Pia- and he left me...

TheBlackJaguar

@TheBlackJaguar

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Posted: 14 years ago

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It is so MOVING, Anu. You have captured Piya's thoughts and her emotions so well and so deep. Her yearning for Abhay just shines through and reading your work, i just feel like sending Abhay back to Piya by speedpost.

i strangely got reminded of a scene from BBC's mini series -North & South. In that, Margaret , unaware that John loves her takes leave and goes away. John watches her sit in the carriage and his emotions beg her - Look back. Look back at me.

Same is for AbhIya, Piya's yearning is too intense and it is unsettling for Abhay as well. He just has to go back to her.

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Suvarna

@Super Kool

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Posted: 14 years ago

#12

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Superkool-- Thank you soo much! Really means alot. 🤗

you truly deserve it dear....🤗

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Ameres

@Ameres

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: Pocahontas
It is so MOVING, Anu. You have captured Piya's thoughts and her emotions so well and so deep. Her yearning for Abhay just shines through and reading your work, i just feel like sending Abhay back to Piya by speedpost.

i strangely got reminded of a scene from BBC's mini series -North & South. In that, Margaret , unaware that John loves her takes leave and goes away. John watches her sit in the carriage and his emotions beg her - Look back. Look back at me.

Same is for AbhIya, Piya's yearning is too intense and it is unsettling for Abhay as well. He just has to go back to her.

Really? Thank you soo much. Really means alot to hear it from you. 😳😳

Yes Abhay has to get back to her. Its just not Pia's yearning and their strong emotional connetion that will make him come back. But some where i feel he is feeling restless because of his own heart, that has suddenly remembered to beat again. His care for her safety wont let him stay away for long.

Waise Pia tu Pia ,even i cant wait for him to get back! 😆

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