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Neetz

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Akankshaa.

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Posted: 14 years ago

U reserved a whole topic? 😳

Okay then; My reply is reserved, too. 😃

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First of all, I am so happy that I reserved the first spot. Now, I'd get to ramble as much as I want, and everyone would get to see it before reading any further comments. 😃

And, secondly, I am so happy, again, that you decided to continue your OS, after all. I loved the Pia you portayed in your previous OS, and I love her even more, now. I love this emotionally strong side of Pia. 😳

And thirdly, Mwah mwah mwah. I loved it, right from the beginning to the end. The best thing I liked about this part was that no matter how much Pia acts strong, builds a wall around herself, tries to suppress her feelings, in the end, everything came out - the tears, the pain, the confusion, the loss. She's vulnerable and only Abhay got to see that side of her. And I loved the way Pia confronted Abhay about his feelings, the way she confronted him about the way he cares for her; Was that concern that she wants to be alone, Or was that concern that she musn't be left alone? And I loved the way she fainted in his arms right when the clock striked twelve. 😳

All in all, A lovely OS, and a treat to read. 👍🏼 Have a lovely 2011, Neetz. 🤗

Edited by Akanksha0701 - 14 years ago

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Neetz

@.Jane..

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Akanksha0701
U reserved a whole topic? 😳

Okay then; My reply is reserved, too. 😃

🤣 🤣

Sorry! I'd posted it by mistake😆

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Sparkles

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Posted: 14 years ago

SUPER AWESOME AS ALWAYS 😃

Happy New Year !!

Edited by Spaarkles - 14 years ago

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Neetz

@.Jane..

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Posted: 14 years ago

@Sparkles: Thanks a lot!🤗

@Akanksha: Aww! Did you really like it that much?! I love love love you!!! That means so much!🤗

Anyways, I'm still in the proof reading phase. Didn't think anyone would read right now because its past 5 here but I forgot we have people from all over the world😆 Btw, it must be past 12 there also na??

HAPPY NEW YEAR!!❤️

Edited by Chill_Out - 14 years ago

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Akankshaa.

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Chill_Out
@Sparkles: Thanks a lot!🤗

@Akanksha: Aww! Did you really like it that much?! I love love love you!!! That means so much!🤗
Anyways, I'm still in the proof reading phase. Didn't think anyone would read right now because its past 5 here but I forgot we have people from all over the world😆 Btw, it must be past 12 there also na??
HAPPY NEW YEAR!!❤️

I really did, trust me. And most of it is because of the way you portray Pia. 😳

Ahaa, it's not 12 yet. We still got half an hour to go. =]

I wanted to write something, too. I needed to write. But everytime I opened a blank page, I couldn't figure out what to write. I wrote a half page about a girl's lost love. But then I erased it all, because I had this nagging feeling that this wasn't what I wanted to write about, at all. And then, I still don't know what to do. 😕

Edited by Akanksha0701 - 14 years ago

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Neetz

@.Jane..

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Akanksha0701

I really did, trust me. And most of it is because of the way you portray Pia. 😳

Ahaa, it's not 12 yet. We still got half an hour to go. =]

I wanted to write something, too. I needed to write. But everytime I opened a blank page, I couldn't figure out what to write. I wrote a half page about a girl's lost love. But then I erased it all, because I had this nagging feeling that this wasn't what I wanted to write about, at all. And then, I still don't know what to do. 😕

Same with me! I first wrote something as Pia's diary but then I erased it😆 Writing this one was a lot tougher than the previous one!

I like this OS because of the way I portrayed Kabir. For me, the KaPi moment is my favourite. I know I'm the writer, so I can't have favourite parts but its special to me because I've really been hurt by how they ruined Kabir today

P.S. Never mind. HNY in advance then because I should really get sleeping now! Hopefully, no one will read it till I properly proof read it tomorrow😆

Edited by Chill_Out - 14 years ago

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monsoonlove

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Posted: 14 years ago

wowww...i loved loved you OS more than the before one...

i really wish piya would confront abhay just like this in the show too..and make him realize tht wat he feels for her it love too...beautifully written...you portrayed piya in a very nice way..she is strong, kind and confident..loved it

HAPPY NEW YEAR to you too!!!! 😊

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Mona

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Posted: 14 years ago

OMG this was just so cute...so wait wat did happend to piya at the end??did she just fainted and why??? i mean she could have atleast heard him say i love u to her before fainting..lol..but seriously this was so emotional, i was so touched by the way u explained and pan down this whole secen it was just so cute....really well done...hope u write more OS soon....

❤️MONA