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sara1990

@sara1990

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

#21

Interesting concept. Lets see whether Cutie Pie Payal accept Yash as her father. Its gonna be fun reading the next update. I wonder how Dadi gonna react once she finds out about Payal.

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caller123

@caller123

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Posted: 7 years ago

#22

Thanks all.

Next update will be in the blog. Those who commented will get the PW and link to the next chapter.

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sass8

@sass8

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Posted: 7 years ago

#23

Well Payal seems to have come to term with the marriage. 😊

Aarti is trying to protect her baby so she doesn't remain alone and it looks like Yash is taken by his sudden family especially now that Palak has accepted him. All she needed was to be reassured about her new papa not leaving like Dev-papa. It makes me sad about Aarti, I hope she tell Yash or she can be healed

Sweet chapter

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lassekool

@lassekool

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Posted: 7 years ago

#24

I like the story and looking forward to reading more. I hope that the doctors will be able to remove the tumour, the separation maybe too much for Payal or will Yash be able to really be her Papa in the event something happens to Aarti. I will wait for the answers.

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Divya333

@Divya333

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#25

Nice update... Waiting for Arya's love story...waiting for next update

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saf24

@saf24

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Posted: 7 years ago

#26

Superb update for part two. Children are so innocent that until Aarti could clarify what exactly Yash would be to her, she wouldn't budge to accept him. I liked that Yash put some effort into figuring ways in which he could spend more time and get to know her as well. Fantastic job as always.

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bongalisoo

@bongalisoo

Explorer

Posted: 7 years ago

#27

Nice update so payal excepted yash and aarya are married , hope yash find out about aarti's cancer so maybe he can help ,update soon

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zuby

@zuby87

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Posted: 7 years ago

#28

Thanks for the link dear, so payal is warming up to the idea of Yash being her father, and yash is starting to develop fatherly feelings for her...I just hope aarti is ok, as for Yash he will soon find out that aarti is sick...update next chapter soon dear

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Sharlene1410

@Sharlene1410

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Posted: 7 years ago

#29

Thanks Kate for the link and PW 😊

I love Payal her sweet innocence. Yash will fall for this sweet child and accept her in his life. Poor Aarti the tumor is taking it's toll on her I wonder if Yash will find out about it.