FF: Yeh Dil Hai Tumhara- Ch 22 & 23-Pg 38 31/05

Hi everyone!! First things first, Happy New year! May this year be filled with PraSha scenes. So this my attempt at a FF. The character sketch is up, and part one will be up either tonight ot tomorrow. Enjoy and please comment with feedback of wheather I shoud continue. Good or bad??? Anything.
Here it goes........( the storys quite different to the original Pyaar Ka Bandhan story line)

Character Sketch:


The Manhortra's

SUBASH MANHORTRA: Head of the family, a very loving man who has a very successful business which is soaring new heights everyday. He has one son who he adores, and knows he lacks nothing but wishes he was a bit more responsible. He has deprives him of nothing but wishes he settles down one day and starts to take things more seriously in life.
NANDITA MANHORTRA: A very loving mother who supports her husband in every decision he has made till date. She adores her son and protects him from any kind of danger. She sticks up for him, right or wrong. She can fight with the world for him.
DADI: She is a lively and bubbly person who keeps the Manhortra mansion alive. She beloved her 'laadla' is the reason of her existance, and along with her bahu she stands up for him. She is the one who mostly saves him from Subhash's anger.
SHASHANK MANHORTRA: A very chilled out dude, who has finished his studies and attends his fathers office, but doesn't really do anything. Very lazy and believes life should be lived with no tension. Adores his dadi and mother and becomes serious when it comes to them. Very flirty type of a guy, and has had a lot of girlfriends but believes in his true love which he knows he will find some day.
RONAK: He has been living with the Manhortra's since childhood as he was an orphan, he is best friends with Shashank, and their friendship is very unique. They treat each other like brothers although they have completly different personalities. He is very shy in front of girls, bit is much more responsbile. Works in the family business, and does Shashanks work for him as well as he is so lazy. Also saves him from a lot of trouble most ofthe time.

The Rai's

VIKRAM RAI: A big business man. He is a work-a-holic, but loves his family. Has a huge empire which he earned for his daughter and will put everything in her name whenthe time is right. He is searching for his son in law who loves his daughter for what she is and not for the money connected with her.
SONIA RAI: The wife of Vikram and has control over the whole house but is very loving. She loves he one and only daughter and is waiting till she finshes her education so he get her married.
DADI: Loving person who adores Suhani to bits and is very caring. She is full of life and is a very joyful person. She is like every dadi should be.
SUHANI RAI: A lovely positive girl, who is the laadli of the house. However does bot want to get married as soon as her mother wishes to do so. She believes in true love. Best friends with Araina, who treat each other like sisters. She likes Arainas didi, as she has no other elder sister she calls her didi.

The Das's

MILLIND DAS: Eldest of his sibling. Although they were left orphans at very young ages, he has made a living to support himself and his younger siblings. He has set up his own business which he runs along with help of Aziz when he is not busy. Very caring brother and provides for there every need possible.
PRATEEKSHA DAS: Second eldest. Very simple and straight forward girl. Recently finishes her studies and is working at the Manhortra industries through a contract from her brothers business. She loves her younger siblings who look up to her. She is vert proud of her Bahia who looked after them all.
AZIZ DAS: Third eldest. He is mixed personalitly. Very caring toward his family, but strong in the business when he helps out. he is nearly finished his studies, and his graduation is only left. Loves his didi, and can get upto a lot of trouble when him and Araina start to play pranks.
ARAINA DAS: Youngest of all siblings, and loved by all. She is called 'gudiaa' sweetly by her sibling at home sometimes. Attends college and a very bubbly girl. Loves her best friend Suhani, and is liked by the Rai family as well. Shares everything with her didi, along with suhani. She loves to do masti with her aziz Bahia when they play pranks on people.



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Chapter one- Page 2
Chapter two- Page 2
Chapter three- Page 3
Chapter four- Page 4
Chapter five- Page 4
Chapter six- Page 6
Chapter seven- Page 7
Chapter eight- Page 8
Chapter nine- Page 9
Chapter ten- Page 11
Chapter eleven- Page 12
Chapter Twelve- Page 14

Chapter Fourteen- Page 17
Chapter Fifteen- Page 19
Chapter Sixteen- Page 22



Chapter Nineteen-Page 32
Chapter Twenty- Page 34
Chapter Twenty-One-Page 37
Chapter Twenty-Two-Page 38
Chapter Twenty-Three-Page 38

can't wait to read this, good luck!

Its very interesting...all the siblings are together....

