~Bheegi Bheegi Si Yaadien~PSFF Pt.3:Pg6 12/28 NEW! - Page 3

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Nice ff! Love the bond they share between them. Do continue soon.
Cheers Priya
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: *angel94*

That was absoluety Brilliant! Hey Angel ! Thanks a lot for the compliment.

I loved how he was able to distinguish between the rain and her tears..Thanks for liking it. I felt the touchness while I was writing it as well . And how he cheered her up at the end. Wasn't that cute?
Same with Prateeksha, how she just felt his presence. Yep! Aag dono taraf se lagi haišŸ˜†.
Nice chapter, please do continue asap. Thanks and I will continue as soon as possible.
Anjali Palchin

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Posted: 15 years ago
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RECAP:

"Happy. Now we're equal." He said and came to sit next to her. They were both waiting for someone to at least come. In a distance, a light flashed and they both got up. The car came closer and closer. Then they realized that it was a police car. Thank God! No they would be able to get home.

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Part 2

It was around one o' clock when they both reached home. They had instantly decided to change their wet clothes before they catch a cold.

After changing into sweatpants and a comfy, blue sweatshirt, he came out of his room and went into the living room. He settled down on the couch and turned on the TV. He was waiting for her to come out. She always came out to say "Goodnight" to him. As he flipped through the channels at 1:30 in the morning, he heard her footsteps come towards him. Only he knew how he was resisting her. When he saw her drench in the rain, he felt his heart tingle. She looked so beautiful that it took his breath away.

After changing her wet churidar, she slipped into her magenta colored, silk gown. Then she headed towards his room to tell him "Goodnight." She always did. And besides, she always wants to see his face before she goes to sleep. But when she heard the TV on in the living room, she went downstairs to see what her unpredictable husband was up to.

Seeing her come downstairs, his heart started to race and his breath got caught. She looked stunning even in the simple gown. Her wet hair and glowing face gave her an angelic look. But as she approached him, he erased the loving look and greeted her with a caring smile.

"So? Kaunsi movie dekhni hai?" He asked her and she sat besides him.

"Movie? Who bhi raat ke almost do baje?" She couldn't believe him. Wasn't he sleepy.

"Arre, so what? That was the most boring party that I have ever been to. And it's Saturday. That means movie day. Please bolo naa. Kaunsi movie?" He was pleading to her like a little toddler asking for a cookie.

She laughed at his funny look.

"Lekin inti raat?" She tried to explain to him that it was very late.

"Mai tumhare liye khud coffee banaoga. Abb please haa keh do naa. Please Kajal." He pouted and she knew that she wouldn't be able to disappoint her husband.

"Tum coffee banaoge? Coffee banana atti hai?" She knew that when it came to the kitchen, the most he could do was pour water into a glass. That's it.

"Of course atti hai. Mai'.Mai abhi banake deta hu." Yep. He was stuck now. How was he going to make coffee? He had never even stepped into the kitchen.

"Shashank, tum sach me jaante ho?" She was not sure if she heard him right.

"Tum behtho mai abhi lata hu!" He patted her cheek and headed towards the kitchen.

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Hey Guys! Thanks a lot to all the people who read my Fanfic. It really means a lot that you took the time to appreciate my work. I know that this part was short, but I am working on my other FF's so it was hard to write a long update. Anyways, I hope I didn't disappoint you all with this part. PLease do leave your comments on how it was. Take care and Love YA!

Palchin

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Palchin

That was an awesome second part, can't wait to see Shaskank making coffee, though it was short but I do understand!

Cont soon!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey palchin 😃
i am a new reader to your ff
i love the bonding between prateeksha and shashank 😊
great parts šŸ‘šŸ‘
you write so well
love Mariam xx
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Posted: 15 years ago
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good start to this FF sweety please do continue soon & pm me

Lekha
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey palchin.. jus caught up with ur FF.. it is very nice.. Wow Shanky n Prats are married.. cant wait to c him prepare coffee.. do continue soon and plzz do pm me whn u update...
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Posted: 15 years ago
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great start want to read more really interesting
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Awesome....it was so sweet..plz continue soon...waiting for it..
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey nice ff
plz add me to ur pm list

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