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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: saf24

Beautiful OS. I liked that Aarti took a stand and the way Yash was able to realise just how much his actions affected her. Also loved his efforts and his confession. Great job as always. Loved it.


Thank you Saf.
Yes she need to take the stand because the limit has crossed already.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shashi1984

Superb OS, Jhil. Loved the way Yash win her heart again. You have beautifully showed the pain and sufferings Aarti go through after Yash's abnormal behavior. And she had miscarriage too. Loved the way Vidhi helped Yash in bringing Aarti back to home.

Congrats B-onesie for changing color and becoming Dazzler 👍🏼


It feLtd so good to see your comments after a long time Sashimi. . Thank you 🤗
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: lassekool

Loved this version of the story.

A befitting OS for our dazzling Miss B.



Thank you lasses 😛
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Posted: 8 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: Fandu

Lovely OS. Thank you Jhily for this fabulous piece of writing.
Bee congratulations on turning Dazzler. Continue to dazzle us with your wonderful writings. Thank you.


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