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seabeauty

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Posted: 14 years ago

#11

plz continue.. its awesome :)

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snitchseeker

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Posted: 14 years ago

#12

Shivani that was so brilliant will give a long reply once I get a grip on myself.

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Ankita

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Posted: 14 years ago

#13

shivanu muahh❤️ 😍loved it awesome amazing i dont have words just wonderful yaar plz keep writing 👏

loved d part of pias journey n obviously of wedding night😍❤️😊

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visma

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Posted: 14 years ago

#14

It was beautifully written but we wouldn't even get a glimpse of this to watch on TV as it looks like a romeo Juliet ending out here. Thanks for the PM I had to read it in two parts

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bellaaa

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Posted: 14 years ago

#15

no wards yar it was awsome ending hope so that ending of pkyek with met two souls together

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anshita

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Posted: 14 years ago

#16

oh my gosh!!!!!
dis is sooo romantic!!!!!!

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_Klaroline_

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Posted: 14 years ago

#17

Omg shivani Di...
It is mindblowing...
I love it...
While reading every part...
I was checking whether there is more or not...
When finally the end came...
I really felt sad...
I really want more Di...
Love u always...
N not love u more for this romantic os Di...

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---Priya---

@---Priya---

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Posted: 14 years ago

#18

Shivy a truly amazing update yaar!!!!👏 👏 👏

Loved each n every part of ur writing...From start to end it was just mind blowing...

Loved the abhiya moments in the last part... It was super HOTTT...😳 😳 😳

Their wait for the wedding & finally misha-kabir are together...

Plz do continue...

thnx 4 da pm😊

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hema

@hema_rawat

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Posted: 14 years ago

#19

awsm os dear ...its very beautiful ...

deir romance ,weddind nd first night was mindblowing...

aur sindur ka nose par girne ka koi matlab hota hai kya???

thanx 4 pm ...

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Arpita Sarkar

@BUBLAI

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Posted: 14 years ago

#20

hey !!! shivani ...
the OS was written beautifully ... every bit of it was written beautifully ...
You are an amazing writer 👏
the romance, the wedding and the wedding night was written brilliantly ...😛😊
😊finally MishKa are together too ... loved their bits and pieces too 😛

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