os THE BEGINNING OF A FAIRYTALE lastpart pg 28

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Deepi20

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Posted: 13 years ago

#31

Brilliant OS! You know I never wanted Abhay to become a human after drinking the potion but after reading your OS, I really hope he becomes one if the story thereafter will be like the one in your OS! Abhiya's wedding was beautiful and their first night was super hot! 😳 I really hope we get something like this in the serial! Thank you for such a wonderful OS! 👏

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Akshita

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Posted: 13 years ago

#32

amazing dr!!!!

it was just fab!!!!

n u should write another part!!!! i will ne waiting 4 it!!!

cont soon n thanks 4 d pm!!!!

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piyali.1228

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Posted: 13 years ago

#33

[QUOTE=piyali.1228]res ll update later

n i m not going anywhere as i cant leave u all...u all becum part of my life...

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to b continue

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awesum dear...i luved it...its amazing...totally wow...fantastic...fab...do continue...n thanx 4r d pm😊

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piyali.1228

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Posted: 13 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: piyali.1228
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awesum dear...i luved it...its amazing...totally wow...fantastic...fab...do continue...n thanx 4r d pm😊

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Resh

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Posted: 13 years ago

#35

wow shivani awesome update I so loved it yaar.It was so gud.I hope ending aisi hi ho so romantic & true.I was all lost as if I m watching a real loves story.I love ur concept & ending.Keep writing more😳

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shivanirajput

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Posted: 13 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: abhiyan_soni
shivani yr tumahre haat kaha hai i ve kissed u r both hand wat u written yr i love it i it awesome wonderful so romantic yr . i imagine all story playing like film thank very for written this cv not show like that but fulfill my wish . i imagine abhay saying pia all thing . u decribe all thing very weel like emotions abhiya romance story progress wonderful job
i want abhiya babby woh b twins plzzz
i want abhiya twins one babby girl and one babby boy like abhay and pia plz make next part shivani with twins . again wonderful job

I m glad u liked it so much i will try to write the next part may be on the coming sunday
as for twins lets see if i will get a good plot i will try

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shivanirajput

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Posted: 13 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: TISA07
Super,awesome shivani. 👏 da os ws sooo cuuteee. 😳 luvd it so much.thnx 4 writing it. 😊 nd cont it definitely.

thanks for reading and appreciating it. i will try to continue

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shivanirajput

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Posted: 13 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: seabeauty
plz continue.. its awesome :)

i will try but will not be able to write before the next sunday.
thanks for reading

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heena mehta

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Posted: 13 years ago

#39

beautiful os shivani!!

magical one!!! i reli wish d same ending for pkyek!!

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Peehu24

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Posted: 13 years ago

#40

hey shivani...that was awesome...loved it...

part 1 was described so beautifully..their feelings..their longings fo each other...the hurdles..obstacles they faced...u put all their feelings in words..that was fab

part 2 was so dreamy..abhiya getting married..the way they were longing to meet..everything was perfect..i wish..i get to see one in the show also..

part 3...damn..that was hot...i was blushing...

beautifully written..really it was a fairytale...i want you to continue this...will be waiting...thanks for pm...

all the best for ur exams...