OS Abhiya:She is all mine(part 3 updated pg9)

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punjabijuliet

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Posted: 14 years ago

#91

its was fab n romantic... n again.. m still laughing... Smiley lol

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Disha

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Posted: 14 years ago

#92

wow fabulous shrish. it was great.

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Resh

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Posted: 14 years ago

#93

Originally posted by: urmita
awsome os shrish !! i didn't know u cud write a serious os so beautifully(bina chappal khaye😆) i simply don't hv words 4 the 3rd part...wish serial me bhi kuch aisa hi hota.😍 i was thinking u cud add one more chappy.😊😉

Thnx a lot.Tarif karte samaybhi tum log sandals yaad dilate ho.No more maska tht was last part😆

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Resh

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Posted: 14 years ago

#94

Originally posted by: gitika.j
oh wow ... you are such a good writer...i love u...<3
and i thank u so much for writing the slap thing... Abhay really deserves it..😆

i loved all the 3 parts...but this 3 one was the best... i too want to see sugandh once

hah.Ya I made tht slap scene coz I myself wnted Pia 2 slap Abhay.So I used this weapon haha😆.Thnx a lot 😊

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tamoha(tora)

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Posted: 14 years ago

#95

2 gud yaar..actualy ,y dnt u start an ff shrishti??

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.SmokeySilence.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#96

Shrish that was outstanding...very romantic and emotional... i loved it... and you have complete justice to the story 😳

n FF na sahi bt you sud write more OS... now waiting for todays episode review of yours 😆

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VRITIKA

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Posted: 14 years ago

#97

lun\vlyy wat an osss...
its jus wonderful...
i wish that this os...never cumz to end.
luv d way u write...
u r a rockstar...
plz plz its my request plzzz do write mre abhiya os...
luv u
vritika

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shivanirajput

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Posted: 14 years ago

#98

thank u so much for fulfilling our wish of having a third part to this os

now this looks like a perfect os

for the third part i just want to give u a tight🤗

what a thinking u thought of pia's mother to teach abhay a lesson this is just fab👏

and the best part was when pia slapped abhay for mistrusting their love

i honestly wanted pia to do that in the serial for his stupidity and his stay away from me crap

gr8 work

thanks for the pm

keep writing such beautiful os's or better start ur own ff

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swatiluvsabhiya

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Posted: 14 years ago

#99

this was fantastically superb yaar... please send me the links of your other o.s. too...

regards...

swati...

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-Alone-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#100

Wow!!! Wow!!!!

lovelyyy. Aaj kal to mujhe sahi word bhi nahi milta tarif ke liye.

Anyway, superb.(Ek word mila hain 10sec baad!!!!.)