OS Abhiya:She is all mine(part 3 updated pg9)

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Resh

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Posted: 14 years ago

#111

Originally posted by: swatiluvsabhiya
this was fantastically superb yaar... please send me the links of your other o.s. too...

regards...

swati...

Thnx a lot.I'll send u links😊

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Resh

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Posted: 14 years ago

#112

Originally posted by: sdoll
Wow!!! Wow!!!!

lovelyyy. Aaj kal to mujhe sahi word bhi nahi milta tarif ke liye.

Anyway, superb.(Ek word mila hain 10sec baad!!!!.)

hah Thnx sdoll.I m glad u like it😊

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Resh

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Posted: 14 years ago

#113

Originally posted by: NaomiRayaan
Wooo...superb prfct happy ending ;))

Thnx a lot😊

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Resh

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Posted: 14 years ago

#114

Originally posted by: pahal
4 part-3: Thanx! 4 posting ths awesome part..ths was d best part of ur OS..n..it's Awesome! Mind-blowing! Suparb! Fantastic! Beautifull! n 2 Romantic! dear..👏..Sugandh track was 2 good n very nice 4 realizing Abhay his mistake..Abhiya! wow..❤️..so much heart-tuching scenes..very nice n happy ending..amazing writing..keep it up..👍🏼

Thnx a lot dear.I always wnt something lke this so here i m thnx agn😊

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Deepi20

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Posted: 14 years ago

#115

I loved the 3rd part! It was awesome! I was secretly hoping that you would write a third part and I'm super glad you did! I really liked the ending when Abhay realized that Piya and him are meant to be. You did a fantastic job with this OS! 👏

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harinisriram39

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Posted: 14 years ago

#116

Originally posted by: cuteshrishti

I was not in mood of making 3rd part but so many ppl requested so I was left wid no choice.Guys this is last & final part of myu OS now plz no more request I cant convert it into FF.I hope I did justice.Thnx 4 love & support🤗

Part 3

Abhay took his princess 2 Raichand massion... Abhay put his finger on her lips' Abhay 'Pia I promise u I'll never leave u.U belong here(pointing 2 his dead heart)' saying tht Abhay gave her a hard,long everlasting kiss'

**************************** THE END***************************

Wow!!!!!!!! What a way to end. 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏. Please accept my salutations. Who could be a better person than Sugandh to make Abhay understand his folly. What could be a better situation for Abhay to understand that what Piya meant to him.

Abhay Raichand humbled. His vampire powers are nothing when compared to the love they share.

Mr. Abhay, no more saying to Piya that "We cannot be one" You are already one.

My My!!!!!!. Now I don't even feel like watching the show as I don't think there can be a better ending than this.
Thank you very much Please continue writing more and let your imagination flow.

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Resh

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Posted: 14 years ago

#117

Originally posted by: Deepi20
I loved the 3rd part! It was awesome! I was secretly hoping that you would write a third part and I'm super glad you did! I really liked the ending when Abhay realized that Piya and him are meant to be. You did a fantastic job with this OS! 👏

Ya I was in no mood 2 write 3rd part but every1 was banging my head so I have 2.Thnx a lot dear😊

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Resh

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Posted: 14 years ago

#118

Originally posted by: harinisriram39
Wow!!!!!!!! What a way to end. 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏. Please accept my salutations. Who could be a better person than Sugandh to make Abhay understand his folly. What could be a better situation for Abhay to understand that what Piya meant to him.

Abhay Raichand humbled. His vampire powers are nothing when compared to the love they share.

Mr. Abhay, no more saying to Piya that "We cannot be one" You are already one.

My My!!!!!!. Now I don't even feel like watching the show as I don't think there can be a better ending than this.
Thank you very much Please continue writing more and let your imagination flow.