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Shoonu

@Shoonu

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Posted: 14 years ago

#191

awesome...!!!i loved it..!!!

pia made me cry...the end was lovely...

Edited by pyaarification - 14 years ago

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Nisha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#192

😕Let me say SORRY first for replying so Late actually tumhare ff's and os itne saare hain ki i forget almost ki maine kispar comment kiya and kispe nahin sooo i am sorry😕

and as for ur Update its awesome I just Loved it...keep up ur good work and I always enjoy reading your Updates especially I love your OS

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Mandy

@BeyondHorizon

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Posted: 14 years ago

#193

Lovely ending 😳 This is definitely not Jeh's "haar". His inner goodness won over his thirst for revenge.

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Aysha

@matwamango

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Posted: 14 years ago

#194

Originally posted by: mandy1024
Lovely ending 😳 This is definitely not Jeh's "haar". His inner goodness won over his thirst for revenge.

So very true. Jeh in actuality won over his dark side and is now under a ray of light

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Aysha

@matwamango

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#195

Originally posted by: moonlitnisha
😕Let me say SORRY first for replying so Late actually tumhare ff's and os itne saare hain ki i forget almost ki maine kispar comment kiya and kispe nahin sooo i am sorry😕
and as for ur Update its awesome I just Loved it...keep up ur good work and I always enjoy reading your Updates especially I love your OS

Its Ok Yaar i write that much even i forget which one i updated and which one i haven't😆

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Aysha

@matwamango

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#196

Originally posted by: snitchseeker
Tyagi Baba Jeh thats new but loved it. How do u write so beautifully so many things at 1 time.

Tyagi bab ki batti toh bhuji. He has lit his light in his head.

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Aysha

@matwamango

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Posted: 14 years ago

#197

Originally posted by: Deepi20
Brilliant ending! I loved it! I'm glad Abhiya got each other and Jeh chose friendship over his need for revenge against Abhay! You did an awesome job with this OS, it was simply fantastic 👏

Sometimes Friendship is the greatest love of all. It teaches U to place others feelings above your own

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luv_vivian_luv

@luv_vivian_luv

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Posted: 14 years ago

#198

brill sweet cool update plz cont soon

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bmtdluver

@bmtdluver

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Posted: 14 years ago

#199

great ending for the os

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visma

@kuttu

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Posted: 14 years ago

#200

This was a good story. Finally Jai getting out of his mothers clutches. Pia surely knows to get around Abhay. She is never the one to give up. So Abhay and Jai could have been friends but still the rivarly over the years have left a mark on them. But Abhay knows to control himslef for sure. But Jai doesn't. That makes a huge difference. It was quite nice to read the differnce in the character of both the people of the dark.

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