Like the concept, Do continue soon.

sounds interesting! plz continues (:

Hi everyone, thankyou for the comments on the character sketch. So here it goes, enjoy and leave you comments. Good or bad. Thanks.

Chapter One

'Good evening ladies and gentlemen. Welcome to this party, which I am sure you are enjoying as much as I am here. I am sure you all here are wondering what the reason for this party is, well the Manhortra Group of Industries, along with the Rai Group of Industries has merged with the newly formed, but highy successful Das Tecnology. I would like to call the C.E.O of bothe companies on stage here. So please give a warm welcome to Mr Vikram Rai and Mr Millind Das.' Subhash Manhortra said.
A huge round of applause could be heard, as both bosses made their way on stage.
Both C.E.O's gave there speech, and how grateful they were of this newly formed contract.
'Please continue to enjoy yourselfs, and I wish you have an wonderful evening. Thankyou.' Subhash ended.
As three men walked off stage, there was another round of applause, which eventually died out, and then the music was playing again, which had been summouned to be turne off for the speech.

'Didi, don't you just lobe the atmosphere here. It's lovely. I'm so happy for Millind Bahia today. It must have been his dream come true. After so many years, his business is becoming so successful' Araina said to her elder sister.
'Haan Araina, mein ajj baut kush hoon. Especially for Bahia.' replied Prateeksha.
Both sisters continued to enjoy themselves and talk away.
'Arainaaaaaaaaaaaaa!'
Both turned around to find Suhani running towards them. She eventually approached them and took both of them into a massive hug.
'Suhani, please muje chor.' Prateeksha said to her. Smilingly, she let go. Then both best friends started gossiping. Prateeksha slowly started to look around to see were her Aziz and Millind Bahia were, when something caught her eye. In another corner of the room, a Man was staring at her. Prateeksha felt uncomfortable and looked down and then away. Five to ten minutes later she looked up and saw him still peircing his gaze through her body.
'Pata nahin kaun hai, jo mujhe inte dere se deak ra ha.' Prateeksha getting highly uncomfortable started to walk away, but felt very alert. She turned around and know saw the man was following. She sped up slighly and started looking for her Bahia, the room was full of guests so it was becoming harder to find him. The man was still following her, and was getting closer.
Prateeksha had her head towards the man, so couldn't see were she was heading towards at this minute. She stepped a few more steps, and slowly turned her head, when she slightly tripped, and was ready to fall on the floor. Prateeksha had her eyes shut tight, waiting to touch the floor, but then realised she didnt. Opening her eyes, ever so slowly she found a pair of very light brown eyes with a hint of hazel on them staring down at her. Unintentially she was looking eight back into them. A few minutes had passed with both in the same position, staring into each others eyes. Finally, her saviour broke the gaze and spoke.
'Are you ok?' hearing no reply he tried again.'App teek hain' Still no reply, and the person was confused.
'Weird, yeh pagal hai, nahin English bolte hain',nahin Hindi. Ab pata nahin kaunse language bolte hai. Hain' mein French try karts hoon' he thought to himself.
'Cava?(How are you, in French)' he asked. Know there was a confused look on Prateeksha's face as she didnt understand what he just said. Then it came to her how she didn't reply the first two times, so he was trying to communicate to her in another language. This made her laugh.
'Abb yeh hasre kyon hai, kitne weird people mummy aur papa ne apne party mein bale' he thought to himself. Finally Prateeksha spoke up.
'i'm sorry for bumping into you. I'm fine. Urmm mein teek hoon' The young man replied.'Are you sure?'
'yes I'm sure. Thankyou for asking'
'Ok' he replied then let go of her. Prateeksha let out little shreik and she fell to floor. She wad shocked at why he did that.
'App ne aise kyon kiya?' she asked.
'That was for laughing at me, 'abb hath dijyee' he said holding out his hand. Prateeksha still unhappy put het hand in his and was about to get up when she decided to get her own back, and pulled him down. Know she started laughing even harder, as the man was know also sitting on the floor.
'I hope you understood why you should never mess with a girl' saying that she got up, and walked off in search of her siblings, forgetting all about the stalking man.
On the floor the man slowly got up and spoke to himself.
'Yeh kaun tee? Jo be hoon, isne Shashank Manhortra pein hasse, ab agge agge dekho mein kya karta hoon' he smiled to himself and also walked off in search of his friend.

Chapter Two....... Urm, Shanshank's planing, more characters introduced, and maybe a bit of the stalker guy.

Hey Love_angel....

The FF is simply awesome....I loved the way you started the story...you look like a professional...😊

great FF plzz continue soon

Hey love angel 😊😊