AarYa OS: Ineluctable - Page 2

Once again you handled a very sensitive subject very beautifully. Love conquers all and you showed that Yash's true love was Arti's lifeline. Through his love they became a loving and happy family. Poor Arti had to so much heartache and suffering at the hand of the society. No wonder she felt she would trap Yash if she did not let him go. Great OS.

Wow.an amazing story of unrelenting love.he loved her and fought for her against all odds.interesting,keep it up.thanks for the pm.

Tess I know that I had promised to comment on the Horror OS tonight but something made me remember this OS and I had to comment on it first. I'll try to give my comments on the other one tomorrow.

Originally posted by: lovely_nikki

Tess I know that I had promised to comment on the Horror OS tonight but something made me remember this OS and I had to comment on it first. I'll try to give my comments on the other one tomorrow.

What I have to say may not be the comment that you would have expected but I need to say it.

Actually I wanted to comment before but I was so overwhelmed that I couldn't do it and then later I kept forgetting it, until tonight.

You see I watch "America's Got Talent!". During auditions round there was this one contestant. One would not be able to look at her face without feeling pity for her. She told her story that she was in an plane crash and was one of the two survivors. Her body was... well I have no words to describe her.

She said she was in so much pain and had to go through hundreds of surgeries before she could survive and leave again.

I applaud her for her strength⭐️.

She made me remember Jhil's SS, "Raat Ke Humsafar!" Where Aarti was a victim acid attack. Here this Aarti is in a wheelchair. Also Palak was left in the orphanage because she was born with a limp. I mean seriously? Yes it's true that life would have become difficult for Palak when she grew up, but leaving her in the orphanage won't make her life but ruin it further.

In RKH and in here both Aarti's had to face so much in life.

It made me wonder why do people pity them? I mean more then pity they need encouragement and support and needs to be praised for their bravery. For I personally feel that these people are more stronger and braver than any normal human being.

In this story you have also shown that Aarti is a very strong person who can stand on her own despite being in a wheelchair. I applaud you for this my friend⭐️

It breaks my heart when we think of children like Palak who are abandoned by their own parents just because they were born as a girl or some sort of physical disorder or disability.

Aarti and Palak were lucky that Yash was in her life who gave her and Palak the happiness that they both deserved. But then it also makes me wonder if all people with some kind of disabilities are this lucky?

We as a writer can show happy endings but not everyone gets a happy ending in their lives.

There is so much I want to say and I can say but I think I better stop here before I end up writing an whole OS on this topic.

Sorry for ranting like this. But when I saw that woman again tonight in AGT (America's Got Talent) I immediately remembered this OS and Jhil's RKH. And I had to come and comment tonight,

I went through this story once again before commenting. And I want to Thank You from the bottom of my heart for giving us this story. Bless you sweetie❤️

well this was not so much a comment on the OS as it was your thoughts or in your own words "rant" on the topic as a whole. Still I'm glad it gave you an avenue to channel your thoughts on the struggles faced in such situations.

And no, not everyone facing such struggles have such fairytale like endings. In reality it's so much worse. I don't even know if my own little sister who is mostly dependent on others will ever find her own Yash 😭, but all one can do is have faith, and as loved ones try to encourage them as much as we can.

My Aarti is lucky in that she had loving parents who committed themselves to giving her as normal a life as they could. They helped her develop her strengths and not be a victim. Yash featured to let her know that she was not only strong, but a desirable woman who a man could love and did. And whilst Palak was luckier than most children in such situations; for Aarti she served as the means to be vulnerable to Yash and accept her feelings for him. Just as Palak needed love and acceptance, so did she... Well that's what I tried showing anyway. Thaaankuuu for commenting Alien ji 😃

P.S. Why not write a story on the topic? I know you will do great!

Originally posted by: VICKY126

Wow.an amazing story of unrelenting love.he loved her and fought for her against all odds.interesting,keep it up.thanks for the pm.

thanks Vicky dear 😃 yes, Yash was relentless in his pursuit because she was worth it...

Originally posted by: Fandu

Once again you handled a very sensitive subject very beautifully. Love conquers all and you showed that Yash's true love was Arti's lifeline. Through his love they became a loving and happy family. Poor Arti had to so much heartache and suffering at the hand of the society. No wonder she felt she would trap Yash if she did not let him go. Great OS.

thank you Fandu 😃 yes society is mostly unkind in such situations even when they don't intend to be. Even the piteous looks hurt the person facing such. Aarti naturally was a victim of that and conditioned herself into believing that love was not meant for her. Thankfully Yash showed her that it was, and that she could be fully happy too.

Originally posted by: bongalisoo

Awww what a beautiful love story, Yash never gave up on Aarti and in the end everyone is so abundantly happy, amazing Os Tessa

thank you Lisoo 😃 yes love finally conquered it all!

Originally posted by: cuteariya

Very emotional heart touching OS

Poor aarti was paralyzed since she was born but also it was miracles she & her mom alive

She had really horrible experiences as those so called people used to taunt her for her inability

But her parents were so loving caring & always support her

Awe yash love for aarti was so pure & unconditional

He never leave her even when she ignore him as she didn't want him to be trapped with her

I seriously hate when yash mom said all those painful words to aarti so disgusting

I understood as mother she was concern abt her son but that doesn't mean she should hurt other feeling

Love aarya bonding with palak she changed aarti decision abt yash

Wow yash adopted palak as he knew aarti wanted palak as her daughter

Finally aarti & palak got love accepted by her in laws

It was roller coaster ride for aarti as her entire life was loner but with yash she got her fairytale with palak & twins

thaaankuuu Manita dear 😃 I really love your knack for summarizing a story so beautifully. And here also you did it so brilliantly and commented on everything I wanted to show!

Originally posted by: ksen

amazing os

beautifully written

loved it

thanks for the pm

thanks Ksen dear 😃 happy to know you loved it.

Originally posted by: premap

An emotional OS which captures your attention and heart completely ! Thanks. Lovely concept.

awww thanks a lot for the sweet comment Premap dear! 😃