OS Abhiya:She is all mine(part 3 updated pg9)

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Resh

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Posted: 14 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: heena_mehta
omg shrishti i m speechless...ur os is beautifully written...u knw u should convert it into FF...i enjoyed both parts like nything...they were simply awesome...i loved d way u av defined abhay's love, his pain n d moment where pia was feeling his pain...dat was just wowww...i wish cv's tumse khuch advice le lete...reli they need it...n for a change i loved jay also in ur story...n abt neel😡...
hey shrishti pls i would love to read more...

thanx for d pm..

continue soon

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heena

Hha heena thnx a lot.I really cant cope up wid FF.U know I have so many ideas 4 FF but I bit lazy.I never evb thought 2 make 3rd part of this OS.But so many ppl requested so I made 3rd part 2.Thnx agn sweety.Me waiting 4 ur FF now😆

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Posted: 14 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: M2NZ
Plz plz continue soon!

thnx😊

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Resh

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Posted: 14 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: karantakiar
amazing superb luv d second part...
fantastic,
i like it so much dat i am reading it again nd again...
luv u
vrtika

Thnx a lot.I m gald u liked it so much tht u r reading it agn😊

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Resh

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Posted: 14 years ago

#84

Originally posted by: gitika.j
Oh my god... You are awesome...
Please continue, i m very eager to know what will happen next.

Thnx a lot dear😊

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Resh

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Posted: 14 years ago

#85

Originally posted by: Selinapiya
Wow..All the chapters are awesome...👏

Thnx selina😊

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Resh

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Posted: 14 years ago

#86

Originally posted by: beb018
Superb OS dear👏👏 just loved it 😍
beautifully written yar i have no words for it😳

Thnx a lot😊😊

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Resh

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Posted: 14 years ago

#87

Originally posted by: prioty1000
wow how sweet😍 i've started imagining the scene reading it...love it...

U know while writing I myself imagined whole scene haahh😆😉

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Posted: 14 years ago

#88

awsome os shrish !! i didn't know u cud write a serious os so beautifully(bina chappal khaye😆)i simply don't hv words 4 the 3rd part...wish serial me bhi kuch aisa hi hota.😍i was thinking u cud add one more chappy.😊😉