FF: a dark love story updated 24 july pg 50 ch 9

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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey guys i thought of starting a new ff... i know it might nt be as good as kaheela's ,poco's, ayesha's , syria's, ridwana's or akanshas... bt i tried my best ... hope u like it

ch : 1 IS THIS LOVE

why do i always keep thinking about him. pia thought ughh!! i need to get him off my mind... pia just keep ur mind off him , get ready or i am going to be late fr the party... she went in the shower and then got ready... she wore a beautifull black prom night dress which came to her knees, misha buyed her the dress... today was the party at raichand's house as they just moved into the town... her phone ringed taking hr out of her thoughts...
pia: hy mish, so wat time r u reaching
misha: pia get ready , we r reaching there in five minutes...
pia:oks, i m all ready , she said applying a little makeup on her face
misha: ok pia , just come down
pia: ok, misha... i m coming , she said picking her purse

RAICHAND MANSION

abhay was deep in thoughts thinking about pia , she looks exactly like her he thought ... just snap it out abhay , she is nt her

haseena seeing abhay lost in thoughts : abhay i know wat u r thinking , just remember that pia is nt mathili
abhay: yes , mom i know she can never be her ... she is a good soul
haseena surprised by his words: abhay , i know wat mathili did with you bt its too early to judge pia
abhay realizing wat haseena wanted to say : i know mom and i m nt falling fr her

abhay got up and moved around to see the people so , he could get his mind off pia ... he looked up and saw pia entering the house... she is looking divine - abhay thought he was looking directly towards her without blinking his eyes. haseena saw this and moved towards abhay , and whispered slowly so only abhay could hear
haseena : abhay , u r glaring at her... people r noticing
abhay realizing looked down: i m sorry mom...
haseena : its ok abhay bt take care , people r around seeing u...

abhay moved from there and headed straight towarrds the bar thaking his special drink and started sipping it slowly getting lost in his thoughts again...

kabir : pia come , dance with me
pia:no kabir , i m nt in the mood to dance
kabir : plz pia ...
pia : ok kabir fine , she said seeing him pleeding although she had no mood to dance..

abhay turned his face backwards so now , he was facing the dancing floor, his eyes suddenly caught kabir and pia who were heading towards the dancing floor... he could feel a twinge of jealousy rise through him... he moved his eyes bt after a short time , he looked back... he could feel his anger rising seeing kabir swaying pia in his arms ans she was smiling as if she was amused... he breaked the glass in his hand due to the rising emotions of anger and jealousy in him... i surely needed sm fresh air , he thought and got up making his way through the crowd to main door


luckily no one noticed the blood gushing out of his hand due to scar except pia ... she excused herself frm kabir and moved out behind abhay...

abhay was standing in his garden and than he heard pia
pia rushing towards abhay: abhay r u ok, taking his hand ans seeing it
abhay : i m fine , pushing his hand back
pia : no , abhay its nt fine ... let me see it
abhay:look , its fine and its just the drink , he said removing the blood with the tissue
and their was no scar on his hand... pia gasped in shock
abhay : see!!
pia clealy remembered him breaking the glass , ...
abhay : look , just stay away frm me ... i hate the girls who jump on me without any reason... i know i m hot and u want me bt u r nt my type... u r just a little chick and i dnt want any re...
before abhay could continue , pia slapped him rite on his face , waking the animal inside him...
abhay: how dare u ... abhay pinned her to the tree
pia getting hurt: abhay leave me
abhay : and wat if i dnt...
pia was a bit scared : abhay just let me go or ...
abhay : or what ...
before pia could say anything abhay inched her lips towards pia kissing her passionately... pia felt the emotions in her growing ... she kissed him back with the same passion unable to control her urge... he moved his lips parting slowly and then kissed her again sucking , teasing her lips... pia gained her senses and pushed him taking her mouth away...
abhay : woh , i didnt knew u could kiss so good ... this was definately one of my best
pia realized wat she had done, tears starting coming in her eyes and she rean away frm there geading straight towards the mansion , she had to go home ...NOW

abhay was seeing pia go away frm her... he could feel a lump rise in his throat , pia i hope u forgive me ... i didnt mean it bt i had to do it to keep u away frm me... i m just not rite fr u...


i know it was a emotional chapter and i m starting it frm the begning ... i hope u like it , i just tried my best ... plz if u like it than do like and comment ... i tried my best and i dnt know if i was able to get up to ur expectations... i m sorry if u didnt liked it... i tried , ready fr comments wether to appreciate or criticize😆

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ifrah. thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey its good...pls continue and do pm me..atleast in ff i may see abhiya's scenes :)
OriginalsFan thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Great one n abhiya liplock wow sounds exciting do continue👍🏼
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Awesome update!
Just loved it . .
Plz continue & add me to ur pm list !
Tc
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Posted: 14 years ago
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i enjoyed it. Its brilliant
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Awesome start! There was so much that happened between Abhiya! First chapter was amazing and I think I'm gonna have an amazing time reading this FF! Continue soon 😊
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i love it!😊 continue soon!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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its nyc i loved it... plzz continue...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Nice update,til the tme we dnt get abhiya romance back, we cn jst remembr old scenes with ur update.

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