!!!!⭐️u no hw mch i lovd ds ss ov urs rite???? m gonna miss it as hell nw...😭so u btr updt love n deceptn fast...😡n 4 ds wndrful ss a big titey tite🤗4m me...

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Pari Gupta

@Pari-Gupta

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#812

Awesome end

Loved ur whole ss

The journey of Abhiya from best friends to soulmates was beautifully expressed

The update was very romantic

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--Siva--

@--Siva--

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#813

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You took long time to update this ** Hands on my hip ** Very bad Heena!!

But after reading the update, I'm rethinking whether to ask that question or not..!😕

Such a beautiful one and a long one, for sure u need time for that!! **Justifying myself for the delay **

Abhay - How could he be this understandable. Staying away from his new wife for 2 months!! Every gal needs an understanding husband like this! Really!!😍

Their honeymoon spot.. The bunglow, perfect choice..! I loved the part where Pia struggled hard to get Abhay ready for the outing!😍☺️

Pia, pregnant!! OMG, that was a delicious one to read ever..!

Thanks for the PM..!

Waiting for next without any patience😃

Edited by Sivaranjani - 13 years ago

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Rose

@--Rose--

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#814

WOWWW... What a WONDERFUL, ROMANTIC, CUTEE, AWESOME, AMAGING, LOVELY and FANTASTIC update dear:-):-) Abhiya Superb:-):-) I LOVE IT:-):-)

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bellaaa

@bellaaa

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#815

really awsome update...abhiya honeymoon were just perfect...specially when abhay seduce her wow...hats off 2 u 4 this...omg abhiya baby yupieee...piya is pregnant abhay is so happy yar...lovely update ...i loved ur ff very much i eagerly waiting 4 this ff yar superb writer u r...

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heena mehta

@heena_mehta

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#816

guys today's update was d last update of this ss...

i m reli thankful to u all for ur wonderful support n comments...i don't av words to thankuu guys properly . D journey to my this ss was d wonderful one...u all r amazing readers and frnds n it was ur support only which encouraged me to write it

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flora212

@flora212

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#817

Heena.wonderful update.so, it was last one.it is a request from me that write another ss abhiya human love story.

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bellaaa

@bellaaa

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#818

even me also request u to plzzz write another new story of abhiya..u r great writer plzzz make new ff aur ss of abhiya its a humble request to u.plzzz heena