OS Abhiya:She is all mine(part 3 updated pg9) - Page 2

Originally posted by: cuteshrishti

Ok guys this is my 3^rd OS.I hope u all will lke it.I know u all know me 4 my funny post but yeh bhi try kar lete hain.Take a risk of reading this OS haha🤣

Abhay was shocked 2 c tht there were no scars on Chirag chest.He was in delima.The thought of losing his father was making him weak & aggressive at the same time.Clock was tickling continuously each seconds was tough 2 survive. He was cursing himself 4 wasting his time on wrong guy. He jst wished tht somehow he can stop time & can save his father. The man who gave him 2^nd life. He was so helpless & her mom's worried face & pain was making him feel as a culprit & then his hawk eyes came across Neel's chest and 2 his surprise or rather shock he found scars on his chest. He felt as if somebody banged his head wid heavy iron ball. Somehow he controlled his emotions & straight away went 2 neel. He touched his chest & thn Jeh pushed him back saying 'Stay away frm my bro u b******d'. But till thn Abhay already had drop of neel's blood on his palm. Every eyes was staring at Abhay wid disgust except one pair of baby brown eyes which were filled wid tear, pain, love & anger. Tear 4 wht Abhay did, pain 4 Abhay's injuries, love 4 Abhay & anger tht evn wht Abhay did 2 her & 2 everyone still she care 4 him & love him wid no boundaries. Everyone was accusing him, abusing him but Pia refused all. She knew tht Abhay can never b jerk. She clearly saw pain in Abhay's eyes & she was lament.

Abhay widout giving a 2^nd luk straight away went 2 his house 2 save his father only 30 sec left. He run 2 chand's room & apply Neel's blood on chand's injuries.But no reaction. Was he late? He was so scared wid the thought of losing his father. He was shouting continuously 'Dad plz wake up I need u,mom need u.V r nothing without u.Our family is incomplete widout'.On other hand haseena lost lost all her hopes her eyes were filled wid pain. Watching his mom crying Abhay was unable 2 control himself. He ran 2 jungle 2 hide himself frm everyone but how would he hide frm himself was a question. On other hand Pia was feeling restless & was only thinking abt Abhay, match, Abhay's painful eyes which was making her heart burst. She was there but her heart was roaming somewhere near Abhay. Abhay in jungle was shouting cursing himself 4 not b able 2 save his dad. He went in the middle of jungle & sat on his knee & luking at sky' Ab khush ho gaye na aap.U always feel pleasure giving me pain.Y God y?Kyun mera saath aisa karte ho?Y always me?Whtever u gave me I accepted without complaining.Maine has k apnaya.But not anymore. Actually it's all my mistake.I m a bad omen. All those who love me have 2 suffer coz of me. Dad ki yeh condition maine hi ki thi.I broke the rules,killed tht bloody warewolf & my dad paid 4 my deeds.Pia life turned into dark horror coz of me. She almost lost his life coz me. I don't deserve anything.No love,no mercy.U did right thing wid me.U gave me wht I deserve & I deserve pain,hatred.How much I hate myself. I wnt 2 die. Kill me.i don't wnt 2 live. I m tired. I need a break now. Plz kill me.And thn a strong,deep male voice came frm behind'Oh I'll grant ur wish Abhay'

There Pia in her night dress(knee length gown) was trying 2 sleep but she felt a lump in her throat. She was unable 2 control her tears & was confused Y she was crying? She was feeling as if someone special was in pain. She can clearly hear painful cry & shout. These cries were bursting her ears & were unbearable. She really wnted 2 stop tht someone special frm crying. She knew it can't b her imagination. Someone really needed her .Her heart & soul was telling her 2 run straight 2 his arm. Was it her angel? She thought.She pleaded. 'Stop crying my angel. I can't bear ur pain & tears. I m feeling helpless.Plz stop it. Ur tears r making me weak.I m coming 2 u my angel.Wait I m coming 2 u'. She ran in her night dress. Misha shouting 'Where r u going Pia'. Pia replied'I don't know'Misha'Wht do u mean u don't know?' Pia 'Misha u won't understand my angel is in pain & I need 2 console him. He needs me. I m going where my heart will take me.Misha'But..'(before Misha could say anything Pia ran frm there in her car)

Abhay was shocked 2 c Neel & jeh. He already came 2 know they were wolfies.His eyes wer filled wid pain & anger. He shouted 'You bloody dogs coz of U I lost my dad.I wont spare u'. Jeh accusing'Not coz me u lost ur dad coz of u.U always give pain 2 ur near & dear once.U really don't deserve 2 live.Ur dad paid 4 ur deeds & u'll also finish Pia'.These words of jeh tore Abhay apart.He felt tht jeh was right.He simply surrender him 2 jeh but thn Pia came running 2 woods.She was shocked 2 c Abhay.She was not aware wht connection brought her here. She saw Abhay's helplessness.His pain but her tears.She was more shocked 2 c Two wolfies ready 2 attack Abhay without giving a 2^nd thought she straight away hugged Abhay shouting his name.Abhay was shocked 2 c Pia in his arms & so were wolfies

To b continue.If u wnt 2^nd part & wnt me 2 complete thn do tell me.Let me tell u In 2^nd part u guys will get 2 read more abt Abhiya & kahani mai twist.I hope maine itna bura nahi likha hai & tum logo ko torture nahi kiya hai..Ab koi hasana na coz its an emotional OS according 2 me.I don't know ab isme emotions thai ki thake😆😆And 1 bhi comment nahi aaya toh mai samajh jaongi life mai kabhi OS nahi likhne ka😉

Originally posted by: princess_xeelan

Off course it's not torture Shrish...plz write the next part...it's really good 👏 👏

Originally posted by: prioty1000

oh its really good and dont worry it is also emotional😊...pls continue soon...awesome beautiful writing...

Originally posted by: shivanirajput

hey that was a gr8 start to the os 👏👏

u always lied to us u really is very good at emotional stuff so never underestimate urself

trust me it was touching

i can feel abhay's pain for his father and pia and also pia's concern for abhay😭

please do continue the os waiting eagerly for the coming part

Originally posted by: punjabijuliet

damn! i jst lv it...

whn u r gona update????😔

m w8ing

Originally posted by: TOTAL-ROMANTIC

Srishti..that was CLASSS.👏.⭐️mannn wohaaa...superb ..girl..let me know when you continue..!!🤗