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Tessaloni

@Tessaloni

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Posted: 8 years ago

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sass8

@sass8

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Posted: 8 years ago

It started with a sacrificial gesture and ended with a stronger love. This was one determine man to get his love. From the moment he met her, he was under her spell. And the plan was so simple yet effective, how could she resist both Palak and Yash pleadings.

I really like the first part where you describe Aarti life and struggles. It share light to the daily effort and /or pain she go throught😕 and the considerable effort she had to make everyday. So its understandable that her insecurities got the better of her , life is hard when one is handicap and she thought she was protecting him and herself from further hurt , when in reality she can't believe in their love and was waiting to wake up from the dream. So in a way she tested him by pushing him away. And she had a case with Yash parents not accepting her and in a way representing society view on handicap and the that only a healthy person is valuable. Life can be cruel. This was a also a wake up call for Yash, who naively thought their relation would be accepted but at least he saw beyond her words and that it was his turn to step up and fight for them if he truly loves her.

Gosh, I cringed at her saying "the crippled is bearing your son child", but the talk was necessary. It take time to overcome society prejudices but Yash parents manage to realize that their son happiness was more important than wanted the perfect bahu. That's said am sure they get will always looks and jugments from outsider cause life is hard.

Well done 👏, on conveying handicap struggles in a very sensitive way.

ps: returning the favor on c/p, 😉

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Ankita

@AisiDeewangi

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Posted: 8 years ago

awesome od dear
loved itt so much
very well written

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Mariam

@Themmy

Voyager

Posted: 8 years ago

Awww that was so deep

Am in tears right now😭

aarti's love for yash was unconditional, she actually wants him to be happy if not with her, then with someone else, she expected nothing in return not even her own happiness and yash loved her selflessly, people tend to think of a crippled person as an outcast an alien you called it, he loved her without even thinking of the critics' from his parent or the society though Gayathri's insult was just too out-of-human andi

palak was just a little example of aarti and reminds her of her self, its a good thing palak brought them together again, "i will only hug/kiss you if you will decide to be my mommy"😭

Gayathri and her husband finally accepted aarti for who she is and what they thought wouldn't happen did happen she became the mother of twins for crying out loud

nice one loni AMAZING 👏

p.s.seriously i was about to check the dictionary for that word till i saw your note

ok let me cry in one side😭

i have a question, it may sound stupid though but it was confusing was aarti born crippled😕

sorry i will soon unres the serial and reality, i tried doing it on Thursday bit IF cleared it, it was so frustrating i just closed the page

Edited by Themmy - 8 years ago

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premap

@premap

Dazzler

Posted: 8 years ago

An emotional OS which captures your attention and heart completely ! Thanks. Lovely concept.

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Tessaloni

@Tessaloni

Sparkler

Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Themmy
Awww that was so deep
Am in tears right now😭
aarti's love for yash was unconditional, she actually wants him to be happy if not with her, then with someone else, she expected nothing in return not even her own happiness and yash loved her selflessly, people tend to think of a crippled person as an outcast an alien you called it, he loved her without even thinking of the critics' from his parent or the society though Gayathri's insult was just too out-of-human andi
palak was just a little example of aarti and reminds her of her self, its a good thing palak brought them together again, "i will only hug/kiss you if you will decide to be my mommy"😭
Gayathri and her husband finally accepted aarti for who she is and what they thought wouldn't happen did happen she became the mother of twins for crying out loud
nice one loni AMAZING 👏
p.s.seriously i was about to check the dictionary for that word till i saw your note

ok let me cry in one sides😭
i have a question, it may sound stupid though but it was confusing was aarti born crippled😕

aww sorry for the tears Them-Them, here is a 🤗 for you! to answer your question, yes dear Aarti was born crippled.