Till death do us apart - SS - Chapter 3 page 1 - Page 2

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Superbly amazing story dear, I love the beginning, and now I can't wait for all the beautiful chapters that are to follow.

Update soon and leave a pm whenever you can
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: BusiMusi

Awesome story am loving it. Please send pm so you can get more likes.

Thank you dear.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tessaloni

very interesting concept Katie 😃. Both see a very simple solution to their problems, so for them it's just a means to an end. But their very first hurdle is in the form of Payal. (the one you showed is very cute by the way, but my association with the name will always be PV's little Payal so it's her I imagine whilst reading). Children have an honest heart and don't qualm about calling a spade, a spade. Payal will not just let anyone claim her father's place whatsoever, she will only accept him when she senses that his care for her is genuine. it certainly will not be easy to sway her, and somehow it won't speak well of his character if his affection for such an angel is not genuine.
Thank you my dear Tessi. Yes they were hurry to find solutions for their problems and they went for it. Yash didn't mind anything s for him this Marriage will last only one month at the other hand Aarthi has only 40 days. She doesn't know what will happen to her after that. So both found the best solution for them was this contract marriage.

The first hurdle they have to face was Payal. It will be difficult as she is 4 years old. ( You can imagine PV Payal. I didn't take as she was not so small. It's okk dear) Even Payal accept him as papa she will be heart broken if Maan discontinue this marriage after one month. We'll see what happens.😉
It's also heartbreaking that Aarti has such a grim prognosis 😭. it must be devastating to think that she may not be around to see her baby grow up, or take care of her, or to know that she may have the same struggles Aarti had when growing up. a mother can sacrifice anything for her children, and so Aarti here is doing the same for her child. making a deal with the devil to secure her future.
Yes She sacrificing the little days she has to live because of Payal. But Mothers are like that. Aren't they? They can sacrifice anything for their kids.


but as I observed before things will not be so straight forward, this means to an end will not be without entanglements! and I am excited to see the web you've already started to weave around them. it will even be interesting if Aarti does lose her memory after the operation, and Yash by then having falling in love with her, and little Payal will have to keep to the vows he is entering into without much thought right now. and the man that did not want marriage will actually realize it's exactly what he wanted.
Hmm. We'll see what will happen in the future. I can't disclose anything now. But you have to wait.😉
oopsy, I am getting ahead of myself here! sorry Katie 😆 but yes, excited to read more!
Will try to give regular updates and finish this soon dear. So you don't have to wait long.

Edited by caller123 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome Katie! 😃 you do know that this is the AarYa version right? only, you wrote Maan and Geet in your response to me 😆
Edited by Tessaloni - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Tessaloni

Awesome Katie! 😃 you do know that this is the AarYa version right? only, you wrote Maan and Geet in your response to me 😆

Oops sorry. Corrected here.😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hi, Kate, I am loving this story so far 😊 I hope Payal accepts Yash soon can't wait to meet dadima 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Congrats on the new SS. Liking the start of the story. Both Yash and Aarti are in a fix so I like that they were able to figure a way out of their dilemmas. Payal is going to be the main obstacle in their arrangement and I look forward to seeing how things work out for them. Fantastic job as always.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Oh, I so like the premise of this story, great start, they both think they can plan this marriage and end it like nothing would have happened, well at least for Yash. He is so clinical about the entire affair 😕 and really fooling Dadima, not good man.
Poor Aarti, she is trying to save her daughter future but how will it work if they only agree for one month 😲. Anyway it doesn't look like it's going to be easy with Payal from her reaction. I hope she get thru the surgery fine.

Please, please more soon😊
ps: will you complete Falling in Love by chance?
Edited by sass8 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey fabulous concept! Prologue and first chapter are awesome. Poor Aarti, she said yes to marriage with Yash only to secure the future of her daughter. Oh my god, Payal is not ready to make Yash Papa. Keep going. Loved it.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Wonderfull story plz continue soon

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