FF: a dark love story updated 24 july pg 50 ch 9 - Page 4

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Posted: 14 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: Nidhsara

Great start Minahil...Abhay in usual "mujhse dhoor jao Piya" state😆

Continue soon


thanku nidhs😳... i m glad u liked it... yeh his state is similar to the show , he doesnt want pia to love him😆, bt abhay will accept his love soon , as they r solumates... i will update today😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Add me in ur pm list plz
Liked the 1st chap alot
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Originally posted by: M2NZ

Add me in ur pm list plz
Liked the 1st chap alot


thanku dear ... i m glad u liked it, i will add u in the pm list😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
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ch :2 romio and juliate...

pia ran towards the raichand mansion as fast as she could... tears were rolling down her cheeks... she couldnt believe wat had just happened... abhay 's words were echoing in her mind ... she entered the raichand mansion and looked fr kabir and misha... she found them standing near the bar talking to each other... she frantically made her way towards misha and kabir
pia : misha , kabir...
misha seeing her swollen eyes and ruined makeup : pia r u ok
pia : misha i m nt feeling well, kabir can u drop me to the hostel
kabir : sure pia , misha r u coming
misha: yeh , lets go
as soon as they reached the hostel , pia came out and moved towards the hostel gate... she looked back and waved at misha and kabir forcing a smile on hr face ... pia moved rapidly towards her room and closed the door... she dropped on the bed with her face burried into the pillow ... tears started rolling down her cheeks ... she made no attempt to stop them as she had no power in her to stop her tears frm rolling out...
a slight knock on the door forced pia to open her eyes... she moved frm the bed and sighed sitting on her bed... another knock on the door made her move up frm the bed and she moved towards the door... as soon as she opened the door , misha came in pushing pia slightly and closed the door
misha: wat the hell babes, i was standing there frm pat 20 minutes , knocking the door...
pia : i m sorry mish,actually...
misha interpting pia : just a sec pia , u were crying the whole night
pia : hah?? no , i wasnt...
misha : stop lying pia ... ur eyes r swollen read , that exactly shows that u were cruing and last night too u felt sick... wats wrong pia... OMG! i should have guessed... this all is due to that abhay raichand ...isnt it??... oh god , pia...
pia cutting misha : misha just stop, i was crying because i was thinking about my mom , and this is nt about abhay
misha: oh , i m sorry pia ... u know wat i m like.. jumping to conclusions
pia : its ok misha and by the way why r u here ... werent u supposed to be getting ready fr college at this time..
misha : oh yeah babes ... i forgot i came to check u since u werenot feeling good last night and u didnt even show up at college too so , i came here to check...
pia : wat ?? didnt show up * moving her face towards clock* ... OMG!!! its 12:30... i missed my lectures of college
misha : chill babes... it was just two lectures and besides i have taken all ur notes and even given a application that u r sick
pia hugs misha: thanku so much mish... u r a true friend
misha: its ok babes... after all wat r besties fr...
pia : ok, just wait i will be ready in 10 minutes
misha : fr wat?
pia : fr college dumb!...
misha : pia u forgot that u just had two lectuers today babes and the drama class...
pia hitting her head : oh yeah, ok bt we still have drama class
saying this , pia picked her dress and moved to washroom to get ready fr college


in the college
pia and misha moved out of misha's car and straight head towards the drama club... pia knew that she had to meet abhay face to face bt she wasnt ready fr it yet... no at all after yesterdays meeting... pia and misha opened the door and moved in the hall ... every one was ready for rehearsels... panchi came to them
panchi : r u ok pia ... u werent picking up ur phone and u didnt show up today even
pia : yeh panchi , actually ...
misha cutting pia : actually birdie, pia was thinking about her mother the whole night and she cried so , she slept late and this resulted into this.. she said pointing towards pia 's restless and swollen eyes, she hadnt sleeped was visible through her behviour and her walking style
panchi : pia r u sure that u would be able to do it
pia : yeh , panchi ... i will just go and change
saying this pia hurried towards the changing room
panchi thought god ! this girl is so hardworking... and abhay! where the hell is he ... ughh!!
panchi was still thinking about abhay wen she heard smone say that abhay is here...she moved so , now she was facing the enterance door... abhay moved in and headed towards panchi
abhay : panchi , i want to practice alone today
panchi : excuseme ! i m the boss here , and i decide wat to do
abhay : whatever , just bring anyone else bt i dnt want to practice with pia
saying this abhay moved towards the changing room and panchi moved towards her secratory ...
secratory : mam whom should i say to practice wiyh abhay sir
panchi seeing the scedule : why , cause abhay said it , never mind i m the boss here and he is going to practice with pia only...

on the stage


abhay was there on the stage and he started saying his dailougues , he moverd his face and stood surprised by seeing pia... he looked in her eyes and felt a lump in her throat seeing the restless behaviour of pia... her eyes perfectly showed that she had been crying the whole night ... fr a moment he stood there looking in her eyes and than moved his hand towards pia and pulled it back ... people didnt noticed that it was out of the script as this movement perfectly matched the scene ... they had to perform a scene where romeo was leaving juliet
pia : no romeo , dont leave
pia grabbed abhay 's hand ... tears started rolling down her cheeks and her hold on abhay 's hand tightened... abhay shook her hand and moved his hand back and moved towards the back stage
pia : no romeo dont go , no abhay
it seemed as noone noticed her mistake ... pia falled down , tears flowing down her cheeks... the lights opened and people started clapping
panchi moved to pia : that was fantastic pia
pia didnt say anything and neither moved an inch frm her standing position... she seemed lost in thoughts and tears were rolling down her cheeks
panchi gasping: pia u r crying...
misha : pia u r ok.
kabir : pia u r crying bt why?
pia realizing : oh actually this was just due to ... ahh... the depth of the scene
panchi : are u sure
pia : yeh i m ok panchi , misha , kabir
panchi : misha i think u should go with her to the changing room
misha : yeh , i think u r rite babes
kabir : i will wait outside...

P.S - guys i m sorry fr late update... hope u like it , pia will discover that abhay is a vampire soon and than they will be together😳... sorry if u didnt like it

* please press like if u liked it * 😃

comment comment , wether to appreciate or criticize😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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gr8 one sis love yu and pm me soon..
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Posted: 14 years ago
#36
i awsum yr... i loved it... continue soon...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#37
nice part...brings back the old memories of pkyek
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Posted: 14 years ago
#38
Heyy!! Awesome update! 😃 Love it ❤️

PM me, dear 😳
Edited by ninja_hattori - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#39
hey nice update dear 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
#40
loved it dear
Was just awesome
Thanks for the pm
Plz continue soon

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