Till death do us apart - SS - Chapter 3 page 1 - Page 4

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Chapter 3 is ready. Once you all read this. I will send that link too.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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congratulation for the new story it's amazing so excited to next part


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Posted: 7 years ago
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I love all the chapters I have read.I love how aarti's relationship with Yash started and pakal's resistance will bring them closer.And please with a cherry send a pm of the next part
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Sorry Katie, I only just managed to read the update. If only life could be seen as a child, innocent and carefree #sigh. Children are very simple and honest, they respond to affection, and they are more resilient to calamity than adults. Although Payal was affected by her father's death, she is still able to accept Yash as her dad because then she will have a dad just like her friends who will do things for her and with her, enriching her little world. Yash who due to his position must be surrounded by dubious character is easily charmed by Payal's simple outlook, unwittingly he begins to lower his haughty guard just a little, and once this princess steals his heart, he will be a goner and he might do everything to prevent her little world from shattering...

Nice going Katie 😃
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Chapter 3 updated.
will reply for your comments later.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Beautiful update my sweet, love the bond between yash and payal, they are father and daughter, I just hope yash finds out about Aarti's illness maybe he might help in saving her...can't wait for the next update
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Lovely update,I love Yash and Payal's relationship which has progressed so much,they are father and daughter in true sense.I don't know why Aarti is worried about their closiness because Payal is getting the fatherly love which she has been yearning for after Dev passed away,even though it will be heart wrenching for Payal after the separation.At the beginning of the story I didn't know Yash has a born for carring for someone except his grandma,It really took me by surprised that he cared for Aarti even reprimanded her when she went to office after Yash told her not to.Loved chapter three and eagerly waiting for chapter 4
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Thanks Kate for posting the chapter here 😊
Very nice looking forward to dadi ma's entry 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Nice update... Waiting for Dadi ma's entry n Twist... Update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
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The truth shall set you free Aarti but no still hiding her disease.
Hard to keep her distance when Yash is being sweet , especially with Payal. The call me Yash and not sir argument was funny, well done Yash😆. Stubborn Aarthi, she should not tempt fate and over do it. I kind of agree with Yash and his anger, she was still weak.
Nice chapter
Edited by sass8 - 7 years ago

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