os THE BEGINNING OF A FAIRYTALE lastpart pg 28

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ilove99

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Posted: 13 years ago

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marjawaan!!!!!!!!!!!!such a passionate and sexy update☺️

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sneaky-aj

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Posted: 13 years ago

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wow😍 this was simply amazing!!!!!!! it wud b so wondrful if pkyek ends in this way😍 pls give the next update in which piya is expecting her baby...i cant wait!!😊 u hav such a great ability to describe everythng in detail and in a passionate way...i luved it
hats off to u!!!!!!🤗🤗

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A.hemalatha.kini

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Posted: 13 years ago

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I am speechless..I seriously am speechless yaar..GOD why were you not writing all these days or I dint read it..till today I dont know..But I am sorry to have done that..YOU ARE FANTASTIC..!!!I am sooo in ABHIYA's world now yaar..GOSH that was awesome..& sexy HOT JUICY STUFF😍

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tamoha(tora)

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Posted: 13 years ago

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shivani!!that was burning hawwt!!n splendid writing!!wow!!no probs dear,write wen u get tym:-)

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shivanirajput

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: cuteteddy
res sorry have to go i read half will comment on the other half later .

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ok shivani lets start 😛 u don't know how much i waited for the night 😳 i found every bit of the part so romantic n amazing that i can't even explain 😳 loved it to the core .
the night was awesome dear n u described their feelings beautifully . very well written .
thanks for the pm n update next part soon 😳
take care 😳n ya m happy that m the first one to comment 😳

thanks for reading dear. i was a bit disturbed last night so could not sleep for a second. thats why i decided to pen down a light os. i hope u have enjoyed it. about the next part if i will get time i will update on the coming sunday

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shivanirajput

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Originally posted by: strawberryrashu
Awsum awsum loved it haye abhiya ki suhagraat blushing wonderful os thanks for pm

well even i was uncomfortable while writing that scene but thought that it was necessary becoz very few ff or os on this forum has depicted it. i hope i did justice with that sr scene

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shivanirajput

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Posted: 13 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: prerna26
Hey Shivani, All the best for your exams!😊 thanks for ur wishes i m definitely in need of them

Brilliant OS.👏 thanks for liking

Loved the way you expressed her feelings and described her journey from Pia Jaiswal to Pia Dobrial and finally to Mrs.Pia Abhay Raichand. It was totally beautiful and Magical!!!😍 i just tried to show how i want abhiya relationship to be Well written Os!⭐️ Suhaag raat scene was So Hot & romantic !😳☺️.
i m glad u liked it. it was the first time i have written something like that. even i was blushing while writing it
Please continue! Yeh Dil maange more!! i will try to continue but that time everything will be human i mean the baby and the pregnancy becoz both abhiya r human now. i hope u won't mind that